Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by River and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.trembling 2.bobbing 3.rescue 4.green 5.redhead 6.potato
Here is my story, another chapter from God's Observation Deck:
God’s Observation Deck
Chapter 13
God had been pacing the
length of his observation deck all morning and Mary was at her wits end. “You
know how this goes, you know it takes time. Come and sit for a while. Would you
like me to call Peter to come and chat? Take your mind off what’s going on down
on Earth?
“I’m sorry Mary, you’re
right of course, but this new soul is something special, her destiny is to make
great changes in her lifetime.”
“Yes, I’ve read her book,” said Mary, “she will begin early and carry on come Hell
or High water.”
“Hell will definitely
come,” said Peter striding through the midnight-blue star-spangled doors and
joining them at the gold railing. “Lucifer got hold of a copy of the book and
knows just what this new soul will be doing. He’s bound to throw a few spanners
in the works!”
“Oh no!” said God,
turning to Mary. “Is the Guardian Angel ready to step down there?” “Already on
her way,” said Mary, “and she took a back-up with her, that Wizard who learned
so much from Merlin back in the day.”
“Two should be enough
to rescue her from whatever Lucifer plans,” said God, relaxing a little. “Perhaps
we could have a cup of tea Mary?” “Of course,” she said, “I’ll bring the cups
right out with some of that green tea that is supposed to be calming.”
As she went back
through the doors towards the kitchen, Peter nudged God, “you’re in for a treat
tonight. Mary knows this is a big day for you and is making your favourite
mashed potato and gravy dinner.” God smiled at this news and felt a little
better as he saw the arrival of the two Guardian Angels in the hospital
delivery room down below.
He sent a breeze to set the leaves trembling on the trees and cause the small boats to start bobbing on the water of the lake nearby. Mary came out with the tea tray and poured the tea as God and Peter helped themselves to cupcakes.
“Did you finish shining the
Pearly Gates Peter?” he asked as he bit into a second cupcake. “I did,” said
Peter, “all is ready for the new souls expected tomorrow.” He also took a
second cupcake as there are no calories in Heaven.
Just then a commotion
was sensed down on Earth and as one they all rushed to the gold railing to look
down just in time to see the new soul lustily announcing her arrival. “You made
her a redhead! With curls!” exclaimed Mary delightedly. “And deep blue eyes,”
said Peter, “like the ocean at twilight.”

No calories in Heaven? DAMN! I gotta try harder to get there then.
ReplyDeleteDebra She Who Seeks; there are any calories in Hell either...
Delete"aren't"
DeleteSweet tale. I love the guardian angel and helper. Nice team. You make me ask for more, who is that soul, and what will he do?
ReplyDeleteThanks for promoting my colour, more so noew when I-m doing such a bad job of it myself.
Charlotte; thank you. The new soul is a girl and we don't know yet what she will do. These chapters are all individual stories with none carrying on from the previous or to the next.
DeleteSorry for dropping an improtant 'S' I had noticed, and liked the detail that guardian angel and soul were matching ;) My vision is temporarily imppaired, so more than the normal number of typos from me :( Those are all standalones. Oh, then we'll never know.
DeleteGood work!
ReplyDeleteJenn Jilks; thank you.
DeleteNo calories in heaven, ohhh, a fine thought!!! Pizza, pizza, pizza! I´ll be good.... although... hell might be warmer - oh, it does not matter! Pizza.
ReplyDeleteIris; I'm sure Heaven will be warm too, it's almost always sunny up there (in my mind anyway) and Hell might be too hot but that makes good pizza.
DeleteWhere to go, huh?! Reckon Jamie´d say: Hell cause... Wood stove with real fire. Grat. Now I´m hungry.
DeleteI buy an "e" ... "Great"...
DeleteWhat a great story, R. You did it so well even writing some good old things. I really enjoyed that and could do with a cuppa..
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; I'm having a cuppa right now. Thank you
DeleteThis delightful. I smiled all the way through. Thank you for brightening my Friday morning. (Friday 13th, too!)
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you, I always enjoy inventing God's Observation Deck.
DeleteWhat a beautiful short story. Quite moving in its simplicity.
ReplyDeleteCodex; thank you, simple is often better than complex.
DeleteI love that they have gold railing. That made me smile. Fits well.
ReplyDeleteAlthough The Almighty already knows, it’s nice to read your very interesting stories.
ReplyDeleteGod sure has good workers. Great story.
ReplyDeleteI left a comment here. Where did it go?
DeleteThe lagoon was green the day when Liam and Hannah joined the rescue team in aiding in the rescue of Liam’s dog, Potato, who was never too bright. Liam saw Potato’s head bobbing, in algae covered water.
ReplyDeleteLiam scooped the trembling animal up and into the boat. They headed to the reeds while Liam looked at his redhead Hannah with love. Potato was not pleased with Liam’s affection for Hannah, so he nudged the redheaded woman into the green water.
It was the thing to do.