Wednesday's Words on a Friday
On Wednesdays, Delores,
from Under The Porch Light, has a word challenge meme which she calls “Words
for Wednesday”.
She puts up a selection
of six words which we then use in a short story, or a poem.
I’m hopeless at poetry
so I always do a story.
It’s a fun challenge…why
not join in?
Our words today come
from Elephant’s Child again, Delores is still experiencing computing problems.
This week's words are:
1. conscious
2. plant
3. aromatic
4. growth
5. vulgar
6. sky
and/or:
1. storm
2. yell
3. crawl
4. joyous
5. fearless
6. root
Here is my story:
Warmed by the summer
sun, the aromatic fragrances of rosemary and perennial basil wafted up as Wendy
Hawkins brushed her hands across the shrubs. Her grandma's cottage garden was a
constant delight. The strong growth of each plant as it reached for the sunny
sky above brought joyous feelings each time she stepped along the paths between
the beds. Strolling through helped her calm down, the garden was her silent
refuge from the storm inside the house.
With fearless abandon,
her son Troy would climb high furniture and jump down onto the beds or couches
below, bouncing high as he landed; somtimes he would be outside climbing up on
to the shed roof, wanting to fly off; Wendy had placed the trampoline there to
catch him as he flew, then fell.
Trying to help him understand
these things were not acceptable behaviour resulted in Troy yelling every
vulgar word he knew as he crawled into one of his many tiny hideaway spaces to
get away from her.
He'd been this way ever since the accident; an eighteen
wheeler had swiped across the back of her station wagon and sent the car flying
with both of them inside. Wendy and Troy had spent a few days in the local
hospital, finally being released when it appeared neither had sustained any
injury. But once home, Troy had become a complete stranger, acting out in
violent behaviours and swearing viciously at her.
Wendy stood in the calm
of grandma's garden and made the conscious decision to make the appointment today and take Troy to the
specialist Dr. Martin had recommended. With a battery of tests and a little hypnotism,
surely the root of the problem would be found.
The noise inside had
subsided, Troy would be asleep now, behind the couch probably. Wendy walked
through the kitchen and dropped the couch blanket over her sleeping boy, so
angelic now. He would be calmer when he woke, back to his pre-accident self,
for a few hours at least, before the cycle began again.
What an event to survive, get through, and then suffer the memories! Poor Troy.
ReplyDeleteGood write!
Beautifully done; a sad, but telling, tale.
ReplyDeleteThis one was very disturbing--but well-written!!
ReplyDeletePoor Wendy. Poor Troy.
ReplyDeleteAnother exceptional story.
So sad you do feel for their situation it must be very hard.
ReplyDeleteMerle............
Well done, River. :)
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you've got yourself another troll, River...like you did on your previous post...just delete them before clicking on them. They'll get weary and leave you be. :)
Wow. Very moving. We're going to need a sequel!
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; Troy gets better with a lot of therapy.
ReplyDeleteJac; thank you. I don't often do sad; when it happens I have no idea where it comes from.
fishducky; thank you. I wish I knew which part of me brought this forward.
Elephant's Child; things get better for both of them; lots of therapy and insurance money from the trucking company.
Merle; it is sad, for both of them, very hard for Wendy to watch her boy go through this.
Lee; thank you. I don't click on trolls and meant to go back and delete, but forgot. I'll do it today.
Jackie K; I feel this needs a sequel too, but not sure I can do it.
You have done well....
ReplyDeletewhiteangel; thank you. this is a weekly challenge, with words put up by Elephant's Child each Wednesday; feel free to join in.
ReplyDeleteYet another terrific story, and a bit different from the ones you usually write. Very sad. I anticipated you adding an even heavier level of sadness by somehow indicating that Troy is a grown man, so I guess you could say you surprised me by... not trying to surprise me. :)
ReplyDeleteHappy weekend!