Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by messymimi and can be found here
Charlotte's colour of the month is Sea Green
This week's words/prompts are:
1.shell 2.deck 3.chest 4.proof 5.dawn 6.effective
and/or:
1. brabble: a loud, dumb argument
2. izzard: the letter Z
3. picaroon: a scoundrel
Here is my story:
When dawn was still
just a shell pink smudge on the horizon Nathan rose from his chair on the deck
and made his way over the side via a very effective rope ladder to the dinghy
waiting below.
Keeping the pink behind
him as a guide he rowed towards the island until he could easily see the rift
between the palms where a plane had crashed many years ago. Some palms
had regrown, but the path between was still clear enough to follow.
The previous evening,
Nathan had studied the map left behind by that thieving picaroon for probably
the thousandth time since finding it. It was etched into his memory like a
brand.
He drew near to the
shallows and stepped out of the dinghy, attaching a long chain to the bow and
then to one of the palm trees with a heavy padlock. The key was on a smaller
chain around his neck.
After counting past the
fifteen palms noted, Nathan looked around for the rock that didn’t belong. After
all these years he hoped it hadn’t been sanded over by too many hurricanes.
Glancing back towards the beach, he saw the
sun was almost above the waves now and would soon light the way through the
tallest of the palms and show the position of the rock.
And there it was! The
sun glanced off the rugged edge of it and Nathan pulled the folding shovel from
his pocket and began to dig. One foot down, then two and halfway to three feet
he felt the shovel hit wood.
He used his hands to
scoop out more sand and gently removed the old jewellery chest, which still
should contain not only his grandmother’s pearls and diamonds, but also the
papers that were Nathan’s proof of ownership to the family mansion.
He wrapped it tightly in
his old sea green shirt and retraced his steps beck to the dinghy. The chest
wouldn’t be opened until he was safely back on board and in his cabin.
Quite a find! Lucky Nathan - some treasures are priceless.
ReplyDeleteHere is mine, of course from real life as I am not creative at all!
I was learning to crawl and walk on my Uncle Siegfried´s boat, the one I never was allowed to call Uncle cause he felt old then. He´d built the boat himself, two stories.
Every shell or crumble I found I reached up to him as proof I can do that. An effective cleaner from dawn on, also on the deck. He took me up to his chest and said, "well done, litte Iris!" And maybe sometimes I was wearing a sea green shirt ;-)
He told me the story so often it feels as if I remember it! He called me "little Iris" all his life. He suffered Alzheimer´s but remembered me till the end.
Now I really miss him...
What a sweet memory.
DeleteHow could he resist opening it immediately?
ReplyDeleteHow nice for Nathan to find the chest. If I was him, I would open the chest to check if all the things he hoped for are there. Things just go lay about without somebody seeing it. Good use of the WFW prompts.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.