Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are carried over from last week:
1. funeral 2. moon 3. splendiferously 4. sun 5. coffin
and/or:
1. afraid 2. biased 3. crows 4. nutrition 5. worms
and added to by this weeks words:
1. art 2. awe 3. love 4. moonlit 5. sleeping
and/or:
1. beauty 2. breathless 3. dreamscape 4. face 5. oxygen
also including Charlotte's colour of the month: pebble grey
Here is my story:
Sandra tossed her
handbag on the table and kicked off her shoes before sinking onto the sofa. “Colin,
you really should have come to this funeral. I know you were biased against him
for having so much inherited money instead of earning it, but that wasn’t his
fault. If someone left me scads of money would you become biased and turn
against me?” “Of course not, I love you” said Colin “and what I felt wasn’t
bias, it was jealousy, I just tried to hide it.”
“Oh,”said Sandra. “Well
anyway, remember how he said he was going to have the most splendiferously
magnificent coffin? You should have seen it, a work of art to be sure, custom
made to his directions, it was an open coffin viewing so we could all see him
sleeping forever in the dreamscape interior, wearing his favourite teal shirt,
which looked a little odd against his pebble grey face, he hadn’t wanted any
makeup. I guess that’s how skin looks when there’s no oxygen.”
Sandra took a breath
and drank from the coffee Colin had brought her. “I’d be afraid to look like
that, you’ll have to make sure I get at least a little colour when it’s my
turn.” “That’s years away Sandy, I might forget or I might go first.”
Sandra nodded then
said, “anyway, let me tell you more about the coffin, the exterior was
completely painted in a shimmery blue, like the metallic finishes on some cars,
pale at the head end with a setting sun, deepening towards the foot end where a
full moon was rising and in between the whole thing was inlaid with glittery
stars. The beauty of it left me momentarily breathless when they closed the lid
and turned down the lights so the room appeared moonlit and we could see all
the stars glimmering. I’m truly in awe at the amount of money he must have
spent on something that will now be nutrition for worms and eventually crows
who will eat those worms.”
“I have to tell you
something Sandy,” said Colin. “Andrew told me about the coffin when he came
around after you left. It was just a plain wooden box and he had the interior
done by college art students and the exterior by the panel beater apprentices,
the money he paid them will help with their college tuition and he gave a huge
chunk to various charities. But nobody else knows and Andrew wants us to keep
Philip’s secret.”
“Huh,” said Sandra. “Well
it was still splendiferous and the feast after was too. I’m going to remember
it forever.”
Philip was a thoughtful man. The coffin must have looked wonderful. I hope Sandra took photographs . . . 😎
ReplyDeletejabblog; a thoughtful man indeed with no other family to leave his money to. I hope Sandra took photos too, but she didn't mention any.
DeleteThat was a good one. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you. I thought it might seem a little over-the-top fanciful.
DeleteInherited money or not, I like this final use of Phillip's money. He sounds to have been a good man. Well told.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you, I'm glad he helped some students who might go on to earn degrees and start their own businesses.
DeleteHe must have inherited a good heart with the money.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; yes he did, his parents were wise and loving people who sadly could not have more children.
DeleteLovely tale R. That coffin sounds amazing, as I was reading I visualized it all.
ReplyDeleteKind man though.
Margaret D; thank you. The coffin does sound amazing, like a whole lifetime between sunset and moonrise.
DeleteThat was a good way to redistribute the money, since Philip couldn't take it with him. Yet in a way, he DID take it with him, considering it bought him his eternal resting place.
ReplyDeleteVal; that's true, he took part of it with him, but don't we all when we purchase a coffin?
DeleteUff. Obviously I took my intention for my deed. ;-)
ReplyDeleteBut now: Thanks for a fine read.
Sean Jeating; I'm glad you liked it.
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