Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Charlotte and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.sort 2. pollution 3.crooked 4. learned 5. wanting 6. industry
and/or:
1. education 2. colour 3. withdraw 4. coach 5. bellow 6. cat
Here is my story:
Oswald Staffordshire-the-third
stepped off the coach and felt the blood withdraw from his face as he viewed
his new surroundings. How could this have happened? He had merely been helping
Henrietta Lancashire-Smythe to get what was rightfully hers, but as things
unfolded, he discovered she had lied to him. Even worse, he further learned
that her name wasn’t even Henrietta, she was plain Brenda Brown and according
to the policeman who had bellowed at him, she had a “rap” sheet longer than The
Nile!
The sneering judge who
sentenced him declared he would now get an entirely different sort of education,
but perhaps he had nine lives, like a cat, and would survive the experience
without absorbing too much “pollution.” As the now empty coach was driven away,
Oswald noticed a group of men not much older than himself, shuffling in his direction.
The biggest and meanest looking one crooked a finger at him, “Come along over
here little boy,” he said to sniggers from the others. “We’re gonna be ya new
best mates!”
Oswald gulped and told
his feet to move. The group engulfed him, slapping him on the back and asking
questions, wanting to know what he’d done to get sent here and “what does ya
Dad do?” “He, umm, he works in the Shipping Industry.” “Ooooh, posh ain’t ya?”
said the second biggest thug. “Well don’t you worry none, We’ll look after ya,
teach ya how a few things is done round ‘ere,” said a third boy. “Ya can sit
with us in the dining room, what’s yer name?”
“I am Oswald
Staffordshire-the-third,” he replied weakly. “Blimey, that’s a mouthful!” said
the biggest boy, “You’ll be Ozzie in ‘ere, I’m Bear and this little fella is “Rooster”,
‘cause he’s always the first awake. “Johnno”, “Fred”, “Brian”, the names came
fast and Oswald, (oops, Ozzie) didn’t have time to register which face went with
which name. He let them lead him to a long olive green coloured building with a sign reading “Dormitory
3”, while glancing nervously at rows of barbed wire fencing capped with razor
wire coils.
Yikes! He's not going to have an easy ride.
ReplyDeletejabblog; maybe not, but he has brains to counter their brawn.
DeleteHO boy this does NOT look good at all!
ReplyDeleteXO
WWW
Wisewebwoman; not good right now, but Ozzie has a trick or two up his sleeve I think.
DeleteHe's going to wish daddy would have had some pull with the judge, I think.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; daddy isn't entirely on the up-and-up either, "shipping" could mean so many things.
DeleteDark .... well written too
ReplyDeleteThe Happy Whisk; thank you. I don't often do dark.
DeleteActually, despite the others, I think he has a rather good start, managing to walk over, answering questions and even, he must´ve given his full name like a "nothing special", getting away with that smoothly.
ReplyDeleteI hope I am right...?
Iris; yes you are right. He is a bit afraid, but covering that well and knowing that he is smarter and will be okay.
DeleteUnfortunately, when we boast naively, we pay for it...
ReplyDeleteThings will be difficult for him.
For me, because he had no bad intentions,
he will be upset by the injustice (for me it is basic).
Very good use of words, you put us in an environment...
Katerina's Blog; he had no bad intentions with Henrietta, but didn't see her lies because he loved her. He learned that lesson and things go differently with his new "friends".
DeleteGood story R. Not so sure about the sneezing Judge, hope he had a handkerchief.
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