Wednesdays Words on a Friday
Orange socks to fit with Charlotte's colour of the month, pumpkin orange.
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.cudgeling 2.remember 3.language 4.translated 5.coined
and/or:
1.dead 2.heirs 3.between 4.existing 5.episode
Here is my story:
A week had passed and
Phil Batty once again appeared at the excavation site. Russell Fielding met him
at the gate and escorted him to them “office” tent. “We’ve had some news,” he
said. “We are able to say definitely there were ten men, though some of the
bones indicate at least two were quite young and might have been boys between
sixteen and twenty. There are no injuries to any of the bones, suggesting they
died from starvation rather then fighting amongst themselves.”
“I can quote this in the
paper?” asked Phil. “Yes of course,” said Russell. “We don’t have much more to
tell you, just that ten complete skeletons have been found and you can bring
the cameramen to photograph them. They must remember our rules and photograph
only those things set out for them.” “Any idea at all where they were from?
What country?” asked Phil. “I know there are several races where skull shapes
can indicate heritage.”
“Nothing of that kind
stands out, we think they were all Caucasian, but no idea yet where from,” said
Russell. “There are markings on some of the wooden sections that have yet to be
deciphered, that could indicate a language at least, hopefully something
similar to existing languages to point us in the right direction to get it
translated.” “Do you know what type of ship it was at least?” asked Phil. “Not
yet,” said Russell, “all we know at this point is it appears to be some kind of
long boat, probably the kind of vessel used by sailors to carry goods or men to
shore while the ship stayed anchored off the coast. There’s no indication there
was a mast, but several pieces of wood appear to be oars.”
“So, no cudgeling among
the dead, and not a ship,” said Phil. “With a few photos and your words I can
work up a pretty decent story, a first episode at least. Shall I send Marty
later today? It’s daylight so he won’t need Colin to be holding a torch for
him.” “Yes,” said Russell. “Remind him to photograph only what we say he can
and I’ll tell Theo to expect him.”
**Next month's words should be from Alex J Cavanaugh, but he hasn't yet supplied any. If there aren't any by Wednesday, I'll put up a few.**

Ohhh, starvation. That sounds terrible. Great writing though as usual you are a very GOOD story teller. Happy Halloween, River and boogie boogie.
ReplyDeleteThe Happy Whisk; starvation does sound awful, I certainly wouldn't want to go that way. Thank you. Happy Halloween to you too.
DeleteThanks, River. Was a nice holiday weekend.
DeleteGreat episode, River!
ReplyDeleteAnd (not only) in Sudan, the next El Dorado for future archaeologists is growing.
Sean Jeating; thank you. what is going on in Sudan? what hidden treasures are being found? Ancient civilisations? Where's my Atlas, I need to see where Sudan is, I know it's in Africa somewhere...
DeleteSorry, River, I was being sarcastic. Tens of thousands of people are currently starving to death in Sudan, and those who don't starve are being brutally slaughtered. That's what I meant when I wrote 'the next El Dorado for future archaeologists is growing'.
DeleteSean Jeating; I am sorry to hear that, it hasn't been in the papers or TV news here so I had no idea. I thought maybe there was some real archaeology going on there.
DeleteA sad end for them, but it looks like their tales will finally be told. I'm glad there's enough for the reporters to get a story started, so they don't get overanxious.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; the trouble with a small story is that other newspapers will now know and the site may soon be flooded with reporters from all over.
DeleteI hope there will be more to learn? I really enjoy this, Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteIris; there will be more, I have one secret up my sleeve which I hope will fit and work out.
DeleteLooking forward!!! And... put up a better pic, all 31 "creeps" are on board!
DeleteNice story, R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you
DeleteGreat continuation, the suspense is maintained.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you, I have ideas running in circles and hope the next set of words will cooperate.
DeleteLove the socks and your writing is fabulous. Well done indeed.
ReplyDeleteDVArtist; thank you. The socks are very comfortable and I have them in many colours.
DeleteA set of Uncle and Aunt build roads and they actual ran into some human bones.
ReplyDeleteDora; that could be exciting or terrible, depending on how the bones got there. Do you know any more about that?
DeleteI feel sorriest for the last survivor. Trapped with his deceased buddies, knowing his certain fate.
ReplyDeleteVal; I thought about that too, it is sad. I'm hoping they all went fairly quickly.
DeleteNot a ship but a boat? No fighting either? A little disappointed. Kind of sad that they might have starved to death - maybe that wasn't the case.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
Sounds like a terrible fate, but better, I suppose, than being murdered.
ReplyDeleteÉs manté la intriga... haurem d'esperar al desenllaç...
ReplyDeleteBon ús de les paurales, River.
Hi River - I'll be back later with 'a concoction' using Seans last set of words. I gather via Charlotte you'd like me to supply a set of words next year for one of the months' - yes of course. What's your email ... I'll have a look around for it ... I'm my name without the hyphen at gmail ... give it a try. Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteHere tis - using the second five and the colour ....
ReplyDeleteHe was oblivious, fast asleep as usual … dead to the world … his heirs could be going in the same direction. No-one seemed to care … their lives were existing (just) … living in that in between zone … where each day was an episode.
What was he waiting for … Easter had come and gone, as too Spring, the summer zizzed by, now Autumn … the Pumpkins filled the fields, bursts of Orange all around …
People were out with their easels trying to capture the pumpkin orange light that came to the fore at this time of year … deep orange sunsets, occasional bursts of orange yellow during the days …
He and his offspring would settle down for the last quarter of the year drifting through tv events til Christmas arrived and they could tick another year off in their book of life. Sad … really."
I'll be back to read ... cheers Hilary
Yes, that's how many people spend the short episode between not exisiting and not existing.
DeleteGood one, Hilary.
Hi River - your story ... reminds me somewhat of the early explorers thinking that to land on the Namibian coast was a good idea - no ... no water, or people ... probably indigenous peoples found them. When I was there - the ships were still to be seen beached ... it's a challenging land. I couldn't think about starving ... horrific thought. Well done - cheers Hilary
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