Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Janice and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.hand 2.useful 3.panic 4.horse 5.shape 6.sharp
and/or:
1.nuisance 2.boredom 3.quizzical 4.history 5.warfare 6.hair
and a bonus set of words:
1.notification 2.money 3.cotton 4.spray 5.clock 6.mug
Here is my story:
Hand over hand, with the
gentle pulling on the halter rope, the horse slowly emerged from the smoke
filled stable, at first just a hazy shape, then a muzzle and forelegs, and as
soon as Viking smelled fresh air he gave a snort and lunged outward, the
panic in his eyes still visible but quickly clearing as Cameron whistled softly
and patted his neck while leading him away from the sharp acrid smell that
indicated the fire was deliberately set and not accidental.
Julie was furiously
yelling into the phone at the police officer on the other end of the line,
telling him he had “better get out here quick smart!” or she would come and
drag him. Cameron chuckled at that,
picturing five foot nothing Julie trying to drag a six-foot twelve-stone
constable more than an inch or two. The fire engine siren announced its arrival
and men jumped out in all directions, unwinding hoses and looking for a useful water
source in case their tank ran out.
After inquiring if any
other animals inside they set about hosing down the burning stable and the fire
chief questioned Cameron. “A fine way to beat the summer boredom,” he said with
a grin, “but I wouldn’t recommend it.” “Have you contacted Criminal Investigation?”
asked Cameron. “They’ll need to examine what’s left, I know I can smell
something flammable, similar to kerosene, but can’t pinpoint what it actually is.”
“They’re on their way,” said Warren. “I left notification as soon as you rang
us.”
Jets of water began to
spray inside the stable as well as onto the roof, while surrounding areas were
also soaked in case sparks flew. “Paperwork is a nuisance always, but I’m going
to have to write this up in detail,” he continued. “You haven’t been here long
enough to make enemies, so I’m betting this is more of the warfare feuding
between the original owner and that old fellow up on the knoll behind you. The
history on that is quite long.”
“I know of it,” said
Cameron, “it was detailed in the forms attached to the will, Julie’s ancestor
and his cousin fought over who owned this particular field but no one knows
why.” Julie came out with a mug of tea for everyone, her hair still in disarray
from frantic finger-combing while she was on the phone. She swiped at sooty smudges
on her cotton dress while stating “that officer better be here before the clock
ticks over into the next hour!” “Sounds like you had Dudley on the other end,”
said Warren. He’ll be here, he’s just a bit slow getting started, but he’ll get
the job done in the end.”
This earned him a
quizzical look from Julie, so he told her he and Dudley were cousins of some
kind, second or third or something like that. She sighed heavily as a faint
siren sounded coming from the direction of town, “that will be him I guess, I’ll
go and make more tea and open a couple of packets of biscuits.” Shaking her
head at the devastation before her she marched off, muttering something about
money not growing on trees.
I like Julie, she sounds like someone who could do a lot. Good uses of all the prompts.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
lissa; I like her too, thank you
DeleteMuito linda tua história e na certa, o cenário não estava muito bom,apos o fogo por lá! E de verdade o dinheitro, infelizmente, não dá nas árvores,rs beijos, chica
ReplyDeletechica; thank you. I wonder now if somehow the cause of the old feud can be found and settled.
DeleteAinda bem que Viking se salvou do incendio. Gostei da sua história.
ReplyDeleteUm grande abraço
Verena
Verena; Viking was helped out by his owner who went inside to attach a halter and rope, luckily he saw the fire soon enough. Thank you.
DeleteI am so glad they saved the horse and hope they can get to the bottom of it. Maybe they can even make peace and stop whatever the old feud was about.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you. I also hope the reason for the feud can be found and a peace can be worked out.
DeleteIt's such a great thing to save the horse, and hopefully it will all sort itself out, R. Well written and a good story.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteGood use of words and yippee to the saved horse. Feuds are so... "dumb".... and yet so common. Our family-lawyer when giving us Mum´s last will said it´s seldom there is no feud with this! Sad, huh? How can you fight over the loss of a lost one.
ReplyDeleteIris, thank you. I think mostly the fights are over what was left to each heir and if they think it is fair or if they deserve more because...whatever reason. In this case, one person owned that block of land and the other person thought it should be his, but we don't know why. Yet.
DeleteYes. My Brother got the house, garden, business, BMW, Mercedes... and me two small condos to rent out. Perfect. What would I want with a house in Seesen?! Sadly he lets it rot away. And I don´t blame him. Seesen is "dead". I am the lucky one, I guess...
DeletePoint was: We accepted. It was our Mum´s wish. Her last wish. Be humble about that.
That Julie is fun to read. Another well done story. Happy Weekend!
ReplyDeleteThe hHappy Whisk; thank you. Julie is like my mum, get it done and do it right!
DeleteNo lives lost, but now comes the emotional toll of wondering who and why, and if something more will happen. Though there seems to be a logical suspect...
ReplyDeleteVal; the logical suspect may be the one or maybe someone is working on his behalf, the why is clear enough, he wants that piece of land, believes it should be his.
DeleteI hate it when animals are involved in dangerous situations, even in fiction, so I'm really glad Viking was safe.
ReplyDeletejabblog; I hate it too and am glad Cameron saw the smoke in time to rescue Viking.
DeleteYou have written an excellent story.
ReplyDeleteDVArtist; thank you.
DeleteBeautiful one! Amazing story, thanks for sharing!!
ReplyDeleteMary and Chris; welcome to drifting and thank you.
DeleteThank you for the warm welcome. It is so nice to be here with you all!
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