Wednesday's Words on a Friday
On Wednesdays, Delores,
from Under The Porch Light, has a word challenge meme which she calls “Words
for Wednesday”.
She puts up a selection
of six words which we then use in a short story, or a poem.
I’m hopeless at poetry
so I always do a story.
It’s a fun challenge…why
not join in?
This week's words are:
1. muster
2. oncoming
3. progeny
4. rawhide
5. scarify
6. subjugate
and: "in deepest water lies the clue", which I haven't used.
Here is my story:
Chief Warden Abberttz
smiled smugly as his gaze swept over the subjugated mortals kneeling before him
in the rain. The newest regime was progressing well. The overwhelming sadness of
the people had allowed a rift to form and evil began to overtake the world. The
Overlords of the Criminal Underworlds had risen in power and darkness once more
ruled the earth.
People everywhere were terrified, they dared not stay away when
a muster had been called. It was rumored that missing a muster, even a midnight
muster such as this one, could result in all progeny being stolen from a
village and imprisoned in the camps of the Underworld Lords, where they were
trained in the dark ways once thought long forgotten.
They would be the Wardens
of the future, travelling from village to village reading out the new laws,
doling out punishments and tortures where people dared to disobey.
The villagers had been
counted and all were present. Several of the women were close to giving birth,
but those children were not to be included in the count until they had passed
their second birthday. Previously, unborn children had been counted, but too
many had died of the weaknesses brought about by malnutrition. Food supplies had
been scarce, with all crops being sent to a regional Central Storage facility,
where they were preserved and doled out to the villages according to the number
of people.
After the Lords had taken what they deemed to be their share of
course.
Chief Warden Abberttz
timed the crack of his whip to the crack of lightning to magnify the sound and
startle the people into a fuller wakefulness. He began to read the new orders,
the first of which stated all newborn males must be scarified along their
foreheads with their birthdate, then black ashes rubbed into the superficial
cuts to create a permanent stain. A horrified whisper ran throughout the crowd.
Facial tattoos had been banned decades ago! Any males having facial tattoos had
been hunted mercilessly and had mysteriously disappeared. Word had spread fast,
and some males had disappeared voluntarily, hiding out in forests and caves,
surviving (or not) the same way people had in the dawn of time. Hunting small
animals, gathering fruits and berries, being careful not to take too much from
any one area, lest the villagers be punished for not sending enough to Central
Storage. It was a lean existence and not many survived.
Things had changed
when the governments had gotten greedier and greedier, adding levy upon levy,
tax upon tax until the people lost faith, became disheartened, many of them
simply giving up altogether, sadness taking over, laughter being forgotten.
Times were harsh, punishments
were swift, executions were many. Governing Councils became greedy dictators,
tyrants, the rift to the dark Underworld opened. Evil prevailed.
Morgan Tarkon wanted a
return to the better days. He was only one man, but if he could overpower even
one Warden, that would be a beginning and maybe others would be inspired to
follow.
Dressed in a soot-black
rawhide cloak, Morgan used the rumbling, rolling thunder of the oncoming storm
to cover any sound as he rose from the shadows of the rocks behind Warden
Abberttz to sling a rawhide noose over his head and pull it tight enough to
cause him to fall heavily and unconscious to the ground. Stunned, the people of the
village could do nothing but stare as Morgan dragged the Warden to a stout tree
and lashed him to it with several strong vines. He pushed a rock into the
Warden's mouth and tied it there with another length of vine.
Then he turned and began
to speak. He first asked them to raise up from their knees, to stand before
him. Quietly, gently, he appealed to the people. He spoke of the revolutions of
centuries ago, where the people had stood up against their current regimes and
very gradually things had changed. It took time, much, much time and many
people died in the wars that followed, but a better lifestyle was the result.
“If we begin now,” he said, “our grandchildren’s grandchildren may have a
better life. This is something worth fighting for."
Morgan could see that
many were not listening, they had been beaten down until their spirits died. He
concentrated on the younger ones, making eye contact with those who still held
their heads high. He walked amongst them, touching each in turn and asking them
to follow him when he left here. They would take the Warden with them and
return him to his Lord after two full moons had passed. He received only three
nods of acceptance, but hoped those three might bring along more. Any beginning
was better than none.
He returned to the front
of the crowd of villagers, a pitifully small crowd he noticed and asked them all
to say no Warden had been seen in this area since the last muster three full
moons ago. Shocked gasps and whispers greeted this request, with the people
glancing fearfully at each other, each wondering could they do this? Would one
betray another? A glimmer of hope began to beat in more than one heart. Several
young men and women stood taller, Morgan could see they were listening more
intently now. Yes, this was the right village, he had chosen wisely. From here
his revolution would begin.
Now, this would be a frightening and deadly place for all humanity.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
After the muster of the subjugated Morlocks, the oncoming horde of Eloi overlords were seen teaching their progeny the best use of rawhide whips in order to scarify their ugly sub human morlock slaves and drive them back underground.
ReplyDeleteSubstitute Morlock for anyone considered undesirable, and Eloi for any oppressive organization of your choice.
BTW. GT has been snipped.ouch; poor GT.
Susan Kane; it is set some distance in the future and I hope it never comes about.
ReplyDeleteVest; I haven't thought about Eloi and Morlocks for ages. GT?
I am glad I went hunting for this - it didn't show up in my dashboard.
ReplyDeleteScary, and too possible.
Well done.
GT is Vest's Ginger Tom who he has adopted.
Elephant's Child; I'm glad you popped up here, I was wondering why I hadn't many comments. I thought maybe people didn't like the story and didn't want to say so.
ReplyDeleteI don't mind if someone hates my story and says so.
So GT is Ginger Tom, that's clever!
I think your story is great, River...have no fear. :)
ReplyDeleteYour stories just keep getting better and better. Fear not! Your brain and imagination are still quite brawny.
ReplyDeleteLee; thank you. It started out in a completely different direction.
ReplyDeleteSusan; thanks. It didn't go where I thought it would, I had in mind some kind of black magics, but it took itself to a horrendous future instead.
I really liked this one. Well done!
ReplyDeleteno-one; thank you, nice to see you here again.
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