Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by David M. Gascoigne and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. little 2. application 3. care 4. companionship 5. father 6. only
and/or:
1. farm 2. progress 3. hedgerow 4. wet 5. distinguished 6. industrial
also including Charlotte's colour of the month which is May green.
Here is my story:
Many years had passed
since the last of the industrial cities had failed, the robots that ran the
machines had broken down and no one knew how to fix them. Progress had stopped.
It had been at least a century, probably longer, since people left home and went to work each
day, no one even remembered how things had been done before the days of
automated drones took over. Society had broken down and cities all over the
world had become pockets of anarchy. Gloom and despair reigned supreme amongst
the filth and the rubble until one day, one remarkable day, when a traveller
arrived in one small city.
Not a city person, this
man walked without fear and with a smile upon his weathered face. He asked
directions of several people and came to the house he had been searching for.
The elderly couple residing there did not recognise him, but he was family,
descended from the brother of the elderly woman’s grandfather. They talked long
into the night and through the next day and when the traveller left, the
whispers began. Elderly spoke to elderly who then began to remember tales told
to them by their own grandparents who had heard similar from even older
generations.
A better life can be
found far away from the greyness of the dying cities. Our children deserve to
run free, not stay huddled inside hiding from the lawlessness. But how to do
this? Whisperings and mutterings grew faster. What was it the traveller had
said? Leave the city in the month of May, when distant trees showed green.
Follow the hedgerows in the direction of the rising sun until an abandoned farm
is reached. You will recognise it by the stone windmill which no longer turns.
From there follow the hedgerows again keeping the setting sun over your right shoulder until you reach a
cave.
Many repeated this to
others, but none were yet brave enough to start such a journey. As the month of
May approached, a father gathered his things and his only remaining son and set out in
the direction of the rising sun. They carried as much water as they could,
having little else to carry. Upon reaching the green trees the father searched
for the hedgerows, not knowing for sure just exactly what they were, but the
son soon remarked upon the low shrubs all growing in a line. “Of course,”
thought the father, “a line is a row, and we shall follow this one towards the
rising sun until we find the windmill.”
In due time, the
windmill was reached and by now the father and son had used all their water and
were thirsty as well as hungry and quite dirty. They searched the ruins of the
old farm hoping to find at least a little water, enough to wet their dry mouths
at least. What a surprise they had to find brambles with juicy berries! They
ate until they could eat no more and then looked for the hedgerow that would
lead towards the setting sun. Once they found it, they lay down to sleep,
knowing that if they walked in the morning with the rising sun at their left shoulders they
would be going in the right direction.
This they did and
trudged wearily mile after mile for several days, licking early morning dew
from the leaves of the shrubs. They did not find the cave, but another
traveller found them. He had come from the cave searching for anyone coming
from the cities as he had every week since the first traveller had returned. He
spoke to the father and son in a quiet voice, telling of the care and
companionship waiting for them if they could manage just one more mile. He gave
them water which he had brought in case he met anyone and walked at their slow
pace, noting their exhaustion and blistered feet. “A little application of
medicinal salve will fix those feet,” he told them. “My name is Simon and all
who come this way are welcome.”
Inside the cave was
another surprise. Pockets of civilization had survived in the areas where
industry had not taken over and people who had come in earlier times from other
cities and towns were thriving and learning. There were people growing foods in
the field behind the cave where a small stream ran through. A distinguished
looking man explained that this “cave” was in fact a remnant of an old library
and there were still a few books carefully sealed away from the elements. “All
we ask of you,” he said, "is to one day take a journey and spread the word so
more people can come and learn to live as nature intended."
Wow! This is a dystopian tale which deserves expansion into a full-length novel.
ReplyDeletejabblog; if ony I knew how to do that. Thank you.
DeleteThis is a lovely and hopeful take on David's prompts. Thank you so much. I hope your day with the twins was lovely (and I am sure it was).
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you I had to do a little editing just now, there was a directional problem. The twins are great, almost standing without support and Ana is quite desperate to get walking. I took no photos, playing with them instead.
DeleteA spark of hope in a well-done story.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you. I believe there will always be a spark of hope no matter what happens.
DeleteReally, River... do you publish a book for real of these wonderful stories? (I also miss our Alien!)
ReplyDeleteI read so fast I had to re-read!
Scary, wonderful and so likely to become a true story of life, so very well done, how do you do this???
You really - if you haven´t already and I missed it - publish a book for real. I want to buy it!
This is very impressive!!!
Maybe I can come up with a wee little story, but now I am... a little overwhelmed!
In a good way! Big WOW on this. Wonderful ending.
Iris; I have never published a book for real. I have thought about it, but all of my stories get to a point where I don't know how to move on, so I put them aside and write something different. I have most of them printed out and kept in a folder on my shelf.
DeleteI want to echo Iris Flavia. Make some of these stories into a book. This one is good, and you have many like them.You admitted that you - same as I - are very good at beginnings, but not so much endings. What I do: I read the Words for Wednesday, then I read through the whole story in one setting, and often I can continue the story with the given words. If you go on for long enough, the story will find an end. I succeded with my story of Mary, Allan, and the End of the World. You can too!
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; I can try that, but I have a couple of stories already with 25 chapters that I just can't seem to move on with. And a lot of shorter stories that aren't beginnings nor endings, just random middle bits that I don't know what to do with.
DeleteI am so relieved that they were not tricked! That was my worry when Simon found them, that they would be lured into a deadly situation.
ReplyDeleteVal; I knew at least one person would worry about Simon.
DeleteA little application of sun cream is advisable if you wish to take care of your skin in summery weather. My favourite sun cream brand is "Companionship" by Nivea. My late father said it was the only one he would ever use.
ReplyDeleteWe lived on a farm where progress was slow but every hedgerow sang with the music of the birds even in wet weather. It was what distinguished our place from neighbouring farms that had adopted an industrial approach to farming based on profit, loss and increasing yields. My father's last words were, "May green be the colour that guides you..."
Yorkshire Pudding; I have been using 30+ sunscreen for forty years now. I like what you wrote with the words there. Farming the way it should be done.
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