Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

Connemara coastline according to Google images

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The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Wisewebwoman and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are:

1.ambulance  2.bluebell  3.Sacristy  4.fountain

and/or:

1.magnificent  2.Connemara  3.castaway  4.trumpet

Charlotte's colour of the month is Thrash Pink.

Here is my story:

The boys left after a few minutes more chatting and cleaning up their plates and cups. They promised to come back the next day with a garden wagon to help move the cross and the Albatross. As they waved goodbye, William was using a sheet of sandpaper to smooth parts of the cross. When he was satisfied with the finish, he packed away all his tools after cleaning them and went inside to prepare some dinner from one of the loaves of bread and some cold cooked meats from the cold larder. Checking that everything was cleaned and put away, he went to bed, more exhausted than he felt he should be.

The boys arrived early the next morning with the wagon and some rope to secure the cross and the big wooden bird. Greg had also brought an extra walking stick, the tall type that hikers often use, to help William make his way down and around to Jim’s Nanna’s house. They knew it would be slow going and encouraged William to tell another story as they went, to help pass the time. He began: “My sailor Grandfather, Michael, came from a place called Connemara, it’s in Ireland and he couldn’t bear to stay there after his fiancé died suddenly.”

“I like the sound of Connemara,” said Jim, “it rolls nicely when you say it.” “How did she die?” asked Dan. “There was a fire in their kitchen, or so I was told,” said William. “She was badly burned and an ambulance was called for, though in those days it was most likely an old farm wagon drawn by horses, but she died before they got her to the doctor. Michael told me after that, he spent hours in the Sacristy of the local church, he described it as a simple building, set in gardens of bluebells and daffodils.”

Greg made a note of this and determined to paint a picture of such a place for his great Uncle as soon as possible. “I don’t suppose you have a picture of it?” asked Greg. “Not a photo, but a drawing as cameras probably hadn’t been invented back then.” “Nothing,” said William, “only a memory told to me by a heartbroken man. He ran away to sea, called himself a Castaway and joined the first ship that would have him. I remember tales of India where he first saw elephants and heard them trumpet as they made their way to waterholes, he thought they were the most magnificent thing he had ever seen.”

“I’m thinking sailing the world would be a good way to heal his broken heart,” said Dan. “It must have been,” said William, “he met a lovely young Indian woman but they weren’t allowed to marry, being of different faiths and of course the Indian Caste system had something to do with it as well. He did eventually marry an Englishwoman, and must have somehow convinced her to let him keep sailing while she stayed home and raised their babies. 


Comments

  1. Fabulous story. I felt like I was there.

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    1. DVArtist; thank you. I try to write so that people reading can feel they are in the story.

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  2. The first woman was lucky that she was not allowed to marry him, I wouldn't marry a man who sails around the world and let his wife home with babies. I think I would switch with him.

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    1. Ingrid; this was back in the times when men like Michael sailed on merchant ships carrying trading goods to far countries and women stayed home. The man telling the tale is in his 90s and he speaks of his grandfather.

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  3. What a great story! Thank youi so much for sharing!

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  4. That is a real good story, R. Thanks.

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  5. Oh boy, to continue sailing whilst she stayed home. Doesn't sound fun. But you told the story well.

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    1. The Happy Whisk; it was his job, he was a merchant seaman and he brought home money and goods for the family.

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  6. Go, River, go! Find a publisher.
    The peace of the night.

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    1. Sean Jeating; thank you 😀 I think it might be too early to be finding a publisher, I need to follow up more on the cave and the remains, also aren't publishers expensive? Or at least getting a book published is expensive?

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  7. Shoot. Blogger ate my comment and I forgot what I said (getting old!). I think it is a very bitter-sweet story and by no means would I have babies (well, that part is over now anyways ;-)...) and let the father sail the world, do it all alone and never know if he comes back... A different life back then.
    Also I go with Sean... you´ve written so many good stories...

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    1. Iris; it was a very different world back then, but even now there are men who travel for their jobs and the women stay home, maybe with jobs of their own, or maybe they also have jobs where they travel. I stayed at home while my soldier ex travelled around, going wherever the Army sent him on training manouvers etc. and then packed up and moved everytime he was sent to a different state.
      Thank you about my stories, but so very many of them are just short pieces to use the words, very few have multiple chapters that might become books, and even those aren't finished.

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  8. Una història molt ben lligada. Enhorabona!

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  9. Very nicely done! I can see this being based on a true story.

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    1. messymimi; thank you, but it is entirely fictional.

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  10. It's nice that they are hearing William's stories while he's still around to tell them. Little bits of history that will be lost unless they keep them alive by telling their own future children. Like an explanation for the origin of the albatross looking out to sea.

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    1. Val; what's even nicer is one of the boys always making notes and later drawing pictures from his memory, so all that William tells in his stories will one day become a published memoir.

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  11. So sad about the grandfather Michael's fiance. Sailing the world would probably have a lot of stories to tell. Good story.

    Have a lovely day.

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    1. lissa; that bit was sad, but remember it was back in the days of wood fires for cooking and heating with little known about safety etc and such accidents were more common. These days she would have been at a hospital much quicker and been saved. But that accident is what brought Michael to his sailing life and eventually his wife and family, without that William would not be there to tell the stories.

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  12. I love this adventure story River, well done with the words.
    XO
    WWW

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  13. More stories within stories, but thy're good, and they fit in.

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