Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Messymimi and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.absent 2.satisfaction 3.combination 4.fun 5.echo 6.exempt
and/or:
1.between a rock and a hard place
2. knuckle down
3. long in the tooth
Here is my story:
There was much concern
over the recent number of absent students at the Meadow Hill College. Situated
high on a bluff, overlooking acres of untouched meadows, it was the elite
choice for the brightest students whose futures lay in science, yet over twenty
of them had emailed in notices from parents asking they be exempt from classes.
An investigation
revealed similar outcomes in other elite colleges around the world and now the
regular police, the Federal Police and Interpol were involved. Interviews with
all families revealed the purchase of a new exciting video game with one of the
youngest boys declaring it to be the perfect combination of satisfaction and
fun.
“We understand the fun
part, but where does the satisfaction come in?” asked Detective Rogers. “Beating
the “invisible” characters to reach the next level,” said Quentin, “they’re in
every level of the game and once you spot one, you can’t advance until you
vanquish it.” “None of the other boys have mentioned this,” said Detective
Rogers. “They are meant to be subliminal,” said Quentin, “and if you can’t blow
them up, you can’t advance. There is a way to do it without knowing, but you
have to stick with the game or it sets up an echo in your brain.”
“An echo?” Detective
Rogers reached for his phone to call his superior. “We need to call in the
Hacker Team,” he said. “Quentin here has uncovered a significant clue, it’s
possible he is also a Hacker and the kid’s only ten!” After discussions with
Quentin and his parents, the boy agreed to allow his laptop and the game to be
taken for investigation and also agreed to knuckle down and get his grades back
up to his usual A+ levels.
All around the world,
similar actions were taking place as soon as Quentin’s statement was heard. It
was vitally important to find out why the subliminal was there and how it was
affecting the students. The inventor of the game also needed to be found so he
could be questioned as to the purpose of the subliminal features.
This is quite a chilling story.
ReplyDeleteKathy G; thank you, I thought a change from my usual "all is good" might be nice.
DeleteOooh. I want to know more. And yes, it is a chilling tale.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you. I want to know more too, but can I dredge it up from the recesses of my mind?
DeleteIt would not surprise me to find someone using such games to try to control people. Let's hope it doesn't ever happen.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I suspect this sort of thing does happen more often than we know and we just don't hear about it. Video games with underlying terrorist messages etc. It filters into the brain while those playing don't even realise.
DeleteGood tale, but oh my R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteThis could take off into a full-length story - lots to explore and you can't keep your readers hanging . . .
ReplyDeletejabblog; a full length story is always a problem, I run out of ideas and I'm totally useless at research.
DeleteLOL - it´s but the boys!
ReplyDeleteI once was handled a ... Game-console.
I had no idea what to do and really... not an interest to find out.
The real tools Ingo has: Yes, Show me!
Interesting and scary story you gave us!!!
Scary story. Games can be enticing enough as they are with noi subliminal messages. I hope the white hatters are up to snuff here.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; I think the White Hats are onto it and the perpetrator will be exposed. I know nothing about such games myself, I'm too slow to "catch on".
DeleteYour story reminds me of a musical by The Pony's favorite composer, Paul Shapera. It's called "A Slenderman Musical." The second song, "Transcendation," is about a game that kids all over the world start playing on their phones, with a supernatural connection, and disappearances. Even I liked it!
ReplyDeleteHere's a link where you can listen for free, to individual songs, if you scroll down.
https://mochalab.bandcamp.com/album/a-slenderman-musical
Val; I haven't heard of this but I'll have a listen in just a minute.
DeleteI enjoyed this so much. Excellent characters and story line. What happens next? Next Wednesday?
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; thnak you. What happens next? No idea.
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