Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Wisewebwoman and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are:

1.garotte  2.kisses  3.neck  4.philanthropist  5.pragmatism

and/or:

1.balconies  2.decadence  3.entertainment  4.genius  5.public

Charlotte's colour of the month is Carmine, which I have not used today.

Here is my story, which is complete fiction so if I have some historical facts wrong I apologise.

A few weeks after William had visited the retirement complex and declared it wonderful, he was delighted to get a letter stating a room was available and he could move in as soon as he signed the paperwork. He was delighted and began thinking of what to take and what to leave. Jim Anderson and his mother Maggie also received a letter.

The first shipment of wreckage and bones had been tested, cleaned and were ready to be displayed for the public. Jim and Maggie had been invited to a First Viewing, before it was opened to the general public and he was allowed three extra people. He asked around and of course Don and Greg were happy to come along, but Nanna Ruby had promised William that she would help him with the move.

Jim decided his history teacher might like to come along, Bernard Caffrey was delighted to be invited. They all met at the side entrance as instructed and were ushered inside by Russell Fielding. Maggie was quite impressed with how everything was laid out and Dan and Greg were impressed too. Jim and Bernard were the most excited, and stayed by each glass case much longer than the others, discussing the bones and the pieces of shipwrecked wood.

They discussed how old everything was and Bernard mentioned the ship had entered the cave around the same time as the historical period when a Garotte was the favoured method of punishment for criminals in some countries. This got Dan and Greg’s attention too and they sat around chatting while Maggie and Russell Fielding visited the café area.

The boys were thrilled to hear about the “kiss of the wire on the neck of the victim” when Garotting became popular with criminals wanting to steal from their victims. The wire would ensure the victim remained still while the criminal emptied his pockets of any cash or other valuables, and sometimes it was tight enough to cause unconsciousness so the thief could make his getaway. “This is something we will be covering in future history classes,” said Bernard. “Let me just ask the assistant here if there is a display of these items.”

Of course there was and the boys drank it all in, as boys everywhere, they loved the gory parts of history. There was a “garotting chair” on display and Bernard told them particularly vile criminals would be chained in the chair with a garotte around the neck and paraded through the streets as entertainment for those who crowded the balconies on both sides of the street to boo and hiss and throw rotten fruits and vegetables. Even women sometimes suffered this fate. Greg asked why and Bernard answered, perhaps they had been declared witches or perhaps they had run away from or murdered an abusive or drunken husband.

Dan said, “we’ll never really know and I think I am glad that such parades are no longer carried out,” Greg and Jim agreed on that. Maggie had joined them by then and was discussing the café’s food with Russell. “Such decadence!” she almost swooned, “pavlova is great as is, but whoever decided adding a touch of rum to the whipped cream is a genius!” Russell, always a philanthropist, had paid for her afternoon tea and now told the boys he would pay for burgers and milkshakes if they were hungry by now.

Pragmatic Bernard, said “I’ve been teaching boys for thirty years and they are always hungry!” 


Comments

  1. The first set of words inspire me to a bit of flash fiction this morning -- "Black Widow sweetly kisses her victims on the neck before applying the garrotte. Being both a philanthropist and a pragmatist, she kills them quickly and efficiently."

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    1. Debra She Who Seeks; nicely done. Thank you for playing.

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    2. Debra & River: Why would I "know" you're philantropists? ;-)

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    3. Sean Jeating; because we are helpful and kind?

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  2. Very impressive writing. Well done indeed.

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  3. 1.garotte 2.kisses 3.neck 4.philanthropist 5.pragmatism
    1.balconies 2.decadence 3.entertainment 4.genius 5.public
    Charlotte's colour of the month is Carmine, which I have not used today.

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  4. I tightened the garotte around my former lover's throat where previously I had placed a thousand passionate kisses - right there upon her curving neck. Any philanthropist must bend to pragmatism and Cynthia simply had to go. On balconies from Dubai to Buenos Aires I had considered pushing her over. Her decadence had become as distasteful as her unfaithfulness and for my own entertainment I had simply toyed with her for the past two years. It was a kind of genius really but a drama that the watching public always found mesmerising - especially when that carmine stage blood pooled before the final curtain.

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    1. Yorkshire Pudding; very nicely done, but poor Cynthia. He could have just walked away and left her.

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    2. I am glad my name is not mentioned within this context.

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    3. Yorkshire Pudding:
      Hi ha moltes més solucions que aquesta.
      Un ús de les paraules una mica esgarrifós.

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  5. River, I'm glad they got to see everything, and yes, boys are almost always hungry.

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    1. messymimi; this is just the first of the exhibits, there is more to come. Teenage boys, even 12 year olds seem to be bottomless pits when it comes to food.

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  6. Very good R. When you first started the paragraph, I thought they were going into a nursing home to live...trust me..lol.

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    1. Margaret D; William is moving into a retirement village, but the rest are staying in their homes.

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  7. Very, very, very great story, this was a fine read! The teacher must´ve been really good - reminds me of my English teacher.

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    1. Iris; Thank you. I had Math and Science teachers who were really good.

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    2. Wow, you were lucky. My Math teacher thought math is not for girls. He came from Bundeswehr and always managed to get tanks and stuff into math. I hated him. Physics was a "Dr" and was frustrated it was so cold in Sydney when he visited in our summer. What a dumbhead.

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  8. Nice story, and good that they are invited to see the exhibition before it opens.
    I read of the garrote as well, and some of its female victims were cyanide killers and such ;)

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    1. Charlotte; thnak you. I was guessing for reasons why women would be punished with the garotte, but it's true there were female killers even way back centuries ago.

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  9. Sounds like a glorious day for the boys. And for Maggie, too!

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    1. Val; I imagine it was and pavlova is one of my favourite things so I had to use it.

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  10. River: Una bona història, com ja t'he dit, seria un bon llibre.
    Generalment els nens, fins a una edat, mengen com a piranyes. ;-)

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