Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Alex J. Cavanaugh and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. parachute 2. reindeer 3. shark 4. clay 5. ruins
and/or:
1. telescope 2. totem-pole 3. black 4. severed 5. surf.
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: pearl opal green (or something close to it)
Here is my story:
I watched through my telescope
as Duncan’s parachute opened and he aimed towards Reindeer Ravine, so called by us for the numbers of reindeer remains laying at the bottom of it. Thousands of
them had either fallen or been driven over the edge so long ago that nobody
remembered anything about it. We were adventurous “thrill seekers” Duncan and I, and we had spotted the ravine last month when flying our helicopter home a couple of days after
the unfortunate attempt at surfing through shark-infested waters. We’d made it
back to the beach without getting eaten, but then my pearlised opal-green surfboard had slipped
while attaching it to the roof supports of our four-wheel drive and I got a nice concussion, so I
couldn’t be joining in this latest adventure.
The parachute landed
gently behind Duncan right at the edge of the ravine and I watched as he
searched for markers to relay back to me so I could mark it on the map we were
making. There were plenty of sturdy trees nearby, so he was able to hitch a
rope to lower himself into the ravine. We were hoping he would be able to burrow
through the piles of bones, some nearly black with age, and bring out just a
small one from the bottom or close to it, to send to the lab for carbon
testing. That would give us an estimation of age to kick off the research into
the history of that general area. Duncan was hoping to be able to write a
column for Time Magazine.
The two-way radio
crackled as his call came in: “I’ve reached the bones Kate and some are very
brittle, I’ll be here a bit longer than we thought, there’s no way to tell how
deep they ravine actually is. I can see something carved and painted on the
opposite side, looks like some kind of ancient totem pole, it might have marked
an entrance to a cave or something, could possibly be a site for ruins of
things like clay pots. The marker doesn’t look like any Native American totem
poles I’ve seen, this is carved right from and into the cliff face. If I can
get to the other side next time, we may be able to follow it all the way down.
And one more thing Kate, the bones here aren’t complete skeletons, many have
had the heads severed and the skulls are all tossed to one side.”
Oooh. A very different take. I would love to learn more about this adventurous pair.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; I rescued you from spam, right after I corrected a mistake I'd made in the story.
DeleteAnd thank you, I'd like to continue this too, but it depends on the words next week.
DeleteOoh, that doesn't sound a very friendly location. I hope they are just reindeer bones.
ReplyDeletejabblog; they are just reindeer bones and why the heads were severed might just remain a mystery.
DeleteOminous conversation, I hope he'll return home in one piece.
ReplyDeletePS: very well written!
DeleteCharlotte; thank you. He does return home in one piece to get started on the research into when and why.
DeleteAs long as Santa's reindeer aren't down there I'm good! :)
ReplyDeleteMagical Mystical Mimi; definitely not Santa's reindeer, they are magical and never die.
Deleteexcellent! the story flowed and I was caught by the creepiness of finding skeletons from ages gone by.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; thank you, I love it when my stories flow. The bones aren't creepy, just very dead.
DeleteGood tale and a bit gruesome, R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you. I don't find old bones gruesome, unless they turn up in my kitchen unexpectedly.
DeleteVery interesting story, and boy, to be that rich, helicopter, parachutes, 4VD, surfboards....
ReplyDeleteNo 10 horses could make me jump out of a heli! Interesting research-approach, too.
Iris; Thank you, I'd like to be that rich too, though I don't think I'd be parachuting out of helicopters or light planes. I might travel around a bit and see more of my country.
DeleteThis unexpected discovery will surely increase his chance of getting that Time Magazine column!
ReplyDeleteVal; I think that depends on how much he can find out about the area and the ancient bones.
DeleteWhat a fascinating story! The mix of adventure, suspense, and quirky details makes for an engaging read. I really like how you've woven the different prompts together — the parachute jump over the mysterious "Reindeer Ravine," the shark surfing incident, and even the mention of the opal-green surfboard. The use of "ruins" with the reindeer remains adds a mysterious and eerie element, giving the story a touch of the unknown. The connection to past adventures, especially the shark experience, shows that Duncan and the narrator have an exciting and daring history. www.melodyjacob.com
ReplyDeleteMelody Jacob; thank you, they are a daring adventurous pair who love discovering unknown places and things.
DeleteHiii, I am new here. I was actually searching for a recently active blog which has mobile friendly site and interesting too. And Ig I have found one finally. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for writing. Its difficult to believe for me that people are writing blogs like me at this year too...
Wuiii; thank you and welcome to drifting.
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ReplyDeleteThose poor reindeers. The mystery of their being there is intriguing. Good use of the prompts.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
lissa; it is an intriguing mystery and I hope they are able to find answers with their research.
DeleteA very nicely done tale, and thank you for being patient with me while I catch up on my blog reading.
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