Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.contemporaries 2.easily 3.life 4.met 5.never
and/or:
1.one 2.say 3.sentence 4.who 5.within
Here is my story, continuing from last week:
"Guess I’ll have to make
do with whatever we have brought with us,” thought Alan as the catch was put
into an esky with ice and carried away. Turning to one of the older fishermen,
he sat down beside him and asked, “how long have you and your mates been
fishing here?” The old man was a bit confused and muttered something about “since
dawn”, so Alan clarified and asked, “how many years? Do you come every week? Every
day? Always the same people?”
“Why you want to know?”
asked the older man, “you from Bureau? Check fishing licence?” “No, no,” said
Alan, “just making conversation.” “You move on now,” said the older man, "you
make too loud noise, scare the fish away.” Alan rose to his feet, “say no more,
I’ll move on.” Walking with Doug back to the others, Alan said, “I used to be
able join others easily, all my life, when I met a new bunch of people, I’d say
hello, maybe one more sentence, then I’d be in, you know? Never got a cold
shoulder, didn’t matter who I spoke with.”
“Things change as we
get older,” said Doug. “Do you always accept strangers yourself these days as
you expected the old man to accept you?” Alan searched within his mind the few
times he had come on outings with his nursing home contemporaries and
remembered the few times “outsiders” had spoken to him and he had ignored or
snubbed them. “Guess I haven’t been as outgoing lately,” he admitted to Doug. “Living
in the home is different from independence, I think it changes us.”
“It’s good that you
realise that now,” said Doug as they stopped to admire Cassie’s sandcastle. She
had positioned her little redheaded dolls to look as if one were attaching
decorative shells while another scooped a moat and a third was planting a small
flag. The fourth little doll was setting out a miniature picnic on a tiny
blanket, but kept falling over in the soft sand. Sally brought Marjorie and
Lucy over and asked everyone if they were ready for lunch. “I can go up to the
kiosk and get fish and chips for everyone, while you all move to the shady area
under those trees beyond the sand. “And icecreams?” asked Denise. “After we eat
the fish and chips,” promised Sally.
Gordon helped Cassie
take photos of the dolls and castle, then helped her pack away the castle
building implements and the dolls before helping her walk back up to the picnic
area.
What a lovely little scene - and I do like the addition of the dolls!
ReplyDeletejeanie; thank you. I really need to get the dolls and castle building equipment to the beach and make a photo or two to go with the story.
DeleteAwwww, YES to that! Photos. please!
DeleteAnd yes. Reckon you change when you´re living in a home - but this is a very, very good one.
What will we be able to afford late in life? I´m a tad (a big tad) afraid.
Saw some docus. Many of the staff speak Polish only, have minutes for their "patients".
The home my Grandma "lived" in... everything looked the same, grey walls, long floors, she was stuck with a noisy woman in one room, it was terrible . I was a kid and all I could do was visit.
Maybe we (play and) win the lottery big and find such a nice, caring home at the ocean!
Iris; I always have fingers crossed for a big lottery win, so far it hasn't happened.
DeleteThis sounds like the perfect outing, with a bt of snubbing to make all the nice things stand out.
ReplyDeleteI like that there's a lady with four readheads in your story ;)
Charlotte; thank you, I think a bit of not-so-nice is necessary now and again, life isn't all smooth sailing that's for sure. I need to get my redheads to the beach...
DeleteTu sabes escrever belas histórias,gostei de mais essa! beijos, chica
ReplyDeletechica; thank you very much
DeleteSort que es va donar compte del seu error i que la història va acabar bé. ;-)
ReplyDeletePaula; thank you. Alan does need to learn a few things now thta he is living in a nursing home.
DeleteYes, always ice cream, but eat your supper first! It sounds like they’re having a wonderful day.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; if Denise had her way the ice cream would come first, so Sally won't be buying any until Denise has eaten lunch.
DeleteWhat I enjoy about your writing, River is that I can see the scenes in my head as I read. That's very, very cool.
ReplyDeleteThe Happy Whisk; I am so happy you can see this in your mind, thank you.
DeleteThat is a really lovely story R. Someone trying to be friendly and it's not the thing to do - the dolls have a nice mention.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you. Sometimes people don't want to be disturbed by others just wanting to be friendly, I wonder if that old fisherman has a large and noisy family and values his quiet time with rod and reel.
DeleteI's nice to see your little redheads making it into the narrative.
ReplyDeletejabblog; I like to include them when I can.
DeleteI can understand how the old fisherman would be suspicious of some stranger showing up and asking questions. I try to be nice to the weirdos I encounter, but I am also suspicious of their intentions. It does happen as we get older and feel more vulnerable.
ReplyDeleteVal; in my mind the old man comes from a place where people routinely swooped on people fishing and demanded to see licences and the size of the fish being caught. Sometimes I try to be nice, but sometimes I walk past as if blind.
DeleteIt's not easy to be friendly when others didn't like you want around.
ReplyDeleteGood use of the prompts.
Have a lovely day.
lissa; that's true, sometimes it's hard to be friendly.
Deletegreat story. It reminds me of parts of my life.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; thank you, I hope these were good memories for you.
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