Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by ME and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.bowed 2.snoring 3.barefoot 4.tears 5.memory 6. swamped
and/or:
1.taped 2.cream 3.moonlit 4.beach 5.soft 6.salty
Here is my story:
She sat on the edge of her bed, slightly bowed, hair hanging long and wavy, wishing she felt sleepy. She had finished her book and would have to wait until tomorrow for another one. They always send us to bed too early, she thought. They had schedules to keep and some were already snoring in the tv room anyway.
There was music playing softly
nearby, a radio at the nurses station and she wondered how it was possible to
be this old while inside she still danced and danced whenever she heard music. Her
bed was lower than the others, her daughter had demanded it be so. “If mum can
get her feet on the floor then she can get into and out of bed by herself, her
independence should be kept as long as possible.”
She glanced at the
bedside table where her new teeth smiled at her from inside the water glass
where they lived each night. She smiled back at them, thinking they looked
happy, the wide smile of pink plastic gums with white plastic teeth, though it
wasn’t plastic they were made from. Some fancy modern technique had produced
them.
Her thoughts turned to
this week’s outing; to her joy, the sign up sheet had read “Elliott’s Beach”
and she quickly added her name to the list, desperate for one more walk along
the water’s edge, barefoot of course, so the rippling wavelets could tickle her
toes. She would wear her steel blue dress, the thin fabric would be cool and
breezy against her skin. It was too loose now, but that was okay, everything
was too loose now, muscles and skin hanging where once they had been plump and
firm.
She didn’t mind the
wrinkles, feeling privileged to have lived this long when so many hadn’t. A
memory came, she and her sisters splashing about and trying to stay upright as
each successive wave swamped them again and again. They had laughed until tears
fell, salty tears to land in the salty sea. Then, suddenly ravenous, racing
across the sand to the rickety table where Mum and Dad had set out paper
wrapped parcels of fish and chips, seagulls circling overhead, hoping for a
stray chip.
The memory faded away. Her birthday was coming soon, there would be cake and balloons in the dining room, she had requested just one candle, saying to Nurse Sharon that blowing out ninety of them might be too much effort. Her family would come, there were so many of them now, it was getting hard to keep track without looking at the list taped to her mirror.
Even the great grandchildren now had babies of their
own. They would bring gifts of chocolates to be shared later as they all
watched TV, soft centered fillings of strawberry cream, peppermint, and orange
cream, maybe even a few Turkish delight. The soft ones were best now, they
could melt in the mouths without any need for chewing.
Random thoughts of
birthdays past flitted in and out as she began to yawn. Sleepy at last she drew
her feet up into the sheets and pulled the covers up as she lay against the
pillow. Nurse Evelyn poked her head around the door jamb, “ready for lights out?”
She flipped the switch, bringing soft darkness to the now moonlit room. “I will
take the little redheads for one last beach trip before I give them to Helen,”
she thought as she fell asleep.
It's been ages since I been barefooted.
ReplyDeleteDora; it has been a long time for me too.
DeleteQue linda história e as ruivinhas devem adorar passear...beijos, chica
ReplyDeletechica; thank you, the "little redheads" are four small plastic dolls all with redhair.
DeleteWhat a lovely story. I hope she does get to walk on the shore at the beach.
ReplyDeleteKathy G; thank you, she does get to walk on the beach.
DeleteThis is a beautiful story. Although, as Grandma says, if the bed or chair is too low, you can’t get out of it because you can’t get enough leverage with your arms to help push you up.
ReplyDeleteMessymimi; that is also true, so the bed in this story is just above knee height, as mine is, so she can sit with her feet comfortably on the floor and there is a sturdy bedside chest to hold on to when getting up or down. I mostly still use calf and thigh muscles to rise from sitting, I place my feet flat and push. I am very glad that I can still do this at 74.
DeleteSweet story. Barefoot is best, more so on the beach. Is this a future you?
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you. This could be a future me, but I don't see myself in a nursing home. I do hope to live to be 90 though, and more if possible.
DeleteI agree on both accounts. It was the redheads that made me think so.
DeleteThis was sweet. Let's hope all us get to be that age and still have happy things to look forward to.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
lissa; thank you. I do hope we all get to be old enough to have lots of memores to look back on.
DeleteTener salud suficiente para poder valerse por una misma, eso es lo único que deseo, a cualquier edad.
ReplyDeleteBella historia.
Paula; that is all I want too, although I wouldn't mind a million dollars as well, ha ha. I hope to continue as I am for many more years.
DeleteOh, my. such a tender story,. written so well. I can identify with her. To walk on the beach along the shore is such a memory. Taking the red heads to the shore!
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; this story came to me weeks ago, I woke up around 1am with the words in my head and I wrote the whole thing down before going back to sleep. I hope to take my redheads to the beach when the days here are a bit warmer.
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ReplyDeleteAmy could taste the mist across the moonlit beach. The waves were tipped with foam of creamy suds, and the air was soft with memories of her life along the ocean. Walking barefoot on the wet sand, Amy felt tears streaming down her cheeks. They were salty just like the sea and she bowed her head at the worship of the sea.
Susan Kane; this is lovely, thank you.
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