Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Lissa and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are:

1.black eye  2.car wash  3.mud bath  4.jelly bean  5.duct tape

Here is my story:

A few weeks later most of the clearing up had been done at the excavation site, with just a small area still fenced off as technicians continued to collect soil samples to determine which parts of the cave were original and which parts were the collapsed cliff face that sealed the entrance and trapped the ship and sailors within.

A flat, stable area on a small rise overlooking the cave was chosen for the cross placement and the carved albatross would be placed behind and a little higher to look as if it were flying over. Nanna Ruby had finished painting the flowers on the cross and the whole thing had been given a weatherproof coating.

On the big day, Maggie, Nanna and Jim drove to the town to pick up William and Josef, but along the way had to swerve off the road to avoid a small flock of sheep that appeared around a bend. The car splashed through a muddy puddle and by the time they reached the town Nanna declared the car looked like it had been given a mud bath and insisted on Maggie taking it through the carwash before picking up the gentlemen.

Maggie turned left at the supermarket corner and slowly drove into the wash area until the conveyor took over and they all enjoyed the sudsy swish swish of the rolling washers, the torrential rain style rinse and the final hot wax application. A service attendant waited at the exit to buff up any areas that might have been missed by the polishing rollers.

Back at the Retirement Village, William and Josef were waiting and snacking on jelly beans that had been placed on small tables. “Which is your favourite jelly bean?” asked William. “Oh, for me always the black ones,” said Josef, “I like the aniseed flavour.” “Me too,” said William, “though as a boy I preferred the red ones.” 

A third elderly gentleman joined them, asking if any black jelly beans remained, “they are my favourite too,” he said. “I am David and have heard you talking about a cave and a cross, I would very much like to see this place you talk about.”

William said, “you would be welcome, but I am not sure how many would fit in Maggie’s car, we are already five people today.” “Perhaps another time,” said David, carefully seating himself. “I need to recover a little more anyway, I have some bruising still.” “We notice your black eye,” said Josef. “What happened?”

David waved his wooden walking cane, showing the duct tape holding it together, “it snapped suddenly and down I went on the last two steps by the willow tree. I should have walked on the ramp instead. My face bumped the edge of a step and I have a bruising on my arm too. The cane is very old and now I must get a new one, my doctor has suggested a strong metal one. I shall keep this one just for memories, it belonged to my own grandfather.”



Comments

  1. Sad about David's cane. Duct tape is a helpful tool. Good use of the prompts.

    Have a lovely day.

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    1. lissa; it is sad, the cane was his grandfather's but it became weakened over time. I use a lot of duct tape here. Thank you.

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  2. Nice story R. Jelly Bean and duct tape go well together, such a pity about the fall too.

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    1. Margaret D; thank you, it wasn't too bad a fall and David will be more careful and have a new, stronger cane now.

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  3. Duct tape is good for a lot of things, but I would not recommend using it for canes. Well written story!

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    1. Charlotte; it's true, duct tape isn't recommended for canes that would be bearing weight, that's why David has ordered a new and stronger metal cane, the duct tape was an emergency measure only. Thank you.

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  4. David was lucky not to have suffered greater injuries. I hope he manages to see the memorial one day.

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    1. jabblog; David was lucky he got only a black eye and bruised shoulder. most of the area around the steps where his cane broke is thick, soft grass. He does get to see the memorial. The rown holds an "open day" so all who wish too can see it and view photos of the cave and shipwreck.

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  5. Nice story, each week I intend to participate and then I forget ! it is time that spring arrives and I wake up !

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    1. Ingrid; thank you. The weeks do go by so fast, by the time we think of something it's almost too late already! We are in summer here and I am glad the pollen season is over.

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  6. Now I want some jelly beans. The black ones are also my favorite, followed by red. Too bad there wasn't room for David in the car. Maybe it was for the best, since he could still be a bit shaky, and without a good cane.

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    1. Val; I want some jelly beans too, here in chemist shops (oharmacies) we can buy bags with only black ones, but I have a blood test scheduled next week so I am trying to stay off sugar right now. It isn't easy! David gets to see the memorial cross in a week or so when the town arranges an "open day" with photos and food stalls and a bus to bring the people.

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  7. Poor David! He could've cracked a lot of bones with that fall! - Black jelly beans are my favorite too, and we have bags of all black jelly beans too, but they sell out as soon as they get stocked. It's hit or miss if I get them.

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    1. Magical Mystical Mimi; it's true, a lot of bones could have been cracked, but David is still agile enough to roll when falling so only his shoulder and face near the eye got bruised. I see black jelly beans every time I go to the chemist, perhaps not so many people here like them.

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  8. I am enjoying your ongoing story and hope they all have a good time seeing the place now it's ready.

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