Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Charlotte and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. alphabet 2. bookends 3. careful 4. devoted 5. gland 6. elegy
and/or:
1. fabulous 2. island 3. legend 4. mirror 5. yak 6. violent
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: light ivory
Here is my story:
The ferry had left and the old man had finished loading all their luggage onto his big wagon, while the children had fed apples to his patiently waiting horse. He climbed onto his seat and gently slapped the reins to get old Harry started along the path and the three families followed behind, walking.
The children were
excited to finally be on this island which they had heard so much about over
the years. Their parents had come here as children themselves, “we had such
fabulous times every summer,” they’d said and the newest batch of children
could hardly wait to get unpacked and start their own adventures.
When they reached the
camping huts, the grownups were amazed at the difference. Every shack had been
fixed up and painted and labelled with letters, A,B,C and so on with thirteen
shacks on each side of the street. “Look Charlotte,” said her mum Eileen, “what
do you see?”
“It’s a rainbow
alphabet,” said Charlotte excitedly. She was very proud of recently learning
all the letters, and the shacks were indeed a rainbow, with shack A being red,
B being orange and so on down to the end which was a white shack opposite
another white shack, then the colours began again coming back up the street, to
finish with a purple Z. Tall coconut
palms at the end of each row formed bookends to the rainbows.
“Be careful walking
near those palms” said the old man who had introduced himself as Jack. “Sometimes
coconuts will drop without warning and you don’t want one landing on your head!”
He unloaded all the luggage and left the parents to sort it all out and move
into their assigned shacks. Beyond the street was a grassy area and beyond that
was the beach with fine light ivory coloured sand
Permission had been
obtained to build a campfire on the sand and Jack had promised to attend and
tell them the legend of the island which included violent seas and beached
pirates. “All of it true!” he declared. “I’ve lived here all my life, devoted
my time to keeping things tidy and my great-great-grandfather was one of those
pirates!”
With hopeful faces all
the children asked, ‘is there any treasure here?” “Legend says there is,” said
Jack, “but no one has ever found any. There’s a story about a rock shaped like
a yak and something about a mirror showing the way when the sun is right.” “Let’s
look for the yak rock,” said George and of course Tim and Barry agreed and wanted
to go immediately, but the grownups called them back to unpack their things
first.
“Responsibilities don’t
end just because you are on holiday,” they said. Each family moved their
suitcases into their shacks and unpacked clothes and supplies while the
children danced with impatience in their hurry to stow away shirts and towels
and bathing suits. “What are the two white shacks?” asked Emily. “One holds
emergency supplies I think,” said her Dad, “Jack said something about them but
I wasn’t paying proper attention. We’ll ask again later.”
“I was listening,” said
Marian, “one has fishing supplies and a couple of small rowboats and scuba
equipment and the other one has the emergency stuff like lanterns and medical
equipment and a two-way radio and other stuff.”
I have a feeling that the emergency equipment will soon be needed.
ReplyDeletejabblog; maybe, but not soon.
DeleteI think there is more to come with this story. Bad things on the horizon?
ReplyDeleteAnne in the kitchen; exciting things but not bad. No tragedies anyway.
DeleteSomething is in the works?
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; maybe once my brain wakes up...
DeleteI do hope we get a continuation of this story.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; it would be nice, but we'll see where the words take us.
Delete:-)
ReplyDeleteJenn Jilks; thank you.
DeleteI sense fun adventures, and some excitement, are on the horizon.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I don't have fun adventure memories, so I'll have to rely on htings I've read about.
DeleteOh, I would love to have a holiday at the rainbow shacks!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Varadero, Cuba. Ingo was lying comfortably under a palm tree at the beach... BOOM, just centimeters from his left foot a coconut crashed down!
Clever idea with the white shacks - thank you for another great story. Really, go for a book, I´d happily buy it! It??? Several, for friends and family, too - you are an excellent writer and should not "waste" your great talent!
Iris; I would love a holiday there myself, if such a place existed. Ingo was lucky.
DeleteInteresting story there R. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteRiver, I have to know if they find the treasure! Is there a pirate's map hidden in one of those white buildings??? You must keep on with this story. - Have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteMMM; I think the treasure is just legend and the white buildings are kept locked unless things are needed from there.
DeleteI am going to spend the weekend writing gland elegy! Aloha
ReplyDeleteI like the initiative to encourage people to keep writing.
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Those kids will have a great time looking for the treasure! Good for Jack, sowing those seeds of adventure. And for warning of falling coconuts.
ReplyDeleteA great beginning to a summer's tale. Those long, lazy summer's days of childhood!
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