Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by River and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.herring 2.detectives 3.beer 4.mask 5.peaches
Not included is Charlotte's colour of the month: St Patrick's Green.
Here is my story: continued from and a bit longer than last week:
“Claudia Johansson, we
meet again, but I don’t believe I know your lovely young friend?”
My jaw dropped open.
“You remember me? But it’s been twenty years!” Rosie’s jaw was also hanging
open. “You two know each other?” she squeaked. “Of course,” said the gorgeous
young God, “we met when Claudia was in my grandfather’s peach tree, stealing
peaches. He had recently died and I was inspecting the house he had left me.
Came out to sit on the patio and have a beer and spotted the little thief just
before the branch broke, I raced over just as she landed on her feet. I asked
her name and she gave it right before leaping over the short section of the
fence and running away. And you would be a little sister perhaps?”
“Cousin, visiting
before school starts again,” said Rosie. “Roslyn Johansson.” “Christopher James
Landsdowne.” They shook hands as I tried to gather my thoughts. It wasn’t easy.
As a skinny twelve year old, I had instantly fallen in love, but as the years
passed I put it down to infatuation and cheap romance novels and almost succeeded
in forgetting him.
“I see you are walking
your dog,” said Christopher, noticing (of course) that I was yet unable to form
coherent words. “He seems to be very interested in my bacon sandwich.” “He does
love bacon,” I managed to say, “that’s what drew him to your gate.” “We had no
idea anyone was here,” said Rosie, “thought we might have to call the police in
case you were a squatter.” “No need for that now is there,” said Christopher as
he handed Buddy half the bacon sandwich. “I’ll leave you to your walk, but
perhaps you might like to come back later and see the house? I’m sure my dog
Zorro would love to meet Buddy. Bring your parents, we are neighbours after
all.”
We agreed on a time and
he turned to go back up the path to his front door. Rosie was ecstatic, “We get
to see inside this gorgeous house!” I couldn’t answer, realizing that it hadn’t
been infatuation at all, and I was still in love. How on earth was I going to
get through an entire evening in his presence? Later that day as I helped clear
away the dinner dishes, I confided in Mum regarding my worries. “Claudia, you
are no longer a dithering teenager,” she reminded me. “You’re both adults now
and I am sure you will cope just fine. Although this does sort of explain why
you have broken up with so many boyfriends. Call your Father please, let him
know we are ready.
I called Dad in from
the patio and went to see if Rosie was also ready. She had put on her prettiest
summer dress, but wore flat shoes in case we were shown around the grounds as
well. “In the dark?” I said. “There’s a full moon,” she replied. We locked up the house and walked the short
distance to the Landsdowne estate gates, surprised to find them open, with
lamps set along the path to light our way. Christopher met us at the solid oak
front door and ushered us inside, shaking hands all around. I noticed he held
mine a touch too long and had the crazy notion that it was on purpose.
Soon we were all seated
in a huge living room, beers in hand for the men, soft drinks for the rest of us.
Mum rarely drank alcohol anyway and wanted to be clear-headed if we were to
take the full tour of the house. “There’s a couple of rooms I can’t show you,”
said Christopher. “I’ve been removing what seems to be excessive from several
rooms and shoving it all into two rooms beyond the dining room.” He handed
around a tray of tiny dessert cakes, then left it within our reach as he
settled in a leather chair by the fireplace, one of a matched pair, with my
Father sitting in the other one. Dad began the conversation by asking Christopher
where he had been for the last twenty years and what had he been doing. “Start
with your favourite memory,” said Dad. They settled back in their chairs,
already firm friends in the way that men often are.
“My favourite?” said
Christopher. “And please, just call me Chris, all of you. My best memories are
the three seasons I spent in the North Sea on a fishing boat. We were fishing
for herring, using a purse-seine style net, there are autumn and spring
gathering seasons and I did two spring and one autumn, I would have done a
second autumn, but when we returned with our catch after the second spring, we
were held out to sea by coast guards and boarded by detectives searching for drugs
being smuggled. Our boat was clean of course, but it did look remarkably like another
old fishing trawler which was eventually caught and that’s where two thousand
packed bricks of heroin were found. I didn’t much feel like sticking around for
another season after that.”
“Sounds exciting,” said
Dad, who knew a fair bit about trawling himself. Granddad had been a fisherman
in his youth. A whine came from the hallway
and a dog poked his nose into the room as if asking permission to come in. “Hey,
Zorro,” said Chris, “come in and meet the folks.” Zorro sniffed us all in
turn and we remarked how well his name suited him. He was black and white, with
a large black patch over his back looking somewhat like a cloak and a black mask
around his eyes, similar to the Zorro I remembered from childhood TV watching. At
this point Christopher thought it was best to show us over the house, a mansion
really, before it got too dark as some of the rooms upstairs didn’t have lights
yet.
Coming on nicely I love the story so far. My only fear is that Chris will fancy the lively cousin Rosie instead.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; finally I can answer! All morning my laptop refused. Chris does not fancy Rosie at all, she is too young and still in school.
DeleteOoh, I do like a good romance.
ReplyDeletejabblog; me too, though I don't often write romance into my stories.
Deletedon't suppose either of them are drug detection dogs?
ReplyDeleteArcticFox; no, just regular pets.
DeleteHe seems like a good neighbor, I hope it's true.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; he is a good neighbour and they all get along together.
DeleteGood story, R. You did well.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteI very much do hope you continue! To show us the inside and... whom Chris will chose...? Will dogs become friends?
ReplyDeleteIris; the inside will be hard for me, I can't quite imagine it yet. The dogs become friends and Rosie is too young.
DeleteFun one!
ReplyDeleteJenn Jilks; thank you.
DeleteOh I have a dubious mind - but am inquisitive about more.
ReplyDeletejeanie; thank you. I am inquisitive myself but can't yet imagine the house interior or what happens next.
DeleteI'm thinking Christopher is a drug runner or something bad. I guess I have no romantic bones in me today.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.