Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here.
This week's words are:
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here.
This week's words are:
1. thin
2. frightened
3. scratch
4. wealthy
5. flowery
6. sulky
and/or:
1. stove
2. unwieldy
3. fearless
4. zoo
5. price
6. inquisitive
there is also a photo of a lake, which I haven't used this time.
here is my story:
(another chapter added to Lost and Found)
Detective
Stanley took the maps Bernice pulled out of her rusty, long unused stove and
carried the unwieldy package down the hill back to the Cove Hotel. Along the
way, Irene Fargo mentioned that Bernice seemed familiar and wondered about old
cases that Bernice might have popped up in. Stanley said, “I don’t have any
recognition there, possibly she is someone you knew of before you came to us,
you’d have to search old cases back in that precinct.” Irene nodded, saying, “I
can contact someone there and have him search for me. I’m dying to get a look
at those maps though. In high school I thought for a while I might like to
study geology, mostly because I had a crush on Trevor Bratton, who already knew
for sure he wanted to be one.” Stanley laughed at that and confessed a similar
crush on a student who wore only flowery dresses while everyone around her
lived in jeans and t-shirts, “She wanted to be a kindergarten teacher and I
thought she already looked like one.”
They
had the package of maps locked into the hotel safe and decided to explore the
town a little, knowing they would be back in the city within a few days. There
wasn’t much to see, it was a small town and not busy this time of year. “The
city will seem like a zoo after this peaceful little place” said Irene. They strolled
through the Post Office-General Store without buying anything, then explored
the streets behind the hotel. “I remember there is a hairdresser back here
named Curly Cuts, when it first opened the manager was an expert in cutting
curly hair, apparently there is a skill involved, it’s harder to cut than
straight hair,” said Stanley. Irene ran a hand over her own wayward curls and
said, “maybe I should pop in and see if they have any time free this afternoon,
this mop could use some taming.” She pulled open the door and stepped aside to
allow another woman out.
The
clothes and understated jewellery marked her a wealthy woman, but the sulky
face and thin body didn’t seem to fit with that. She glanced at Irene in
passing then catching sight of Detective Inspector Stanley Grace, a frightened
look crossed her face. Hurrying away from him, Andrea Jones began to scratch at
her arms, her skin felt like it was crawling, she needed another dose of those
pills she’d been pinching from Stephanie’s bottle. Bruce had locked them away
and taken the key with him this morning and Andrea was already nervous about having
to be in town, trying to appear only mildly inquisitive while asking about
tourists and the price of haircuts etc. She wasn’t sure anymore exactly what
Bruce was asking of her. Andrea’s thoughts were now focused only on how to get
something to ease her jitters. Spotting Stanley Grace only made things worse.
Had he recognised her? A worried frown creased her brow and Andrea thought
perhaps a drink or three would help steady her before going back to the clinic.
Irene
Fargo came back out of Curly Cuts, saying she had an appointment in a couple of
hours and had met a pair of delightful women while inside, “Sara Saunders, who
is one of the caretakers of the Scenic Retreat, and Vanessa Moore, a visitor to
the town.” Stanley said, “The Scenic Retreat is the place Bernice mentioned,
where that copper coloured granite seam is underneath. We should take a look up
there before we leave. Let’s walk along that jetty and feel the ocean air for a
bit, maybe we can see the Retreat from there too. I’ll speak to the Hotel
receptionist and find out the best way to get up there while you’re having your
haircut.”
Several
hours later, Stanley told Irene about the available tracks up to the Retreat. A
safe road they could travel by car, or a goat track which would test their stamina.
“Are you feeling fearless?” he asked. “Would you like to try the goat track?” “I
would,” said Irene, "but I’m thinking we should also take that package of maps
with us. Those old caretakers, Sara and her husband Ed, might just know something
about the areas on them, we could learn more about why the maps are so
important.” “Your intuition at work again?” said Stanley. “I do have a fairly
strong feeling,” said Irene. “Just not sure why or what about. I do think Sara
and Ed might have something to do with all of this. Maybe they know Bernice.”
OK, you've got me; next chapter, please!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; next chapter might take a while, this book his been sitting in limbo for several months now.
DeleteBernice. I am with fishducky.
ReplyDeleteFiona opened the door to the country school fearlessly where her students looked at Miss Fiona inquisitively. What had been a zoo of noise and chatter now quietly waited for her, a young teacher with no experience. Heated by an iron stove where unwieldy bundles of wood were tumbled, the classroom with such students was worth the price she and parents had paid.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; this is a lovely little story with most of the words, well done. brings to mind Little House on the Prairie.
DeleteBernice probably has a few more clues in her, Detective Stanley will be sure to keep in touch.
There is more to come isn't there??
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; yes there is, as soon as I find out how to write an evil villain.
DeleteThis just keeps getting more interesting.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; thank you so much, I'm deathly afraid of it getting dull and dying.
DeleteI am so glad you were able to get back to Lost and Found - and echo everyone else who wants to know more.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; I'm glad to get back to it too. I'm reading a lot of crime novels trying to work out how to write a villain without copying some other author's work.
DeleteOh! They're all headed up this way!
ReplyDeleteThe winding road down the southern, western side of this mountain that leads to the small country town of Canungra is called "The Goat Track".
Lee; well that is interesting, I had no idea there was such a place as The Goat Track. Is it near a bay with a beach? With a jetty?
DeleteNo...the Goat Track and Canungra are classified as "country"...part of the Scenic Rim, as is Tamborine Mountain. On the eastern side of the mountain there are scenic views of the Gold Coast and the ocean in the distance.
DeleteLovely story and other chapter.
ReplyDeleteCurly hair is harder to cut than straight!
Margaret-whiteangel; thank you, I'm happy to get this story moving again. I have curly hair myself and so does my youngest son. I battle with mine and he shaves his head.
DeleteSomething is up! I can't wait to see how it ties together. They'd better take care of those maps!
ReplyDeleteVal; something is definitely up, I just have to figure out what that is. The maps will be safe. I think....
DeleteThe plot thickens! A good read, as always, River.
ReplyDeletejenny_o; the plot is definitely thickening, I just don't know what with yet.
DeleteI would love to participate, but I don't know how to link back to you.
ReplyDeleteAs long as you know the ending, you can keep it going without it getting dull. It's certainly worth coming here to read!
ReplyDelete