Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by messymimi and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. protest 2. trap 3. analysis 4. confidence 5. gap 6. abnormal
and/or:
1. plaster 2. way 3. purse 4. neighbours 5. opener 6. record
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: mouse grey
Here is my story:
“What is that infernal
racket?” complained Mike as he stumbled out of bed holding his pounding head. “The
neighbours are staging a protest,” said Irene as she waved through the window
to them indicating they should turn up their stereo. “What?” said Mike. Without
an ounce of sympathy, Irene said, “over what they say is your abnormal
behaviour.” Mike groaned as he carefully sat on a chair, “you got any aspirin?”
Irene handed him two
with a large glass of water. “You deserve that headache,” she said. “You’re in
deep trouble this time. Getting blind drunk is the last straw. Remember that
last lecture from your Dad? Our way or the highway? And then you pulled that
silly stunt with the garage door opener and he got trapped in there for hours,
missed his presentation schedule, and the position was given to Mr Watts.”
“Ma, I’m sorry,” said
Mike, wincing as Irene pulled open the curtains to the bright sunshine. “I’ll
fly straight from now on, I promise.” “I no longer have any confidence in your
promises Mike,” said Irene, “your record of indiscretions is way longer than
last year and you’ve only been eighteen for three months!” Mike lifted his arm
to block out some of the sun, knocking his head with the plaster cast on his broken
wrist.
A knock on the door had
Irene going down the hallway to let in Sgt. Tucker just as Mike’s Dad came in
from the garage with two large duffle bags already packed. Mike stood up
shakily as Sgt. Tucker removed his cap and introduced himself. His thick thatch
of mouse grey hair matched his moustache and his smile was friendly, though
this didn’t reassure Mike one bit. He swallowed the rest of his water. Sgt.
Tucker handed a sheaf of papers to Irene, who signed them and put them in her
purse.
He then turned to Mike,
saying, “have a seat son, let’s chat.” Mike glanced at his Mum who waved at the
neighbors to cease the racket. “I have here a petition from your parents,” said
Sgt Tucker. “A quick analysis shows a long list of misdemeanors, some of which
show considerable skills which might just come in handy where you’re going.”
Panicked, Mike turned to his Dad. “You’re sending me to one of those discipline
Boot Camps?”
“No Mike,” said Dean
Fletcher. “This is a proper Military Training base. Think of it as a gap year.”
“And after you finish," said Sgt Tucker, "you might decide you like the life and
want to stay on, we could use a few bright sparks like you. I’ll give you time
to shower and dress, then we’ll be on our way." “I’ll come in the truck with you
and the Sgt. to the base,” said Dean, “and Mum will follow behind to bring me
home.”
Curious if he stays on past the gap year. Good writing!
ReplyDeleteThe Happy Whisk; I have a feeling he will.
DeleteBoth of our minds take us to strange places. Maybe you will follow up with how Mike does. Great job with the prompts.
ReplyDeleteGranny Annie; I can't promise a follow up, it all depends where the words take me.
DeleteThere's some knowledge behind this piece, I know. I hope it works for Mike - it could be the making of him.
ReplyDeletejabblog; Mike does well and straightens up nicely.
DeleteVery nice story,
ReplyDeleteabout family relationships and the consequences of recklessness.
Very good use of words.
It's an unexpected story and I loved it!!
Katerinas blog; thank you.
DeleteYou really have to mess up a lot for ending up like this. Hope Mike makes the right decision...
ReplyDeleteAnother great story!
Iris; he has messed up a lot recently, but learns self control and becomes a better young man.
DeleteI do hope that Mike learns to fly right - and love that people can still see he has potential.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; he does fly right as soon as he learns a few new things aboit himself.
DeleteSound like a hang over. Or the bottle flu.
ReplyDeleteDora; it was a hangover, his first and probably his last.
DeleteIt will make or break him, and I hope it's the former. Excellent use of the prompts.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; it definitely makes him, he meets new people and makes friends.
DeleteWell done R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteWell, that took a turn! I thought he was going off to jail. This is a much better lesson, and an opportunity. I hope Mike shapes up and learns responsibility.
ReplyDeleteA 'gap' year sounds like just the right cure.
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