Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here.
This week's words are:
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here.
This week's words are:
1. tick
2. fresh
3. droplet
4. magnificent
5. juice
6. appeal
and/or:
1. clue
2. cancel
3. cheap
4. purple
5. whales
6. love
Here is my story:
We’d had kind of a rough beginning, born to
poor working parents, never enough money or clothes, but at least our Dad didn’t
get drunk and hit us, like Cheryl’s Dad did. There was only Cheryl and her brother Simon,
while there were eight of us kids, but we were the happier family.
Sometimes
Cheryl’s Mum Joan would bring over cakes or biscuits she had made, saying there
were too many for just her and the kids, “Dan doesn’t eat sweet things” she’d
say and Mum was always thankful, but we all knew that Cheryl’s mum mostly came
over for some company and the laughter that rang through our house daily.
As the years went by and we all grew up, and
Cheryl’s Dad grew grumpier and harder to live with, Cheryl and her Mum came
visiting more often, especially after Simon went off to live and work in
another town. Cheryl and I got jobs at
the local towel factory, making bath towels in pretty colours; Cheryl was good
on the machines while I was in the packing department.
Neither of us ever married although her
brother Simon did and all of my siblings too. “We’ll just have to grow old
together” she’d say. And we did. We were
the only two who stayed in the small town after all the parents died. Cheryl
inherited their house, but chose to sell it and move into my happier, messier
home with me.
In our fifties one day, saving for our
eventual retirements, Cheryl brought home some travel brochures from a stand at
the library. “Look at these Barbara,” she said. “What do you think? Could we
take a little holiday away this year?” We studied all of them and discovered we
both liked the idea of a Whale Cruise, four days at sea, leaving from a Port
city several hours south of where we lived. “Do you get seasick?” I asked. “Haven’t
a clue,” Cheryl replied. “Let’s find out,” I said. “I don’t know about myself either,
neither of us have been anywhere near a beach our whole lives. Let’s cancel the
caravan this year and try this cruise instead.”
With the travel brochure highlighting the
cheap cruise managing to tick all the boxes for us, off we went, enjoying the
fresh sea air, sipping orange juice each morning, marvelling at the magnificent
views, the purple shadows on the icebergs in the evenings, catching sight of
whales now and again. Neither of us were seasick and we loved every minute, even the few droplets of rain that fell the last evening. The
whole trip had so much appeal for us, we did it again the next year.
How lovely the two friends are spending their golden years together.
ReplyDeleteOnly slightly confused; they've been buddies their whole lives and get on well, so why not? Companionship rules.
DeleteA lovely story!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; thank you. The words just didn't suggest any darkness this week, happy happy all round.
DeleteThis is lovely. And whale watching sounds like a perfect new tradition to establish (and I do get seasick).
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; Thank you. I'm sorry to hear you get seasick, were you okay on your Antarctic trip?
DeleteI was appallingly sick. One day it took four injections to stop me vomiting. And it didn't matter.
DeleteGreat way for two friends to continue friendship into their golden years.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; they're so alike they could be twin sisters.
DeleteA happy completion to what began as a sad story.
ReplyDeleteWell done, River. :)
Lee; thank you; nothing too sad there really, just a man who believed in a smack when kids did wrong, as he'd got when a child. Nothing as bad as beating them black and blue.
DeleteWould you ever consider writing a book, or, have you ever written one?
ReplyDeleteThe Happy Whisk; I have considered and actually have a couple of stories that have reached about fifteen chapters, but I don't seem to be able to move them along. Yet.
DeleteThat is the sweetest story, loved it.
ReplyDeleteMargaret-whiteangel; thank you :)
DeleteOoh! Like Laverne and Shirley, but working in a towel factory instead of a brewery. And not in Milwaukee. Without Lenny and Squiggy living upstairs. And no Mrs. Babish as the landlady. Not getting into madcap predicaments.
ReplyDeleteOkay. It's nothing like Laverne and Shirley. But it makes me want to know more about their lives.
Val; I've seen Laverne and Shirley and they weren't the inspiration for this at all. These two are just happy being companions and aunties to several nieces and nephews.
DeleteI love happy endings and this story had just that.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; I'm a big fan of happy endings myself.
DeleteIt's not a fairy tale ending, it's a realistic happy ending, and i like it very much!
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