Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sandi and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1. reflection 2. mirror 3. deception 4. air 5. heir 

and/or: 

1. seeds 2. planting 3. harvest 4. forget 5. due 

and a very nice music clip, Wayfaring Stranger, which I couldn't fit into the story 😞

also included is 'pine green' which is Charlotte's colour of the month.

Here is my story:

The new winter meeting shed had been painted the same pine green as the forest behind it. Though large enough for almost the whole town, the interior was warm and cosy from the fireplaces burning in each corner. Khoral spoke to the crowd of children sitting on thick mats at his feet. "We have learned "As ye sow, so shall ye reap," he said. "Who among you can tell us what this means?"

"The seeds you were planting in the spring will be what you harvest in the autumn," said Timmy. "If you sow wheat you will harvest wheat, if you sow corn, you will harvest corn."  "And if you plant daffodils in the autumn, you will get daffodil flowers in the spring," said Anna. 
"This is true," said Khoral, "but do not forget this applies also to personal actions. If you show disrespect always to others, you will get disrespect in return. If you practise deception, do not be surprised when others then deceive you."

Maureen said, "If you show kindness you can expect kindness shown back to you?" "Exactly," said Khoral. "Always try to be the person who can look at his reflection in the mirror and be proud that you are a good person. Someone who is unkind, tells lies and steals, will not be happy with what he sees in his own eyes." 

"Anything else?" asked Khoral. "Do not put on airs, thinking you are better than everyone else," said Chrissy. "Be helpful to those who need and ask for it," said Tom. "Oh! Helping!" said Sandra, jumping up from her mat. "I am supposed to be helping today, Mum is due home with our new baby sister and I have to be there to help!" and she sped away pulling on her coat as she ran. 

This broke up the storytime as several others remembered things they had to be doing and Khoral waited until the last child left before turning off the gas log fires and locking the door as he himself went to help in the bakery.

Comments

  1. So, so happy to have Khoral Kai back again. He is making any story better, and this one is good. And thank you for incorporating 'my' olour.

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    1. Charlotte; I had a tribal Grandfather to start with then changed it for Khoral Kai.

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  2. Upon reflection, she thought that the mirror no longer belonged in her room. To her it represented deception - presenting her falsely as an old lady. Cold air leaked in through the draughty window. Though she was heir to a fortune, she lived in dilapidated circumstances.

    Each spring she sowed her vegetable seeds in pots, planting the seedlings out when they were big enough to thrive. Some years she enjoyed a great harvest as long as she did not forget to water her allotment. Her memory was becoming less reliable due to the brain hemorrhage she endured in 1999.

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    1. Yorkshire Pudding; mirrors are never deceptive unless they are Funhouse mirrors. She needs to remember that she is getting old. My own vegetable seedlings have died from the heat. I won't be trying again to grow any.

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    2. Even while avoiding mirrors, one can be surprised (shocked) by a sudden glimpse reflected in a shop window. There's no escape . . .

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  3. Eileen's reflection in the mirror was not kind. coating her face with make-up helped some. "A deception of sorts," she thought as she wriggled into a body girdle. Looking in the mirror showed a younger Eileen and she smiled. As the heiress of a large fortune, she pulled her shoulders back and strode into the ballroom. Confidence nearly floated in the air around her. " Get ready, girls", she thought, "Mama's back."

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    1. Susan Kane; I hope Eileen is subtle with the make-up. Trying to look too young can have the opposite effect.

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    2. I second River's comment. I'm sure Eileen can afford good advice.

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  4. River, i do like the way you had Khoral Kai impart this lesson, and i'm also glad he's back.

    Yorkshire Pudding, we are only as old as we feel, right? I hope she remembered to water and got a good harvest.

    Susan, it sounds like Eileen's day in the sun is not yet ready to set.

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    1. messymimi; I'm glad I had Khoral Kai back. I began with someone different.

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  5. The heir looked at her reflection in the mirror and sensed deception in the air.

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  6. Khoral is back! :-)
    Very great story! My Mum used to say what you shout into the forest will come back (reckon it´s a German saying?). YES to Khoral reminding kids to be nice and help. We need him here, too!

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    1. Iris; I do like Khoral. He weaves lessons into his stories so well the kids don't know they are learning.

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  7. Oh, to have a teacher like Khoral Kai - an update or alternative to Charles Kingsley.

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    1. jabblog; I have no idea who Charles Kingsley is. Off to google!

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  8. Spring flowers such as tulips I really like.
    Coffee is on and stay safe

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    1. Dora; I like tulips too, some people in Adelaide can grow them, but my soil is not good and my garden is too hot, it faces north and west so gets a lot of heat.

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  9. Just like The Simpsons! (Post to come some time).
    Also reminds me of my English-teacher, he was the same! Learning was FUN and you didn´t even realize (realise?) you learn...
    (I had to change documents from American to British English for Siemens and now I don´t know... Australia has the British, right?).

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  10. Such a nice flow to your story, and you wrapped up the ending well. Plus my favorite color was featured!

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