Wednesday's Words on a Friday
pi pie in a pumpkin orange colour? For Charlotte's colour of the month.
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1.innocent 2.evil 3.face 4.expanding 5.born
and/or:
1.come 2.surprise 3.planet 4.minor 5.follow
Here is my story:
Russell and Theo
watched as the men retreated to their vehicle, then Theo settled Sunny and both
men crawled into sleeping bags resting on surplus Army cots.
Next morning as they
were rinsing coffee mugs after a hearty bacon and eggs breakfast, Theo nudged
Russell to draw his attention to a shiny black SUV from which the impeccably
dressed Newspaper Editor came towards them.
Reaching to shake
hands, he introduced himself. “Phil Batty,” he said, “Batty by name but not by
nature,” with a little laugh at his own joke. “Russell Fielding and this is
Theo Skargill, the dog is Sunny and it was she who alerted us last night to the
presence of your reporters.”
“They have been spoken
to,” said Phil, “and I offer sincere apologies for their trespass. I do wonder
if perhaps we could discuss a compromise? Is there an area which they could
access to take a photo or two? Could they speak to anyone and get even a small
story for the paper?”
“It is far too early to
know which areas of the grounds are safe to walk on, the underground search is
expanding and we currently have no idea how much depth is in the roof of the
cave in any given area,” said Russell. “An innocent step on a thin area could
result in a fall through the cave roof and cause irreparable damage to the
faller and to any parts of wreckage that has yet to be brought to the surface. Even
a minor fall needs to be avoided at all times.”
Theo said, “It should
come as no surprise that large parts of our planet have been known only at a
surface level. What is underground is only discovered when something like this
happens. A boy and his friends out looking for storm-tossed treasures, one foot
lands on an eroded-from-the-inside patch of dirt, and what follows is what you
see here.”
“On the face of it,”
continued Russell, “a story at this point would result in too many people,
crowding in and hoping to see something no one else has yet seen. The site and
all findings would be ruined, that is the evil we are trying to avoid.”
“I wasn’t born
yesterday!” said Phil. “You’re just trying to keep all the glory for
yourselves! That’s my opinion.”
“You are wrong,” said
Theo, with Russell backing him up. “We are happy to share, but we need to come
to an agreement. You keep your men away, day AND night, and you will be the
first newspaper we call when things are ready to be photographed.”
Phil looked from face
to face and around at the tents where shadows of people working inside could be
seen. He sighed deeply and reached an agreement with his inner self. He was, after
all, a reasonable and responsible man. His paper had a good reputation. “Deal,”
he said shaking hands again with both men.
“Call back in a week,”
said Russell. “We should have more by then.”

Nice story and you used all words !!
ReplyDeleteIngrid; thank you.
DeleteI like the Batty name and the little motto or whatever he's calling it.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.
lissa; thank you, I didn't choose Batty, it popped into my head all by itself.
DeleteGood installment. I hope the reporter people wait, these things can't be rushed.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; thank you. I also hope they stay away, but think perhaps word has got out and there will be sightseers soon all trying to get a look past the fences. Information will have to be released sooner than expected.
DeleteTo reasonable men - good story!
ReplyDeleteIris; thank you.
DeleteGood name Batty and you have used the words well plus I liked the story, R.
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