Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 


The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Charlotte and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1.sort  2. pollution  3.crooked  4. learned  5. wanting  6. industry  

and/or:  

1. education  2. colour  3. withdraw  4. coach  5. bellow  6. cat

Here is my story:

Oswald Staffordshire-the-third stepped off the coach and felt the blood withdraw from his face as he viewed his new surroundings. How could this have happened? He had merely been helping Henrietta Lancashire-Smythe to get what was rightfully hers, but as things unfolded, he discovered she had lied to him. Even worse, he further learned that her name wasn’t even Henrietta, she was plain Brenda Brown and according to the policeman who had bellowed at him, she had a “rap” sheet longer than The Nile!

The sneering judge who sentenced him declared he would now get an entirely different sort of education, but perhaps he had nine lives, like a cat, and would survive the experience without absorbing too much “pollution.” As the now empty coach was driven away, Oswald noticed a group of men not much older than himself, shuffling in his direction. The biggest and meanest looking one crooked a finger at him, “Come along over here little boy,” he said to sniggers from the others. “We’re gonna be ya new best mates!”

Oswald gulped and told his feet to move. The group engulfed him, slapping him on the back and asking questions, wanting to know what he’d done to get sent here and “what does ya Dad do?” “He, umm, he works in the Shipping Industry.” “Ooooh, posh ain’t ya?” said the second biggest thug. “Well don’t you worry none, We’ll look after ya, teach ya how a few things is done round ‘ere,” said a third boy. “Ya can sit with us in the dining room, what’s yer name?”

“I am Oswald Staffordshire-the-third,” he replied weakly. “Blimey, that’s a mouthful!” said the biggest boy, “You’ll be Ozzie in ‘ere, I’m Bear and this little fella is “Rooster”, ‘cause he’s always the first awake. “Johnno”, “Fred”, “Brian”, the names came fast and Oswald, (oops, Ozzie)  didn’t have time to register which face went with which name. He let them lead him to a long olive green coloured building with a sign reading “Dormitory 3”, while glancing nervously at rows of barbed wire fencing capped with razor wire coils.


Comments

  1. Yikes! He's not going to have an easy ride.

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    1. jabblog; maybe not, but he has brains to counter their brawn.

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  2. HO boy this does NOT look good at all!
    XO
    WWW

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    1. Wisewebwoman; not good right now, but Ozzie has a trick or two up his sleeve I think.

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  3. He's going to wish daddy would have had some pull with the judge, I think.

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    1. messymimi; daddy isn't entirely on the up-and-up either, "shipping" could mean so many things.

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    1. The Happy Whisk; thank you. I don't often do dark.

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  5. Actually, despite the others, I think he has a rather good start, managing to walk over, answering questions and even, he must´ve given his full name like a "nothing special", getting away with that smoothly.
    I hope I am right...?

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    1. Iris; yes you are right. He is a bit afraid, but covering that well and knowing that he is smarter and will be okay.

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  6. Unfortunately, when we boast naively, we pay for it...
    Things will be difficult for him.
    For me, because he had no bad intentions,
    he will be upset by the injustice (for me it is basic).
    Very good use of words, you put us in an environment...

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    1. Katerina's Blog; he had no bad intentions with Henrietta, but didn't see her lies because he loved her. He learned that lesson and things go differently with his new "friends".

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  7. Good story R. Not so sure about the sneezing Judge, hope he had a handkerchief.

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  8. The rookie moved the bags of trash aside. A cat hissed, disturbed, and arched its crooked back, spitting at the young detective’s outstretched hands.
    Garbage juice, leaked from the bags, and ran into the nearby drain to add to the pollution of this stinking city.
    The alleyway was devoid of colour. Blackness, odd chinks of light catching the last few pieces of metal that weren’t rusted. Black and white.
    The detective in charge grabbed the shoulder of her young apprentice, and they both stopped, still, just for a second. There was a low moaning noise coming from the remaining pile of junk. A sort of gasping, groan, that someone would make while wanting to inhale but not having the strength to make it happen.
    The trainee was getting a good education with her boss, doubling as her personal coach. She’d learned how to cope in this godforsaken place. Jane really felt that she’d chosen the right industry to lean into, and would happily pursue a career in the police department for many years to come.
    Reaching for a wad of soggy cardboard, a hand lunged out of the pile of trash and grabbed Jane’s wrist. Before she could bellow, another hand appeared. Causing Jane and her boss to quickly withdraw, back down the darkened corridor. “shall we call for some backup?” she asked the guv’nor.

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    1. ArcticFox; this is really good, thank you for joining in.

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