Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Hilary Melton-Butcher and can be found here on this blog.
This week's words/prompts are:
1.sculpture 2.amendment 3.timeline 4.bog 5.castle
and/or:
1.sword 2.crew 3.buffalo 4.forest 5.variation
Here is my story:
“What’s this then?”
Uncle Dennis asked, picking up an entry flyer from the table, “Competition for
Sandcastles,” don’t we already have one of these?” “We do,” said Mary, “and the
kids have entered, but this is new with an amendment to the timeline for the
buses.” “I suppose you’ve made it a family affair and I will have to come
along,” grumped Uncle Dennis. “You know I hate sand in my shoes and it seems a
long way to go to watch kids upend a few buckets of sand and decorate them.”
A collective gasp from
the kids was heard and Simon said, “it’s not like that anymore Uncle, so many
castles now are truly more like sculptures and there is quite a lot of
variation in styles.” He quickly googled for some images to show him and Dennis
was impressed, “but I still don’t like the idea of sand in my shoes, and not
between my bare toes either.” “I’ll pack you a pair of rubber boots” said Mary.
“How about I stay home
and dig over that new vegetable patch instead? It’s a real bog since that heavy
rain last week, I can add some sand and compost to it.” “You really don’t want
to go?” Dennis just looked at her and she nodded. There was a memory there that
Dennis refused to share, he didn’t want the kids to know about it.
“Okay crew,” she said, “Uncle
Dennis won’t be coming, so there will be room for more buckets and spades. I
suggest you all get your equipment ready for loading and remember nothing too
big, we will be on a bus for most of the trip.” Four kids scattered with the two
boys heading for the garage and the two girls for the big cabinet on the porch
that held all the outdoor things. The baby couldn’t decide which pair to follow
on his newly discovered feet so plopped himself down beside Dennis, who scooped
him into his lap.
“I’ll keep Matty home
with me if that’s okay with you,” said Dennis. “We can visit Roger in the
hospital, he’s out of intensive care now, right?” “Yes he is,” said Mary, “but
don’t let Matty jump on the bed, hold him while he sits next to Roger, he’d
like to see his Daddy again and show off his new walking skills too.”
“And why don’t I order
dinner for when you all get home? Get in some burgers, a few orders of Buffalo
wings; you won’t want to be cooking after all the excitement. But take photos
for me please?” “That’s a great idea,” said Mary and promised to charge the
camera battery right away. The boys came back inside with assorted building
supplies and a pair of Star Wars light sabres which they were having a sword
fight with.
Dennis refereed that
while Mary set the battery in the charger, then handed over Matty to her and
helped the two younger girls stack buckets inside each other for easier
transportation. Simon’s gear was much more sophisticated, with a water spray
bottle to keep his sand damp and assorted shaping blades and combs. Tomorrow he would build the best castle ever!
He hoped that Roger
would soon be well enough to come home, he enjoyed being here and helping his
sister, but longed for the solace of his forest hideaway.



The wordplay and the flow of the story are fantastic so real and full of life! I absolutely love stories like these.
ReplyDeleteMary and Chris; thnak you.
DeleteGood story R, and they seem excited to build their sandcastle and getting their equipment ready and in working order.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; they are hoping to one day win first prize in their age groups.
DeleteA wonderful story and weee, I saw a sand-castle in Hillarys Boat Harbour, Perth, that was a big "WOW"! And just yesterday I got a water spray bottle in form of a dinosaur for my planting project.
ReplyDeleteIris; a dinosaur spray bottle! That will be fun to use.
DeleteMuito linda tua história e lindos são os castelos, esculturas de areia!
ReplyDeleteGostei muito!
beijos, tudo de bom,chica
chica; thank you.
DeleteLovely story. Sand sculptures are quite amazing. I 'm wondering what Dennis' secret sorrow is, though.
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you, sand sculptures are amazing, I have seen some on TV news years ago and googled for online pictures too. I don't know if they still have sandcastle competitions anymore. I'll have to work on Dennis's secret sorrow, Mary knows but he doesn't want to upset the kids and spoil the beach for them.
Deletecute story, the sand castles are very pretty ! It's such a long time ago that I built little sandcastles with my son !
ReplyDeleteIngrid; thank you, it's been more than twenty years since I last built a sandcastle.
DeleteI like sand castles though I have never actually builded one. Maybe Denni's memory was lost someone while building sand castles at the beach? Good use of the prompts.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
lissa; I haven't built many sandcastles in my life, but it is fun. Dennis's memory does include losing someone.
DeleteI seen in photos, some pretty cool sand art.
ReplyDeleteDora; I have seen some really fabulous sand structures online via google images.
DeleteSuch a fun read!
ReplyDeleteI could picture the kids rushing about with their buckets and sabres, full of enthusiasm.
The mix of castles, sculptures, and family chatter made me smile all the way through.
Veronica Lee; thank you. I do like writing family stories.
DeleteELSIE What sculpture are you working on right now?
ReplyDeleteSEAN JEATING It's a golden statue of Donald Trump but he commanded me to make an amendment.
ELSIE What was wrong with it?
SEAN JEATING He judged that I made the hands much too small. Now the timeline to the unveiling ceremony is rather tight.
ELSIE I wouldn't erect that statue in a bog!
SEAN JEATING Actually it is going to stand in front of Lews Castle on The Isle of Lewis.
ELSIE Why there?
SEAN JEATING It's where his late mother Mary MacLeod was from. Do you want to see a photo of the maquette?
ELSIE Yes please darling...Oh, why is Trump holding a sword? And I see you have given him a crew cut!
SEAN JEATING His staffer says the sword is to represent Trump's sharp mind and his ability to end wars. I wanted him riding a golden buffalo through a pine forest but they said 'No way!' to that.
ELSIE I wish to create some variation in this conversation honeypie. Would you like to come back to my place? Don't worry! You won't need your pyjamas!
SEAN JEATING Okay. But please be gentle with me Elsie!
Yorkshire Pudding; 🤣🤣very funny. I'm not sure I agree about the "no pyjamas" thing, is he going to borrow mine or sit around naked as we sip tea?
DeleteDon't do pyjamas, anway. Do you in Yorkshire? Pyjamas are for wimps.
DeleteHowever, you managed to – öchött ... – amuse me, Mr. Pudding, sir!
The peace of the night.
Quan era petita en feia molts de castells a la sorra, a una platja preciosa que és a Sóller.
ReplyDeleteUn relat magnífic i bon ús de les paraules.
Paula; thank you. I also built castles as a child, but they weren't very good.
DeleteI have to agree, this is a wonderful story.
ReplyDeleteDVArtist; thank you, it was fun to write.
DeleteI'm exhausted from the preparations, before the trip has even begun! Not being a beach person, I would also have begged to stay home, no matter what other "chores" it might involve.
ReplyDeleteVal; the kids did all the preparations, all the running around collecting the gear and loading the car. They know if they don't they won't be going! I LOVE the beach as does my brother, so I'm quite disappointed that none of my kids are fans, most hate the sand in their clothes and shoes and for swimming prefer a pool where there would be no sharks or jellyfish, and no seagulls to swoop down and pinch their fish and chips.
DeleteNice story well written as always cozy and blamy for my soul. It reminds me of the sand sculptures we use to go and see. It'll soon be time for this again. Thanks for the jogging of my memory.
ReplyDelete"blamy" please read "balmy"
DeleteCharlotte; thank you. I remember seeing amazing sand sculptures on the TV news, back when competitions were held. There is so much talent out there.
DeleteI have seen TV sand castle creations and marvel at them. Great stories.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; they are fabulous aren't they? Thank you.
DeleteYou know what, River? I wanna read more about these characters. Love that he'll order food for them when they get back, too. Another well-told story. Thanks for writing it.
ReplyDeleteHere is my late take on June 3:
ReplyDeleteWhen Will and Bobbie got a letter informing them that they had been accepted to be part of “Life in a Castle” for 6 months to learn and manage the reality of life in a castle, well, they were beyond excited.
Apparently, they had skills that would prove useful for the care of a huge old castle in Ludlum, England. Will had won Forged in Fire episode where he won $10,000 for making an outstanding sword.
Bobbie’s special skill was not really evident. His dad owned a company that installed septic systems for excrement disposal. On his dad’s advice, Bobbie wrote that he was a manager of “Septic System R Us”.
They found themselves in the bailey with a large crew surrounded by forests leading to bog land, a variation of villages and fields around them. Will was led to the stables where he would prove his skills making metal objects. No problem, he did just fine.
Bobbie, on the other hand, was take to the part of the Castle called the “garderobe”. He thought he would be a guard of a robe, some sort of clothing. He strutted proudly to the area, where his skills could be used.
When the group reached the side where the “garderobe” was, the guide explained what it was. Bobbie looked up at the wall on the side of the castle part where the occupants used the garderobe as a toilet and deposited excrement to fall all at the bottom of the wall. Workers would then shovel the poop into a wagon to take it to the fields beyond.
Bobbie shook his head, sighing heavily, looking at a pile of excrement “Poop follows me wherever I go. Dad would be so proud.”
What is a garderobe? Look here: https://share.google/2rGf5I3qoK0TRZg1b