Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1.bookseller  2. solve  3. shore  4. lied  5. buy  

and/or: 

1. folly  2. tales  3. love  4. curious  5. practical

Here is my story: continuing Claudia and Christopher's story:

 True to my word, I waited by the peach tree right after breakfast, with a small jar of the peach jam mum had made every year since the first time I stole the peaches. When Christopher spotted me a huge smile broke out on his face and when I presented the jam he opened it right away and tasted it from his finger! “Mmm, I’ll never buy jam again if your mum can make this for me every year.” “I can promise you that,” I said.

He wrapped an arm around my shoulder and asked would I like to go inside or explore the garden? “I have already seen a lot of the garden,” I said, “I’ve hopped over the fence many times and just walked around imagining things that might have happened in various parts of it."

 "For instance, that small cave like grotto thing in the corner by the honeysuckle arbor, what is that and what is it for?” He steered me in that direction and said, “that’s one of my grandmother’s favourite places, I’m told Grandpa built it for her, called it a folly, which I take to mean it as something pretty but not at all useful?” “That is one meaning of folly, I guess, curious but not practical” I said. “Tell me more about it?”

“I don’t know much,” Chris said, “only that it was supposed to be, not really magical, but a fairy grotto and Grandma was going to put a seat in there and little statuettes of fairies, elves and gnomes and her plan was to sit there surrounded by children as she told tales of life in Fairyland.”

“One mystery solved,” I said, “But there are no little statuettes, what happened?” “I have no idea,” said Christopher. “I only came for a few holidays back then, when I was very young, just beginning school, so that would be before you were born.”

“Well at least the seat is there,” I said. “I’ve sat in it a few times before I picked peaches, imagining it was part of my yard.” “You sat here and dreamed?” asked Christopher. “I love that you would do that and you know you are always welcome to continue.”

“But I have a job now, I’m grown up, and don’t have much time for fantasizing anymore.” “Would you fantasize about this instead then?” and he kissed me very gently. “I do still love you,” he said. “I still love you too,” I said, "but we can’t be lolly-gagging here all day, I want to see more of the house before Dad comes over to chat about your explorer years." 

"I believe he is going to bring you a model of a boat he bought once at a market place, he said it was a bookseller stall, with hand made models of things to illustrate what type of books he was selling. He thinks it might be a herring fishing boat."



Comments

  1. It's all developing very nicely. No nasty surprises in store, I hope.

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    1. jabblog; I think there has to be some sort of surprise, maybe not nasty, but something to add a little drama to all the sweetness.

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  2. Loud applause. And again I am super impressed at those of you who can continue a story using the different prompts.

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  3. This story has such a warm and nostalgic charm to it. The details—the peach jam, the childhood daydreams in the garden, the mystery of the missing statuettes—make it feel rich with memories and quiet magic. Claudia and Christopher’s connection feels effortless, and the way their past and present intertwine adds a lovely depth. By the way, I’ve just shared a new post—you might enjoy it: www.melodyjacob.com. Hope it offers something inspiring.

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    1. Melody Jacob; thank you, I like how the story is progressing so far.

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  4. It's coming along nicely for them, isn't it.

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  5. Oh, River. My brain reads the prompts and says: "...?".
    Just something like that: The bookseller in Whitford-SC played the invisible man. As in not helping me. Solve the problem, I did. I did not buy a book. I lied to Ingo "there was no proper book". Plenty there were. But when reading them?

    But that´s a lie, too! When Ingo was a volunteer for the Little Giant Girl in 2015 i Perth I got second hand books and read in the park whilst he was "working"...

    Not a fan of sweets, but, awww... I´d taste the peach-jam with a big grin! Don´t buy, "steal" and cook yourself some! And bring as pressie!
    Clever.
    And awwww..... You make me smile very big with her sitting in Grandma´s seat.
    To take Billy Idol´s words: "More, more, more" - of this love story, please, and of the place!

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    1. Iris; thank you, I'm sad the bookseller did not try to help, but some prefer to wait until asked, I usually look around for myself, and only ask if I cannot find what I am looking for. I will try to write more, but have to think hard about what the house is like inside, because I just don't know.

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    2. I always love to see other homes (after all that was part of my studies back in the day).
      Sometimes it even helps, too. I do know when fK asks if she can pop in I don´t have to panic about Ingo´s chaos - her place looks much "worse" - which is crazy, as her girlfriend has MS and can hardly see, plus they have teenage twins.
      Maybe Christopher´s place can look like where you grew up?

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  6. Lovely continuation of your story, R. I wonder will they really get back together again!

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  7. Ha ha clever use of the prompts. I did participate on my blog just now.

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    1. jeanie; thank you, I'll come over and read.

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  8. Oh nice continuation. I just hope he will not eat all that jam in one go ;)

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    1. Charlotte; thank you, He makes it last a little while, but he does love toast with jam.

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  9. I am sure you will continue surprising me. ;-)

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  10. I hope nobody stole the fairies, gnomes, and elves. Then again, if the place looked abandoned, and other kids hopped the fence, it might be okay if they took them, so they could be adored.

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