Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Lissa and can be found here.
This week's words are:
1. last day
2. zealot
3. homeward
4. listen
5. midnight
6. always
and/or:
1. start
2. wicked
3. holiday
4. castle
5. infinite
6. goodbye
here is my story: a filler chapter
Next morning, Tom was
eager to explore the darkroom and see if everything was in working order. After
so many years untouched, the chemicals for developing would need replacing, but
hopefully the wash trays and red light would be okay. At breakfast, he asked
Sara where the room was exactly and was surprised to find it was the rundown looking
cabin he’d seen on the drive in. He mentioned this to Sara, saying he thought
that was the actual Retreat at the time and wondered why anyone would stay
there. She laughed at that and then said it had been the original home of the
original owner of the property. “He had plans to build a castle right here
where the Retreat is, but he was a gambler and lost all his money at the poker
tables.
As they were clearing
up the kitchen, Tom’s parents arrived and discussions began about the darkroom,
the hair appointments for Sara and Vanessa the next day and a possible visit to
the nearest police station. Tom’s appearance after all these years would have
to be made known sooner or later. There was the paperwork Tom’s parents had
brought with them to read over. Tom thought they should probably get legal
advice on whether or not he could be adopted at the age of twenty. Conversation
then turned to Robert and Vanessa’s eventual return to the farm. “It will be
hard to say goodbye and young Gary Johnson is a bit of a zealot about getting
things done just right, so the place is in good hands,” said Robert, “but we still
don’t want to be gone too long.” “It is lovely to get away for a little
holiday,” said Vanessa, “and now that we know how close this place is, we could
come again.”
“You’ll always be
welcome,” said Ed, “you feel like family.” “We’ll need to decide when to head
homeward, when our last day will be,” said Robert. “What do you think Van? stay
for the week and then start for home?” “That sounds lovely,” said Vanessa. “I
don’t know whether we should see the police about Tom or not, I mean we should
of course, but right away? Or wait until we’ve seen a bit of the area?” “I vote
for waiting,” said Tom. “I can stay ‘lost’ a bit longer.” “That may be a
problem,” said Ed. “You’ve been down in the town already and people may have
seen you and thought you looked familiar.” “That’s true,” said Sara, “we don’t
have an infinite number of days to keep you undiscovered.”
Vanessa said, “We
can keep our ears open at Curly Cuts tomorrow, listen out for anyone asking
about strangers staying up here and whether or not anyone mentions Tom looking
familiar.” “But he hasn’t been in the town all that much,” said Robert. “Tell
you what,” said Ed, Stephanie isn’t supposed to be coming tomorrow, how about
you and I visit the pub while the ladies get their hair done, we can casually
mention you’re staying here with your son and if any of the older ones who seem
to live on the front porch notice Tom’s resemblance to Frank, we can sort of
wing it from there as to how soon we let the police know.” “They do still have
a murder to solve,” said Tom, “and Frank’s disappearance and my kidnapping.
Probably the sooner the better, although it might have been nice to stay lost a
bit longer. We really do all need to know what happened.”
“One more thing,” said
Vanessa. “Will you be coming home with us at the end of our week?” “That will depend on what happens tomorrow and
whether or not we’re discussing it all with the police by then,” said Tom. “I
do know I want at least one day to sleep in the afternoon and be up at midnight
to get night photos of the Retreat, the beach and a couple along the goat
track. Maybe I could do that after you’ve gone home, then follow later,
depending on the whole police thing. And I do want to see Stephanie, even if
she doesn’t see me. I want to remember her if I can.”
** Next month the words will be supplied by me and will be right here on this blog
I don't have a good feeling about those night time photos.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; he's a photographer and midnight photos of beach areas are often pretty. I think he'll be fine.
DeleteOh, continuing the story now. It sounds as if a turning point is near. Can't wait for next Wednesday.
ReplyDeleteUglemor; this chapter fits in somewhere in the middle, so a turning point is quite a way off.
DeleteI agree with only slightly confused. I sense sinister coming in the dark.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; I don't see sinister, but we'll have to wait and see how the story goes.
Deletedisappearance and kidnapping - those doesn't sound good and mostly, trouble will come, good use of the prompts.
ReplyDeletehave a lovely day.
Lissa; the disappearance and kidnapping were 16 years ago....
DeleteIntriguing!
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you
DeleteI missed a lot because I couldn't find your link but it's nice to be back in!!
ReplyDeletefishducky ; if you do find the link, this fits in right after chapter twelve.
DeleteI am loving the filler story. And looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteNothing has changed for me here this morning. I can (fortunately) still get to your Words For Wednesday pages, but your followers (and about me) have gone.
Elephant's Child; at least you can get to the story. I have the followers there, but didn't bother with the 'about me' this time
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ReplyDeleteI have a lot going on in my head/life at the moment...and haven't gotten around to using this week's words or last week's images....I'll sort out the can of worms wriggling around in my mind soon and get back into the mode!!
You've done well, River with this, combined with your changing format. Personally...and I don't mean in anyway to sound rude...I preferred your previous format. It was easier for me to read and follow etc. Of course, the fact is...it is your blog to do with and present however which way you wish.
I'm still finding the print quite light...a pale, faint grey.
Lee; the print is still quite light and I'll fix that if I can, but I can't find my way back to the original theme either.
DeleteYou certainly know how to spin a story!
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you
DeleteLovely read. Still can't find your links to previous chapters.
ReplyDeleteMargaret-whiteangel; I don't know what to do about that, apart from changing the whole thing again and maybe it will work and maybe it won't.
DeleteI made use of that link to get into this story! That must have been a lot of work.
ReplyDeleteVal; so have you read all the preceding chapters?
DeleteYes! I took quite a bit of time out of a day of doing nothing so I could read them all!
DeleteNice job! (As always.)
ReplyDeleteWow, your blog looks fantastic. Looks like you've been a super busy lady. :)
Susan; thank you. The new look didn't quite turn out as planned, the blue background is too light and many readers are having trouble finding either my bloglist or the link to the Wednesday stories, or both.
DeleteI'm not up to getting in there and changing it all over again though, not yet.
Big changes here! I don't know if I would be brave enough to switch over like you have done. Kudos for having the fortitude!
ReplyDeleteAnd another chapter in the story - yay!
jenny_o; I wasn't sure the move would turn out well. It's mostly okay, but some readers can't find the link to the stories or the blog list :(
DeleteThis is a filler chapter which goes in after chapter twelve. I've yet to edit chapters 14-25
Love the new look of your blog. I am also in admiration of the way you write. You always make want to read on.
ReplyDeleteAround My Kitchen Table; thank you, I'm happy when people tell me they'd like to read more of my story.
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