Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 


The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Wisewebwoman and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are:

1.luscious  2.motel  3.wheelbarrow  4.joggingtrail

and/or:

1.suspicion  2.speedboat  3.graveyard  4.iris

Charlotte's colour of the month, which I have not yet used, is Thrash Pink.

Here is my story:

Nanna Ruby was waiting by the open door when they reached her cottage and directed the boys as to where to leave the cross and albatross as she helped William inside to a comfortable chair. “You look a bit worn out,” she said. “That trail gets harder every time,” said William, “I don’t think I can do it too many more times.”

“It’s no easy flat jogging trail, that’s for sure,” said Ruby. “If it wasn’t for the goods I might have asked the boys to put me in the wheelbarrow,” said William. Ruby handed him a cup of water, then placed a small tray table beside his chair with a glass of milk and a slice of cherry pie. “You spoil me Ruby,” said William, “and I bet that cherry pie is as luscious as always.”

“You bet,” said Ruby, “I get the cherries from that big old tree by the abandoned farmhouse, the lower branches are easy to reach and there’s always a willing young person around to get the higher ones.”

“There was a lot of suspicion about that house, I remember the police were there and those detectives from the city, the family living there were never found,” said William. “Someone put a marker in the graveyard though,” said Ruby, “by the patch of white iris, where it’s a bit boggy after a rain.”

The boys came in and washed their hands at the sink before also sitting down with glasses of milk and slices of cherry pie. “You make the best pies,” said Greg and Dan nodded in agreement. Jim said, “you’ll have to teach Mum and write down the recipes for everything else, these pies at least need to be remembered forever.”

After eating, they took plates and glasses to the sink, rinsed everything, then went back outside, Greg and Dan to head home and Jim to sit and write about his day after taking photographs of the unpainted cross and the albatross.

Ruby and William continued talking. “I’m going down to town tomorrow,” said William, “and wonder if I could stay here tonight?” “of course you can,” said Ruby. “What are you doing in town?” “I’m staying in a motel for a couple of days while I meet with people about maybe finding a place to live, I’ve just about emptied the cabin of everything superfluous and anything left can be for the next person to occupy it.”

“You’ve been there more than eighty years,” said Ruby. “It will be a big change living among people.” Jim had come back inside and now asked William if he would like to visit the dig site when he came back from town. “I would love to,” said William. “They’re going to be packing things up in a few days,” said Jim. “The cave I fell into is empty and the walls have been stabilized in case they need more soil samples later, but we are allowed to go there as long as we don’t go into the cave.”


Comments

  1. I hope William can get used to living among people again, I'm not sure I would. And now we look forward to hearing from the excavation team ;)

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    1. Charlotte; I think he will manage, it is a very small town, more a village. I have to get my brain working for the excavation parts.

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  2. Interesting take on the words River, will there be more to this story? I hope so.
    XO
    WWW

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    1. Wisewebwoman; thank you, there will be more, this is an ongoing story with several chapters by now.

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  3. Wow! You are an incredible writer. Love this story.

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    1. Susan Kane; and then? I'm not sure yet, we'll see how next week's words go.

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  5. Segueixo aquesta història tan interessant, vols dir que no la publicarà a un llibre?

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    1. sa lluna; the Greg character in the story may well eventually publish his great-uncles memories in a book, but not for many years yet, he writes down every story William tells him, then later does more research on his own and eventually has a manuscript for publishing, but Greg is only 11-12 years old right now.

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    1. Linda's Relaxing Lair; thank you, I enjoy the challenge of fitting the words in.

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  7. Nah! I won't repeat what I wrote the other week. ;-)

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  8. A round of pie for everyone! I'm relieved that William will be safe in town.

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    1. Val; I love apple pie. William in his 90s will be safer than high on a mountain with a tricky trail to manouver.

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  9. This was a joy to read, River! Glad the boys put the plates and glasses back, clean and didn´t leave it to Nanna as my cousin did!
    You even made my sweet tooth wake up - where to get a cherry-pie?! I know they have cheese cake at REWE...
    More than 80 years in a cabin. Hm. I think after 5 1/2 weeks I´ll be happy to be in our condo again... have my own room. But I sure look forward to sit at the small, round table with our laptops and having maybe Jamie on TV in cabin #79!!! Soon.... And changing from 1C to maybe 40! Plus....

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    1. Iris; the boys are well trained, as often happens in very small communities, they haven't learned big city ways. Do a search of bakeries near you and maybe one of them makes cherry pies when cherries are in season? In my story Nanna makes her own and cherry jam too. Cherry cheesecake would be great! I think William enjoyed his time in his mountain cabin, be he is wise enough to know that now he needs more help and to be safe.

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    2. When our parent´s´d passed we found cherries our Nanny conserved (?) from 1978! Maybe still good? We threw them away, though. My parents had two cherry-trees, sadly so old my Brother had to tear them down a couple of years ago... We just went onto the balcony in our youth and ... from hand to mouth, it was wonderful!
      Sweet tooth fell asleep....
      Yes. One day.... we all need to give up our lifestyle and accept we need help. A scary thought. I really hope I just fall down and that was it then...

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  10. Lovely story R. Hopefully he doesn't have to go into the cave again, he knows he's not permitted.

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    1. Margaret D; Jim knows he isn't allowed in the cave and there is no reason for anyone to go back in except the archaeologists who might want more soil samples for reasons only they would know. The area will stay fenced off once all the tents and equipment is packed and moved out.

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  11. I bet William had interesting stories to tell, having lived over eighty years. Good use of the prompts.

    Have a lovely day.

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    1. lissa; I think he has plenty to tell and stories of his sailor grandfather as well. Thank you.

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  12. We do adjust, needs must, and maybe he'll find he likes it enough he'll wonder why he ever left.

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