Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
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This month the words are supplied by Margaret Adamson and friend and can be found here.
1. haircut
2. speculate
3. dangling
4. molluscs
5. crinoline
6. couches
and/or:
1. basketball
2. thimble
3. knickers
4. juggling
5. freelance
6. parachute
Here is my story: (with most of the words):
Betty parked her car and walked around to the front of
the thrift shop. Named Sally’s Sweet Seconds, it had only been open for a year,
but business had been reasonably good. One didn’t normally see a thrift shop in
the high end of town, but Betty supposed even the rich needed somewhere to pass
on their unwanted stuff.
Fishing for the keys, she didn’t notice at first, but
when she looked up, Betty stopped dead in her tracks. Six large carboard
cartons labelled “donations” were blocking the entrance to the store. She
managed to nudge one aside and open the door, heading straight for the phone.
“Edith! It’s me, Betty. You’ve got to get down here
right away!” “Oh no,” said Edith. “What’s happened? Should I bring the police
or an ambulance?” “No, no, nothing like that,” said Betty. “It’s just someone
has left us a huge donation. Six big boxes, sealed with duct tape and labelled
with a sharpie pen.”
Edith put down the phone and called to her husband,
Gary. “I’ve got to get down to the shop, someone’s left things there and Betty
needs a hand.” Engrossed in a TV program, Gary just waved a hand in her
direction to indicate he’d heard and off she went.
Arriving at Sally’s Sweet Seconds, she saw that Betty
had managed to drag a couple of the boxes inside. ‘What do you suppose could be
in them?” said Edith. “I won’t even begin to speculate,” said Betty. “But let’s
call Rosa before we start opening, she loves surprises, declaring each new box
almost as good as Christmas.”
“I’ll phone her, lucky today is only a sorting day, we
don’t have to open to the public, so we can take our time with these.” Rosa
promised to be on her way within half an hour and the two women sat in the
small kitchen at the back of the shop to wait for her. “We could probably rip
off the duct tape while we wait,” said Edith. “I hate that stuff,” said Betty. “You
do it and I’ll make us a cup of tea. Is there anything left in the biscuit tin?”
Sitting with cups of tea and sadly, no biscuits, the women
waited for Rosa to arrive. “You know, Betty,” said Edith, “if we put a couple
of small couches alongside that window wall, we’d be a lot more comfortable and
others could sit and wait while their friends rummage through the racks.” “That’s
a good idea,” said Betty. “I’ll mention it to Sally next time she comes around.
Here’s Rosa, oh my goodness! Look at that! She’s had a haircut!”
“No!,” exclaimed Edith. “After all these years? What made
her do that I wonder? Rosa! I love the new hairdo, what made you cut off all
that hair?” “Bob wants to take a holiday in Mexico this summer and several
people have told me how hot it is there and being on holiday, I didn’t want to
waste time each day putting it all up every morning,” said Rosa. “Now let’s get
into these boxes!” “You don’t want a cup of tea first?” said Betty. “Heck no,”
said Rosa. “I’d rather open boxes. No idea at all where they came from?” she
said as she pulled open the first one. On top of several nicely folded nightgowns
sat a tray of dangling earrings. Rosa gasped. “I know where these are from,”
she said.
“These are from Sally’s mother’s place. I remember
cleaning these earrings for her after each outing. My mother was her personal maid, she used to tell me ironing all those crinolines was hard work and something she hoped to never do again. These are real gold and
silver and the stones are genuine.”
Betty said, “Sally did say she would be clearing her
mother’s house after the funeral, but these are much too good for a thrift
shop.” Edith began taking out the nightgowns. “These feel like real silk,” she
said. “They are,” said Rosa. “And not that second-hand parachute silk my
grandma made knickers from after the war either. This is the best silk
available, I don’t recall where she said it came from.” “We’ll have to put a
decent price on them,” said Betty. “Did Sally say when she would be back in
town?” “I haven’t heard from her in a while,” said Rosa. “She’s busy juggling
kids and a job, she’s doing freelance articles for a local newspaper. Her last
letter said finding time to get down here is like trying to fit a basketball
into a thimble. I thought I read it to you last time we were all together.” “I
don’t recall that,” said Edith. “But if these are her mother’s things, how did
they get here if Sally didn’t bring them?”
“Sally did bring them,” said a voice from the doorway.
Sally herself stepped into the shop and Edith, Betty and Rosa all clustered
around her, like bees to their queen. I had Ryan rent a truck and we drove down
late last night. We dropped the boxes here early this morning and I came to
tell you I’ll be leaving Sally’s Sweet Seconds in your capable hands for the
next few months. We need to stay in Jonestown until Mother’s house is sold and
then decide what to do. I love your new hairdo Rosa.”
Well done, not an easy bunch of words to have to use.
ReplyDeletejoeh; I did get flummoxed for a few seconds, but the brain kicked itself into gear.
DeleteThat was a fun read and you used all the words. Great job.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; I missed molluscs, but I'm sure I can fit it in somewhere else some other time. Glad you liked it.
DeleteI really, really enjoyed this - and would love to read more stories about Sally's Sweet Seconds.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; I wouldn't mind reading more of it myself, but I didn't write anymore :(
DeleteYet.
Another enjoyable, imaginative tale, River. Well done. :)
ReplyDeleteLee; thank you :)
DeleteSmooth use of words - nothing awkward. You're so good at this.
ReplyDeleteGrace; thank you :)
DeleteVery nice story, and it's great that she has friends she trusts to run the store.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; these are old friends who have known each other for years, Sally is younger, but these older women were friends of her mother.
DeleteMaybe Sally can cough up a couple of couches, too! She's a real treasure, just like her donated boxes.
ReplyDeleteVal; I'm sure a couple of couches will appear in a later chapter.
DeleteAnother winner!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; thank you :)
DeleteThe crinolines and dresses may get snapped up by a theatrical org , but who wears silk Knickers these days (Names Please) unless anticipating a rumble in the boudoir to impress a new lover. Nice story E.
ReplyDeleteVest; the silk knickers may also be snapped up by theatre companies.
DeleteI got involved in the mystery and almost forgot to look for the words. Well done.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; It's good when a story takes you in, right? Thank you.
DeleteArkansas Patti. Often the words get in the way of a good story.
ReplyDeleteVest; if the words are in the way, the story is written wrong.
DeleteWomen always have the last word, is that correct?
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you wrote about what was in one of the boxes; my curiosity was brimming :)
ReplyDeleteAs always, a very smooth use of the words indeed. Your stories always leave me wanting more.