Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Lee and can be found here.
This week's words are:
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by Lee and can be found here.
This week's words are:
1. comedy
2. shadows
3. loss
4. rainbow
5. emotional
6. heart
and/or:
1. contradictions
2. sensitive
3. legendary
4. engage
5. forever
6. never-ending
Here is my story:
The
shadows filling my heart since the loss of my parents seemed like they would
hang around forever.
I’d
been moping around my Great Aunt Millie’s huge house since the funeral, over
two months ago now and really didn’t want to go back out into the world where
strangers would tut-tut over me, exclaiming how unfortunate I now was, an
orphan and only ten, whatever will you do with her Millie? Great Aunt Millie’s
answer usually contained the words boarding school, not a huge surprise since
Great Aunt Millie was close to seventy, had never married and probably disliked
children until they’d been through a “good Swiss Finishing School” and could
hold a proper conversation.
Great
Aunt Millie was fond of telling people how overly emotional I seemed and that I
showed “sensitive” tendencies declaring that “after all, her mother was a
psychic, you know, and quite well known.”
One day
when I had been wandering around Great Aunt Millie’s rose garden, she called to
me from the side verandah. “Lexie! Come here dear. There’s a parcel arrived and
it has your name on it.”
I
was a little astonished that she’d called me Lexie, up until now she had
preferred the more formal Alexandra. I hurried to where she was waiting and we
both went into the front parlor where a large cardboard box stood. I opened the
letter attached to it and big black letters almost jumped off the page at me. “Lexie,”
it said. “I’ve sent you a little something to carry with you on the train. You’re
coming to visit with me for a while. Millie has been telling me you seem a bit
lonely, so she’ll put you on a train tomorrow and I’ll collect you at the other
end. Love, Uncle Finn.”
I
turned to Great Aunt Millie, “I’m going away? You’re sending me away?” My
bottom lip trembled in the way I knew meant tears would soon follow. Great Aunt
Millie said, “only for a while, to help you cheer up again maybe, Uncle Finn
has a smaller house with a lot more child friendly things in it, he’s a doctor
in a small village with lots of children around, he thinks being with him will
help you engage more with real life. Why don’t you open the box now? See what’s
inside?”
“It’s
a big box,” I said, “Uncle Finn said it was a ‘little’ something.” I tore open
one end of the box and tipped it up gently so the contents could slide out. It
was a unicorn! A rainbow coloured plush unicorn as high as my waist! I loved it
immediately and hugged it to myself as Great Aunt Millie informed me that the
upstairs maid, Constance, had been busily packing most of my clothes that
morning ready for the trip and I should now go up to my room to select the
outfit I would wear on the train.
I’d
never met my Uncle Finn, although I had heard stories from my parents when I
was little. Apparently he was legendary in the next county where his practice
was, knowing everything there was to know about children and what made them
tick. I began to look forward to meeting him.
The
train trip was uneventful, Constance had travelled with me and would return
that same day as the station at Glenmorran was at the end of the line. The
train would rest, refuel and load passengers for the return trip within a few
hours. About five minutes after getting off the train, I’d been enveloped in a
bear hug by a large man with a great deal of wavy red hair. He put me down and
put out his hand for shaking, as a proper greeting. “Lexie, I’m very pleased to
finally meet you. I’m your Uncle Finn. Finnegan Flannagan, that’s me.”
I’d
waved goodbye to Constance as we left the station in Uncle Finn’s big old
Volvo, named Bessie.
That
was several years ago and since then, my life has been a never-ending comedy of
contradictions as I learned to do things the rough-and-tumble village way
instead of the “good-finishing-school” method preferred by Great Aunt Millie in
the city. I met every village child within a week and their families too, was
accepted easily in every home, rebuffed by none and gifted a tiny cocker
spaniel puppy by the girl who was to become my lifelong friend.
I
never did go back to Great Aunt Millie and not to a boarding school either.
Uncle Finn didn’t agree with such nonsense. “If a child has a good family
around them, why send them away?” he’d say. “Kids learn a lot better in a
loving home, that’s for sure.”
I loved your story & warm, friendly Uncle Finn!!
ReplyDeletefishducky; thank you, I love it too. Uncle Fin is a big cuddly teddy bear type of person.
DeleteGreat Aunt Millie wasn't the dragon she seemed. She made exactly the right decision for Lexie.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; Great Aunt Millie has a little of the psychic herself :)
DeleteA lovely story, River.
ReplyDeleteYou blended the words into your tale so very well- built a happy story around them.
Years ago I knew a girl named "Lexie"...she was the older sister of a friend of mine...and she was quite a character. I liked her very much.
Lee; thank you. I never knew any Lexie's but on the bus one day recently a little girl was named Lexie, I heard her mother say it and I liked it.
DeleteVery nice River as always..
ReplyDeleteMargaret-whiteangel; thank you. Perhaps one day you'll join us?
DeleteWell, this leaves me wanting to hear more about Lexie in a future story.
ReplyDeleteval; we'll have to see how future words pan out. Maybe Lexie can get a chapter two.
DeleteGreat. I agree that finishing schools or boarding schools in my case were a miserable existence Bullying was the worst problem even in the schools for young ladies. In my case I became involved with a covert anti bullying team which had a huge success.
ReplyDeleteVest; an anti-bullying team? Well done. Someone needs to teach those bullies that what they're doing is wrong. I've only ever known one girl who went away to boarding school. She seemed okay when she came back to town for holidays, looked happy. Perhaps not all boarding schools are bad.
DeleteYes, it is when you go on holiday you are happy. returning is quite another matter.
ReplyDeleteVest; I'm retired now, so every day is a holiday :)
DeleteI'm another one who wasn't exactly happy at boarding school. I wasn't bullied but was confused by the layers of control. Never really knowing who was to be trusted.
ReplyDeleteIt sort of grew on you after a while - I missed home dreadfully but when I did come home for the hols everything seemed to have changed there. So it was back to the school again.
Anyway this is such a happy uplifting story River. Lexie is sure to succeed in life with the love and encouragement of Uncle Finn along with the no nonsense attitude of her Gt Aunt Millie. I'm hoping you won't disappoint us and we will hear more about the Life and Times of Lexie
Oh and thanks for dropping by and leaving a comment on my WfW post
Cathy
Cathy; I'm sorry to hear you weren't happy at school. I don't think I'd be happy away from home either.
DeleteNow, that's how a child should grow up!
ReplyDeletemessymimi; surrounded by happiness? yes, definitely.
DeleteI think I like Uncle Finn.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; me too, a big cuddly bear of a man who loves everyone.
DeleteI enjoyed your story everyone needs a uncle Fin, there are not a enough wonderful people in the world but if you look hard enough you will find one or two.
ReplyDeleteMerle.............
Merle; I know a few wonderful people, many of them online :)
DeleteThis is brilliant, River! Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteDiane Tolley; thank you so much :)
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