Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Charlotte and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.peach 2.granola bowl 3.idea 4.wood 5.sad
and/or:
1.turn 2.scarecrow 3.flowers 4.cauldron 5.hot 6.bubble
Here is my story:
Erin slowly stirred the
cauldron of peaches that would magically turn into jam, watching the surface as
each hot bubble popped. Maggie had sent Susan and Jenny for more wood to keep
the fire going under it, and talked to Erin as she stirred, all the while
watching carefully.
She talked of memories,
her favourite granola bowl from early childhood, the scarecrow her grandfather
had stood in the ripening fields to keep the crows from eating the wheat,
laughing gently at the idea that such a thing would actually stop the birds,
marking the time with a scratch on the wall each time Erin winced.
Labour had begun,
though Erin might not have realised just yet, each niggling contraction being
small and far apart. Maggie spoke of being sad when her grandfather had died,
saying we all get a turn at life, just like the flowers in the spring, gathering
cloths and tying a rope to the bedstead for Erin to grip when the time came.
She took a turn at the cauldron, sending Erin to look outside to see if Susan
and Jenny were on their way back.
“Take a walk around outside
the hut, and breathe deeply”, said Maggie noticing a faint sheen of sweat as
the next pain hit a little harder. She remembered Granny telling her Aunt Celia
that walking and gravity were good at this stage, Maggie had been very young at
the time but remembered how calm her Granny had been while helping Aunt Celia.
She was determined to
give Erin as much of that calm as she could and hoped Susan and Jenny would
soon be back. They could help with wiping Erin’s face with cool cloths and
rubbing her back. Dana carried in the basket Rufus had finished weaving, now
filled with swathes of soft fabrics to nestle the baby into. “It’s coming on
faster now,” she told Maggie, having seen Erin hunched with pain and realising at
last what was happening.
She walked back in,
hands cradling her belly, smiling through the pain of the next contraction, knowing
she would soon be holding her baby. “Run to the smokehouse and bring Russell
now,” Maggie said to Dana.
THAT is how you end your story??? Ahhhrgh! Did all go well? Boy, girl, HEALTHY???? All happy? I hope there is a follow up and please let it be sweet.
ReplyDeleteLots of stuff going on there. what next??
DeleteIris; there are more words next week that might fit to continue this...
DeleteSusan Kane; what next indeed.
River, I look forward to it!
DeleteSounds like the beginning of a book. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteDVArtist; this is already the fourth chapter but I don't know thta it will make it to a book. Most of my stories don't.
DeleteElsie had been drifting through life like a peach slice floating in a granola bowl. However, one morning she woke up with an idea. She planned to carve an image of Jesus from a block of seasoned eucalyptus wood. His face would be sad.
ReplyDeleteMany hours of patient work followed. When the statuette was finished, her twin granddaughters in turn said, "Jesus looks like a scarecrow Nana!" Their matching dresses were patterned with flowers. Nana was furious.
That night Nana stirred her cauldron. She chanted an ancient Latin rhyme as she poured bull's blood into the hot liquid that was beginning to bubble. The twin granddaughters looked on from their wooden pen, fearful. This was a side of their nana that they had never seen before. They were starting to regret what they had said about the Jesus idol but it was too late now.
Yorkshire Pudding; interesting use of the words but a bit too far into the dark side I think. I never get furious.
DeleteWhat the heck? I want to know what creepy grandma was doing...
DeleteProbably making spiced blood sausage (pudding)
DeleteOh a good story R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteHola River, que buena historia has creado. Me encantan los finales felices. Mimi me pasó tu blog y me gusta mucho la verdad. Ya te sigo y me he unido al reto de los miércoles que también me está gustando mucho. Espero que también sea de vuestro agrado mi Bitácora literaria.
ReplyDeleteUn abrazo
Nuria de Espinosa; thank you and welcome to drifting.
DeleteCriatividade sempre nas tuas histórias pra aproveitar bem cada palavra dada!
ReplyDeleteÓtimo dia ! beijos, chica
chica; thank you.
DeleteSo much could happen now, but I hope all will be well. You're good at this!
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you, I think things will turn out well here.
DeleteUn final d'història obert... com m'agraden a mi. ;-)
ReplyDeleteBon ús de les paraules.
Paula; I like them too, but wonder how I will continue with the next chapter.
DeleteThis is where it all hits, I hope it all goes well (and know too well what happens when it does not).
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I am sure everything goes well.
DeleteAll Billy really wanted was a bowl of plain granola with peaches sliced on it. The idea of such simple food saddened his Granny so much that one day she left a note and left. “Come find me.” He had no idea why she left and as time passed, he finally found her.
ReplyDelete. She lived in Scarecrow Wood and walking along a row of yellow flowers he discovered her stirring a bubbling hot cauldron. She turned as he drew near her, hugging him tightly.
They stood like that for a few minutes, until he investigated the cauldron. He gasped as he saw….
Finish this story. What did he see? What was it? Why did Granny leave? I honestly had no idea what I was going to write here.
Susan Kane; I am saddened that Granny was saddened by simple food. In the cauldron I imagine Granny is making spiced peach sauce to go with hot porridge when it is too cold for granola, because she knew Billy was coming and had been missing him.
DeleteOh I hope the words next Wednesday will allow you to continue the story ... and the next, and the next ... we all want this story to end happily!
ReplyDeleteIt and its fellow stories could be turned into a book ... maybe a collection of short stories?
Blogger is still stubbornly not updating the blogroll ... sigh.
Charlotte; I am sure this ends well. I like the idea of a book, but none of my stories has an ending, I always get to a point where I just can't continue, with no idea what comes next.
DeleteThis is what I wrote first and then deleted: I hope the words will make you find an ending this time. I so love your stories, but the lack of endings is a problem when trying to publish ;) ... and this is the pot calling the kettle black. I have a heap of unfinished stories online and offline. I think the only one I ever finished was the story of Peter and the time travel - and this only because it was a dream with an ending.
DeleteI'm looking forward to the reveal of that little bundle of joy. I hope mother and baby end up healthy, even if a few hardships come their way.
ReplyDeleteVal; mother and baby are healthy though I haven't yet decided on boy or girl.
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