Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 


The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by David M. Gascoigne and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1.beating  2.evidence  3.remaining  4.temperature  5.stench  

and/or: 

1.excessive  2.oppressive  3.exposure  4.dryland  5.cover

also including Charlotte's colour of the month pretty flower pink

Here is my story:

February 2245. The oppressive humidity once present this time of year, according to the history channel, was now a long distant memory.

The climate had shifted remarkably quickly; though the world had already been largely dryland when George was born one hundred years ago, it now more closely resembled Mars, with scorching temperature and excessive dust storms that turned the sky a pretty flower pink shade some evenings as the sun set.

The one remaining tree gave no cover from any exposure to the elements, since leaves no longer managed to sprout. The dead trunk would probably soon topple.

The stench of the recently dead in neighbouring homes was only more evidence that George himself couldn’t last much longer.

He trudged down once again to the dry riverbed, feeling his heart beating heavily as he searched one last time for water. He craved just one more mouthful of the precious liquid, but none was to be found.

He glanced back at the way he had come, and knowing he wouldn’t make it up the small incline again, he lay down on the smooth rocks and closed his eyes.

Death came quickly. 


Comments

  1. A dystopian tale on a lovely May day. I hope someone finds the answers before we reach the point of no return!

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    1. jabblog; I hope so too.

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    2. Wow. What a story that is. I feel my skin drying up. Good writing.

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  2. I can't wait for your new book, "2045".

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    1. Mike; thank you, but I don't do books. Only teasers.

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  3. Ouch, that turned dystopian. But still well written. I do not hope we'll get there - hope we get wiser before then.

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    1. Charlotte; I hope we don't get there either and I made a mistake with the year, It's only 20 years from now and I meant it to be 200.

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    2. oops again, 220 years is what I meant.

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    3. I have now changed the year to what I meant it to be.

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  4. Oh my. That was well written and having dealing with Bug's death, very close to home. Well done.

    Thanks for your comment. That's why I haven't been around much. Just starting to get back to the online world today.

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    1. The Happy Whisk; thank you. I understand not writing much, or at all, when a loved one dies.

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  5. What a horror it would be. May it never come true.

    Very well written.

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    1. messymimi; thank you and I also hope it doesn't come to pass.

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  6. Very well done, very sad - let us hope we manage to save Mother Earth in time... Small Germany tries, but when I look at countries like China, India... they just keep on polluting, so we actually make near to no difference, it is frustrating.

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    1. Iris; that's so true, we smaller countries try but what good is it when places like China just keep messing things up?

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    1. Margaret D; sadly yes, but he was very old and knew there was no hope.

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  8. Powerful - and I do hope it never comes to pass. Hope, and fear.

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    1. Elephant's Child; thank you. We all have the same hopes and fears I think.

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  9. Sound like a place I hope to not experience.

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    1. Dora; it's the future and I hope we manage to save the planet better.

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  10. 2245? you think it will take that long? very creative

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    1. ArcticFox; it could happen sooner but I hope we become careful enough that it won't.

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  11. A well-written story that I hope never happens!!
    Let him find at least some water to save himself or let it rain!!

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    1. Katerinas Blog; I hope it never happens too. Sadly, in my story George did die, there is no water left anywhere.

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  12. Smooth rocks and a quick death. Small blessings.

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    1. Val; a quick death is always a blessing.

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