Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Cindi and can be found here
This week's prompt is: a picture is worth 1000 words. Paint us a picture of at least 100 words about this picture.
Here is my story, 156 words:
The helicopter slowly
circled the city for the fifth time this year, just as it had every month for
five years now. There was no sign of life.
Five years ago, when
the disaster had happened, copter pilots had seen an occasional light burning,
but now even those had been extinguished. There was no one left to be changing
burnt out globes for new ones.
Army personnel in Hazmat Suits had walked
through and found nothing, not even skeletons.
The trees that had been
denuded of foliage still stood stark and bare. No flowers grew, lawns had died.
No birds flew in the sky here.
No one knew what had
happened. It was as if the Bermuda Triangle had swallowed up every living thing
in the city. There had been no catastrophic weather event, no sudden sweeping
of illness, no bombs or other implements of destruction had been detonated. All
buildings still stood.
Still. Silent. Empty.
Yuck! what a story, but well written.
ReplyDeletecharlotte; sad story, but thank you.
DeleteTerrifying. Not least because I can see it happening...
ReplyDeleteElephant's child; I can see it happening, but with not even skeletons left behind?
DeleteYikes. What a frightening possibility. You scared me.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; I wrote what the picture told me.
DeleteSome place I don't want to visit.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on and stay safe
Dora; a place to stay away from, unless you are investigating what could have possibly happened.
DeleteThat makes the story I anticipated upon looking at the picture, of someone falling off a ledge, seem downright cheerful! They can't all be rainbows and unicorns. Good interpretation!
ReplyDeleteVal; true, not everything is sweet and simple, there are darknesses and shadows, unknowns too.
DeleteOh my goodness. Well done River.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteRiver!!! Warnings, please!
ReplyDeleteI have fear of heights and nearly fell off my chair, seeing that pic!
My Mum once "forced" me into a helicopter flight and I died a hundred times.
But you made me giggle. One of my Uncles, an engineer, built a boat and went with his wife and baby-daughter through the Bermuda Triangle.
They live happy in Mallorca.
Hmmm. It´s like Corinna hit your story.
In lock down it is just like that here. I watch it from the ground, no one will ever get me into a heli!!! (I made "blind" pics for Ingo... it was horrible. When that thing changed direction, ohhhhh...)
Iris Flavia; sorry. I did not choose the picture, that was Cindi this week.
DeleteI think I would love a helicopter ride.
I've heard that many people cross through the Bermuda Triangle with no trouble.
Ours (small German home town) was sponsored by the red cross, maybe you find such a heli-flight, too?
Delete1995 we passed by the Bungle Bungles. No idea if it was a tourist trap but the heli flight-prices rocketed higher than any heli could, so we skipped that.
Wow ... ... ...
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Victor SE Moubarak; thank you.
DeleteMarvelous story River, gave me the shivers as it seems all too real.
ReplyDeleteXO
WWW
WWW; thank you; the city does look spooky enough to cause shivers.
DeleteWhat happened was... This is all a dream. We will all awake and forget we ever dreamt this. Yes, that's it.
ReplyDeleteNo, I don't know but this is certainly a scary scenario. I hope never to see news reports like this.
Have a lovely day.
lissa; I hope it never happens, but the world is getting scarier.
DeleteA nice little dystopian nightmare. Robert Frost would be delighted. I am.
ReplyDeleteSean Jeating; welcome to drifting and thank you. I've never read any of Robert Frost.
DeleteSo here's for a beginning:
DeleteFIRE and ICE
Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To know that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
Ice would certainly suffice. More than suffice.
DeleteSean Jeating and Elephant's Child; thank you. So Robert Frost is poetry? That's why I've never read any. I don't do poetry.
DeleteBeing a big fan of dystopian writing, I really liked this one, River!
ReplyDeleteI probably should have called it post-apocalyptic, not dystopian, except we don't know if an apocalypse caused the problem . . . but I still liked it :)
Deletejenny_o; thank you very much. I hadn't thought of it as any sort of style, but those titles fit, although it is only one city that is affected.
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