Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write, a story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by ME and can be found right here.
This week's words are:
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write, a story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by ME and can be found right here.
This week's words are:
1. refocusing
2. theatrically
3. unimaginable
4. olive oil
5. footrest
6. relieved
and/or:
1. roughly
2. mythology
3. disconnected
4. expansive
5. campfire
6. singing
Here is my story: (I didn't use all the words, they'll show up in another chapter eventually)
Irene
picked up the Mythology book asking “Are you interested in all mythology or
just certain stories?” “I like all the stories,” said Bernice. “I started
reading from the first one, they’re alphabetical and I’m up to Merlin now. He’s
a favourite.” She took the book and wiped the cover with a damp cloth then
dried it carefully. Irene realised her mistake immediately and apologised for
not wearing gloves. “Not to worry,” said Bernice. I’ve got these sanitising
wipe things now. And I can see you’re a clean person anyway. Not sick or
anything, like some you see, sneezing and coughing everywhere. I’m relieved you’ve
come so quickly this time. Come in and sit down, I’ll bring the tea and cake. I
remember you like your tea black Inspector Grace, Detective aren’t you, that’s
right.” Bernice wandered towards the kitchen muttering to herself, “gotta tell
about the man, don’t forget.”
Stanley and Irene let themselves into the small
living room and made sure notepads and pens were ready. It was obvious Bernice
had a tale to tell and they wondered what was at the beginning of it all. All
they had to go on were the roughly penned letters that came every year. “Has
to be about something that happened here, in this area,” said Irene. “What do
you know about things from that long ago?” “Not much,” said Stanley. “There’s
some cold cases back in the old file room, we may be able to link to something
there, depending on what Bernice has to say.” “Hmm,” said Irene. “All we really
have is the letters that have come every year, nothing in any of them to
suggest a link to anything else, so really there’s nothing to go on, unless
Bernice has seen someone specific that we can connect something to.”
Bernice
came in just then wheeling an old tea-lady style trolley and laid out cups and
saucers. Waving expansively across the table, she suggested Stanley and Irene
come over and help themselves. “This ain’t no hotel and I’m no waitress,” she
declared. “You make your tea the way you want it and slice the cake thick as
you like.” When they were all settled with tea and cake, Stanley asked about
the urgency and who was it Bernice had seen.
“The man! I seen the man! The one what was here a long time ago and did
something bad.” “How long ago did this bad thing happen?” said Stanley. “How
can you be sure it is the same man? He has probably changed a lot since then.”
Bernice rose from her chair and stalked about rather theatrically, waving her
arms, mumbling, then started, “years and years ago, I was in old Doc Wurtzel’s
hospital, looked after me good he did, old Doc. Anyway I was allowed out to go
for walks and stuff, so one night I’m walking down around the town, looking in
windows to see clocks ‘cause I have to be back in time for late supper, and I
saw this same man, was running out of the Cove Hotel with a blanket over his
shoulder, like a fireman carries someone out from a fire.” She stopped and
thought for a while. “Didn’t see all his face, it was dark, but saw enough to
see, was that man was sweet-talking young Stephanie. She really got took in
that poor girl. I seen him with her a few times, asking all about who was
staying at the Hotel, wasn’t interested in Stephanie, I could tell, just using
her.” Bernice fell silent and Stanley wrote down what she had said.
Irene
gently brought Bernice back into the story, “what year was this, do you
remember? And what was it about him that scared you, do you remember that?” ‘Oh,”
said Bernice, “I was just rememberin’ that was about the time when Stephanie
got hit on the head and woke up to find a dead woman and got all crazy like,
and come to live with us in Doc’s hospital. I miss old Doc.” Muttering to
herself again, Bernice appeared to be disconnected from the current
conversation, then suddenly refocusing, carried on where she had left off. “That
man,” she said. “He’s got a big crooked nose and a purple spot on his cheek,
that’s how I know it’s the same one. I saw him when I went to the stream for
water, he had a illegal campfire going, singing a bit he was.” “Is he still here now?” said Stanley. “I didn’t
see him after I got the water, I was scared to go back, he’s got crazy eyes, I
saw when he was carrying that blanket that time, leavin’ the Hotel he was, all
in a hurry. I think he was the one killed that person and stole something and
carried it out in that blanket.”
Yes! You must continue this tale in future weeks!
ReplyDeleteVal; I'll see what I can do...
DeleteAbsolutely!
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; I hope next week's words fit.
DeleteThe plot thickens...and thickens well! You've captured our attention, River.
ReplyDeleteYour story is great...and I'm sure that I, like the rest, are keen for the next chapter. :)
Lee; I've been hoping the plot thickens, I'm not sure where it's going though.
Deleteexciting developments! I love the dialog between all of them!
ReplyDeleteCindi Summerlin; I do like dialog, I hear them talking in my head, so I just write it down.
DeleteVery impressive the way this story is developing, I look forward to reading more, Nicely done River.
ReplyDeleteJimmy; thank you. I hope the next chapter fits well with this one, depends on the words really.
DeleteYou always have such wonderful intriguing stories.
ReplyDeleteMargaret-whiteangel; thank you, I'm glad you like them.
DeleteThat Bernice gets around a fair bit. I was quite surprised when she turned up on my blog . does a bit of time travel too.
ReplyDeleteVest; interesting that Bernice gets around so much, she must be sneaking around after dark.
DeleteWipes are useless, See my blog.
ReplyDeleteor have you run out of travel expenses?
Vest; the wipes are because Bernice has a germ phobia.
DeleteGood job, as always! I especially like your dialog. You've made Bernice a very realistic character.
ReplyDeleteHave a super weekend!
Susan; I enjoy writing dialog and I like Bernice. She isn't crazy just a little different. Eccentric.
DeleteCrazyt eyes....love it.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; I've seen crazy eyes on a few people and they sure do make you feel uncomfortable.
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