Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1.countenance  2.favourite  3.once  4.pillow  5.regret

and/or:

1.bags  2.faces  3.machos  4.steps  5.swearboarding, which I didn't use

Charlotte's colour of the month is Smoky Rose.

Here is my story:

Climbing the steps back onto the bus a few minutes later, they all felt more tired now the outing was over and looked forward to the comfortable chairs in the TV room. Gordon counted head as he always did and smiled to see Denise using her big soft purse as a pillow, her eyes already closed. The driver set off slowly, then faster once they turned onto the highway. Cassie had her bag on the floor between her feet, everyone else held bags firmly on their laps.

Sally and Doug noted the tired faces, but knew that none would regret their day at the beach, the faraway look in Cassie's eyes meant she was mentally storing every moment to write into her diary later in the evening. The beach had always been her favourite place to go and Sally knew this would be her last trip.

She leaned back and closed her own eyes for a few moments only to be violently jerked awake as the driver swerved and slammed on the brakes. Resting with two wheels off the bitumen, they all watched as several open-top dune buggies sped past, swooping and swerving along at great speed while the young drivers and passengers, who appeared to be quite drunk, tossed empty cans from their vehicles.

The sudden stop had caused most of the "Twilighters" to jerk in their seats, Sally and Doug, with Gordon, checked each passenger. Most appeared to be unharmed, though a little upset, with Marjorie haughtily declaring,"I simply cannot countenance such rude behaviour!"

Lucy had bumped her head against the window while Denise seemed to be still asleep, but Gordon noticed the change in her face and body. Denise was far too still and he quietly told Doug and Sally that she appeared to have died in her sleep. The driver, known as Mick, because his indigenous tribal name was too hard to pronounce, asked the passengers to please remain calm as Denise was moved to the long bench seat at the back of the bus. All of them immediately realised what had happened and were silent for the rest of the journey.

Back at their home, Doug went ahead to inform the head nurse of the death, and everyone else quietly went inside to put their bags away in their rooms. Gordon stayed with Denise until a couple of ambulance drivers arrived to carry Denise out on a stretcher and take her to the nearest hospital. They later discovered she would have been already dead before "those machos idiots" as Marjorie called them, had caused Mick to carefully swerve and stop the bus. 

Chatter in the TV room was subdued that evening, many saying "at least she died happy."


Comments

  1. Gost3ei de ler tua interessante históriua!
    Deixo beijos sabor praia, chica

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  2. Neither Wednesday nor Friday, but nice little story.

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    1. Anvilcloud; thank you. It is Friday here in Australia.

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  3. It’s been a beautiful story, with a happy/sad ending. Kind of like life, right?

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    1. messymimi; thank you. I still have a couple of chapters in mind.

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  4. Sad, but still a happy ending. It's good that she did not die earlier on. That would have ruined the outing ;)

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  5. I am so sad for Sally.
    Maybe you read about Sami and her Dad´s last journey? Just now? Bitter-sweet.

    Ack. An Aussie-thing with drunk-driving? We sadly were on a ute ... ack... I was so scared.
    Oh and Denise. Though, on second thought - what better way? Wonderful day at the beach and that was that.
    Yes. To dying happy.
    A goal.
    Good story.
    I know both ways, the long and the short. Dad suffering, Mum laughing. Both, before they left. 10 years apart.
    Gosh and do I miss them right now. We´ve been to the beach with Mum as kids in summer, living in a small, rented campervan.
    Thank you for all the memories...

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    1. Iris; I haven't been to Sami's blog in a very long while so I didn't know about her Dad. And I know about drunk driving too, kids in summer holidays old enough legally drink, then driving to and from beaches or anywhere else without thinking of the dangers.
      Denise had her fun kicking small waves, and her longed for ice-cream, so I think she died happy.

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    1. Ruby Rose and the Big Little Angels 3; thank you.

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  7. Una història agredolça però molt ben escrita.

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    1. Paula; thank you. The story is about very old people so it is expected at least one will die.

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  8. This made me think of the lyrics in the Kenny Rogers song 'The Gambler.' "And the best you can hope for is to die in your sleep." Denise had a good day at the beach. She relaxed into a nice nap, and now is resting in peace for eternity. Not a bad way to go.

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    1. Val; in my opinion the very best way is to die in your sleep. I hope I do that when it is my time to leave.

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  9. I can no longer countenance the use of made made up words like "swearboarding" and "machos". But do I regret the slang of my youth? We would "bags" our places and everything was "der" instead of "d'oh". My favourite slang expressions are those of the olden days, where things were "doolally" and "skewiff". And I wonder - at what point should society take steps to stop the cultivation of such slang? Once we take that path we will no longer have the a live language. Things that I contemplate when my head should be on a pillow, hey?

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    1. jeanie; well done using the words! I like most of the slang words as long as I know what is meant and I remember skewiff, but not doolally, I think that was more and English term in some sitcoms.

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  10. This was so sad. I didn't expect this turn of event.

    Have a lovely day.

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    1. lissa; the people in the group are all elderly, 80 years or more, so it is expected at least one might peacefully fall asleep and never wake up.

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