Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along and read it.
This month the words are supplied by ME and can be found right here.
Next month Delores will be providing the prompts which may or may not be words.
1. passport
2. movies
3. puffed
4. complete
5. transport
6. bleach
and/or:
1. avenue
2. helicopter
3. fair
4. clearly
5. foolishness
6. ability
Here is my story: a continuation of last week's chapter.
Chatting stopped momentarily
as the pizzas arrived and everybody filled their mouths with yumminess. After
finishing a slice each, Inspector Stanley Grace reached for the basket holding
several slices of garlic bread and handed it around. Only Harry declined, being
already halfway through a second pizza slice. Without discussing too much of
the case, Irene and Stanley agreed that after their lunch they would stop in at
the small Police Station here in Shark Cove; the bartender, Christopher having
been so kind as to offer directions. “It’s only fair that we keep the locals in
the loop,” he said, “we’d expect the same if they came into ‘our’ territory.” “We could also ask if they know anything
about Bernice or the Scenic Retreat,” said Irene, quietly, while Harry and
Eleanor were at the bar ordering more soft drinks and paying for their pizza. “Perhaps
with reference to a seam of granite?”
“Granite?” said Harry
overhearing as he came back to the table. “In police work it’s wise to never
take anything for granite,” joked Stanley, which made them all laugh. Irene
signed her name to Harry’s statement under Stanley’s and Harry’s names, then
Harry wrote down everything Eleanor could remember about that day. Paperwork
was then packed away into Stanley’s briefcase and he and Irene set off along
the avenue that led off the small lane to find the Police Station, which
Christopher had said was the front section of an old school building. Chris had
also said a large playing field beyond the old school had occasionally served
as a helicopter landing spot a couple of decades ago, when overseas tourists
had come to Shark Cove “all puffed up with self-importance’” declaring their
intention to shoot movies here. They had tried to bluff their way into free
lunches and beer and Chris had put a stop to that foolishness right away. The
supposed film producers hung around for a week or so, he’d said, but took off
pretty quickly when the locals made it known they were clearly unimpressed by
their complete lack of ability to even take a decent photo. He’d added, “June
Gardiner, she’s the librarian here, told them where they could stuff their
passports, and they were gone right after that.”
Irene had asked about the
library and they learned it was in one of the old school buildings, behind but
not attached to the main building where the Police Station took up the front
three rooms. Finding the building with no trouble at all, they walked in the
front door and dinged the bell on the counter. A slightly overweight balding
man came hurrying in and looked very surprised to see Inspector Stanley, who
was equally surprised. “Roger!,” he exclaimed. ‘So this is where you ended up.
I’ve been meaning to find out and come and see you, but you know how that goes,
something happens, then something else comes up.” "I know that so well,” said
Roger. “How have you been Stan? And who is this lovely young detective you’ve
brought with you?” Stanley introduced Irene, adding to her that Roger Stevenson
had once been Stanley’s partner on a case where it seemed they did nothing more
than sit in their car and stare at jewellery shops for weeks, after information
from an informant had said those particular shops were targeted.
Roger said, “Just let
me get rid of this bucket of bleach, I’ve been mopping out the toilets, then I’ll
be right back and we can get down to business. I take it you are here on
business? That skeleton up at Littleton?” “That’s the one,” said Stanley,” and
maybe some information on a couple of other things from years ago. There may be
a tie-in that could break the case for us.” “Righto,” said Roger, pushing the
mop bucket back through the door.
Well that's going to help big time..an ex cop...he'll know just what they are looking for. Another great job River.
ReplyDeleteonly slightly confused; Roger still is a cop, but stationed in shark Cove as nothing much happens there usually and he is getting older, nearing retirement.
DeleteYou have a dandy hand with dialogue. Well done!
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Wisewebwoman; thank you, I like doing dialogue, it allows me to write what's in my head.
DeleteIt seems that now we're getting somewhere, I hope next weeks propmts will bring progress in the case ;)
ReplyDeleteUglemor; I hope next week's prompts help too, but that depends on what Delores puts up for us.
DeleteI like that Harry and Irene are so organized and meticulous with all the information gathered.
ReplyDeleteChristine; Stanley and Irene are Police Officers so they need to be organised.
DeleteRoger is just what (who) they needed!
ReplyDeleteVal; yes he is, and when Bill Money pops in to see him I have a feeling things may take off.
DeleteGo, you guys! Bleach is always an attention grabber in a story!
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; and toilets must be cleaned, no matter where a story is set.
DeleteYou certainly are on a roll, River...and an excellent one at that! :)
ReplyDeleteLee; excellent? Thank you :)
DeleteAh, more help from an old friend. Good turn of events!
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you, Roger turns out to be quite informative.
DeleteAh ha, I now have high hopes for Roger to help. I'm assuming the bleach had an innocent use.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; yes, the bleach was just because of routine mopping out of the toilet block, Roger mans the Police Station on his own so all cleaning duties fall to him as well.
DeleteI always admire people who can write in these word challenges.
ReplyDeleteMisadventures of Widowhood; welcome to drifting. I used to always want to write, but could never get started, so these word challenges have really helped. Perhaps you'll join us one day?
DeleteWoo HOO! It looks like all of your puzzles pieces will be falling into place soon. It was a great idea to introduce another police officer who can provide additional clues and help them connect the dots. Again, terrific use of the word list.
ReplyDeleteSusan; puzzle pieces are dancing about all over the place. We just need this character to talk to that character and maybe mention someone else and things will begin falling into place. But not too quickly. As a reader, I dislike books where all the action happens in the final chapter and that's the end. I want to avoid that if I can. Action, of course, but no sudden ending.
DeleteGrab your tissues (I had to) - I've finished Heinrich and Elise's story and posted here: the avenue
ReplyDeleteI echo Wisewebwoman's comment on your ability to write dialogue. I find that the hardest writing to do, so my hat is off to you.
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