Wednesdays Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. catch 2. hurry 3. panting 4. running 5. train
and/or:
1. forehead 2. minutes 3. saved 4. seats 5. sweat
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: pebble grey
Here is my story:
Connie and Margaret
were already settled in the new deck chairs when Esme came panting up the
stairs. “I need to do that more often,” she said, “I’m so out of shape!” Connie
and Margaret shrugged at each other, Esme had been saying similar things for
years now. Just last week she had reminisced about her running days while they
all ate cream puffs at Jane’s Birthday Tea. Beads of sweat peppered Esme’s
forehead and she sat in the seat the others had saved for her.
“I like this new
terrace,” said Esme, “the pebble grey tiles are less harsh than the white that used
to be here. Is Rosalie coming up too?” “She said yes, so we’ll give her a few
more minutes to get here,” said Margaret. “She’s had to catch a train from
wherever her daughter’s new house is, she left last Friday to help with the unpacking,
which probably means she did the baby care while the new house got organized.”
Esme said, “I’ll drag
over a couple more seats and put rugs on them, for Rosalie and Brenda, who was
right behind me on the stairs but seems to have vanished.” “She’d better hurry
before Connie scoffs all the frosted brownies,” said Margaret. “I’ve only had
two!” exclaimed Connie in mock shock. “There’s plenty more.”
“Who’s idea was it to
have the Anniversary Tea up here anyway? And which Anniversary are we
celebrating?” said Esme as she settled into one deck chair and put her feet on
another to save for Rosalie. Margaret put her feet on one for Brenda. “It’s the
fortieth anniversary of the opening day of this Senior Centre,” she said. “I
remember watching the ribbon cutting on my way to work that day, it was a lot
smaller then with fewer facilities.”
The door to the terrace
opened and a crowd of elderly women swarmed into the sunshine, Brenda and
Rosalie among them. “Over here!” shouted Connie, “we saved seats for you!”
Behind the crowd came staff members pushing carts with giant urns of tea and
coffee and extra trays of sandwiches and cakes.
This sounds like a festive occasion. Well written.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you, it's definitely going to be a party once Rosalie starts singing.
DeleteNice story. Though, oh, do I want to live in such a "home" some day? Bad memories of my Grandma... it was not a nice home where her children´d put her (she suffered Alzheimer´s).
ReplyDeleteBut for a change I can join!
We needed to hurry to catch the train, running, panting, too late. The first train too late, the second hence gone. We nearly missed the flight.
For our short holiday last weekend we hence went by Ingo´s car.
Ingo is a safe driver, no sweating of fear from my side in the seats.
On the ship - a pebble grey old war ship in the museum, in the storm I managed my glasses to be saved, but hit my forehead, which is now really bruised. It was just minutes, I hurt my arm, leg and shoulder, too.
Aw, well.
Safely home.
Met W today, he exclaimed: what happened to you? Holiday at the stormy coast.... ;-)
Iris Flavia: I really like your use of the prompts. I am glad that the glasses were saved, but feel for the bruised body.
DeleteIris; some seniors homes are nice, others are not, I suspect money has a lot to do with it. I'm sorry you got hurt on the ship and hope the hurt is less now. You made a good true story with the words.
DeleteThank you both. My Granma was in a what I suspect a cheap home (expensive enough). Even I got lost there, all floors, rooms etc looked the same. Most homes have Polish or other East-people as staff who often don´t speak German and have but 5 minutes per person I saw in a docu years ago.
DeleteI think it did not develop for the better....
I am just glad I broke neither glasses or bones. It could´ve been much worse! I learned my lesson... I´m fine :-)
Fun times are always welcome.
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; yes they are.
DeleteHow lovely to meet with good friends - and delicious food too.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; these women have been friends since their first days there. Before that Connie and Margaret worked for the same firm.
DeleteSome reason I like grey color floors. It a versatile color.
ReplyDeleteDora; I am not a fan of grey but it cam work well in some areas and with some other colours.
DeleteGood story and nice names there R.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteThese cheerful ladies are now living in the home they used to pass on their way to work. That's neat.
ReplyDeletejabblog; it is neat they get to stay in an area they've grown up in and are used to.
DeleteI have been looking forward to your story today. You definitely gave it a different spin and created a fun story.
ReplyDeleteGranny Annie; thank you, I like fun stories.
DeleteHeh, heh! This is my favorite part: "Just last week she had reminisced about her running days while they all ate cream puffs at Jane’s Birthday Tea." That's not something I'd like to hear while eating cream puffs! I guess every group has somebody like that.
ReplyDeleteVal; I think they were all happy their running days are over and they finally get to enjoy cream puffs instead.
DeleteWhat a delightful story! You’ve captured such a warm and lighthearted scene, full of camaraderie and nostalgia. I love the vivid portrayal of the group of friends, especially Esme's relatable struggle with fitness and the humorous exchange about brownies. The details of the terrace, the saved seats, and the casual conversation all come together to create a charming snapshot of friendship and community. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!
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Melody Jacob; Esme isn't really struggling with fitness, she just likes to remind herself and others that she once was quite the athlete. Thank you.
DeleteI think they'll all have a good time.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely reflection! I really enjoyed your take on this week's words. Your insights always bring such depth and warmth to the topic. It’s wonderful how you connect these themes to everyday life. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and brightening our Fridays! Looking forward to the next post!
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