Wednesday's Words on a Friday
THE NECKLACE
My heart pounded each
time I looked at it. The necklace. THE necklace. A string of freshwater pearls
with a single, rare, black pearl in the middle of the string. I knew it well.
It had been stolen from the Blackwell mansion over thirty years ago and never seen again.
I had been working with
British Intelligence at the time, in their Secret Service department, where rumors
abounded about the necklace being taken by Cold War spies because the mother-of-pearl
button closure was a miniature case containing a microfilm of certain leaders
who wished to never be found.
The challenge to find
these thieves had been huge, everyone wanted to be the first to find
information. The atmosphere within the division was tense twenty-four hours a day.
It was only human to want to be the one earning the praise for cracking the
case.
But none of us ever
did. The thieves had vanished off the face of the earth and the necklace with
them. Until now. I was long since retired with a handsome pension and spent
many hours frequenting small hole-in-the-wall Jewellery shops, those in
particular that had been known for fencing stolen goods in the past.
That was how I had
found the necklace. In a tiny dark shop, now named Benson’s Bling, it sat in
pride of place in the centre display case. I bought it immediately, having it
placed in a velvet lined case and took it home. The original button closure was
missing, no one would ever know now whether or not it had actually been a
casing for a microfilm.
The necklace was now
closed by a more modern pearl button and loop affair, it detracted from its
value, but not from its beauty. I had taken it into the department a day after
I had purchased it and it had been examined minutely by all types of modern
equipment, pronounced to be the real thing, and handed back to me. It was mine
forever. As was the thin microfilm wound around the string that held the black
pearl.
I had removed it of
course, before taking the necklace in for examination. My grandfather’s name
was on that list. It would do no good to expose that now, he was long dead and the
others were too. Now no one would ever know I had been a double agent.
A lovely (and unexpected) twist to the tale...
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ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; thank you :)
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ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; thank you too :)
DeleteBrilliant, River!
ReplyDeleteSean Jeating; welcome to drifting and thank you :)
DeleteWow! Very well told, and a clever ending.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you, the ending surprised me too.
DeleteBig wow, great story! And it could be real, too.
ReplyDeleteI´ve seen "tools" they used in the cold war (in documentaries, not movies).
Lipsticks, pens, all that!
It is sad people spied on each other - or still do - but it´s amazing, too, with which they came up!
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DeleteGood one River...double agent :)
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you :)
DeleteAmazing how your mind works.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Victor SE Moubarak; it surprises me often.
DeleteOnce again you have done a great job with the prompts. Such a surprise ending and what an exciting tale. Thanks river.
ReplyDeleteGranny Annie; thank you. The ending surprised me too.
DeleteWhat a great twist River, didn't know where it was going. Brava!
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WWW; thank you. I wasn't sure where it would end up either.
DeleteWow, well written and unexpected ending. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you very much.
DeleteSound like a story to be made into a movie.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on and stay safe
Dora; maybe it could be a movie one day, thank you.
DeleteSuch a good double agent! I never saw that coming!
ReplyDeleteVal; it surprised me too, in movies the double agent always gets caught out.
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