Wednesday's Words on a Friday
On Wednesdays,
Elephant’s Child has been putting up a selection of six (or twelve) words which
is called “Words for Wednesday”.
She had taken over this
meme from Delores, who is gradually retiring from the blogging world.
This month the meme
continues here, at Drifting Through Life
Essentially the aim is
to encourage us to write.
Each week we are given a
choice of prompts: which can be words, phrases, music or an image. What we do with those prompts is up to
us: a short story, prose, a song, a poem,
or treating them with ignore...
Some of us put our
creation in comments on the post, and others post on their own blog.
I would really like it if as many people as
possible joined into this fun meme.
If
you are posting on your own blog - let me know so that I, and other
participants, can come along and applaud.
I’m hopeless at poetry
so I always do a story.
It’s a fun challenge…why
not join in?
This week's words are:
1. satellite
2. bananas
3. unannounced
4. cherry
5. backtracked
6. included
and or:
1. sneaker
2. kitchen
3. force
4. around
5. squelched
6. short
Here is my story:
(a little longer than I expected, the words just poured themselves onto the page.)
World Power part four
It seemed a lifetime
before I was able to tune out the disembodied voice and fall to the floor,
where I curled up and slept. I was woken by the sound of knocking and I stood
to see a previously unnoticed door being pushed open. Imagine my surprise to
see the burly man entering. He still carried his stick and wore the battered
brown hat.
He stood near the door
and observed me quietly for a moment before speaking.
“You’re surprised to see
me, I can tell. I’m not here to hurt you, no one here will hurt you. My name is
Graham, and you are Joshua, twelve years old. Born and raised in Green Sector,
chosen for Grey Sector because you seemed bright enough to handle the
restrictions and follow the rules without losing your sense of self. Not taking
the blue pills and communicating with me, shows you can think for yourself and
you’re willing to take chances.”
“How do you know about
me? Have I been watched all this time? Is that what the camera in the plane is
all about? What does that voice mean when it says I am to be regenerated?”
“If you come with me,
I’ll get you settled in a more comfortable room and answer all your questions.
You’re right about the camera though, you’ve been watched since your first day
in Grey Sector. I’m your assessor. Come along now, your new room is ready for
you.”
“Wait! I want to know
about regenerate, what will happen to me?”
“I’ll explain as we
walk, we need to leave this room now, another recruit is expected soon.”
We left the white room
and turned left, following a long corridor with walls that changed colour as we
progressed. The white gave way to blue, then green and finally yellow where
Graham stopped and opened a door for me.
“We’re in Yellow Sector
now, this is your new room, it has more space than rooms in Grey Sector, with
actual cupboards to hold your clothes and sneakers. Books have been included,
we noticed you liked to read, but we’re not sure what you like so there’s a
mixture, even a volume of short poems.”
I stood inside my big new
room and looked around in amazement. Everything I’d had in Grey Sector was
there, plus so much more. A small kitchen area held a table with two chairs and
a fruit bowl with bananas which I recognised and small red fruits which Graham
said were cherries. He showed me how to eat them and spit out the seed in the
centre. I liked the way the fruit squelched in my mouth, releasing its
delicious flavour.
After several cherries,
Graham began to speak. “Regenerate simply means to renew, or regrow. Those left
behind in Grey Sector don’t have the ability for further mental growth. The
apocalypse, all those centuries ago, didn’t wipe out humankind, but did damage
enough DNA in enough people that future generations were severely compromised. As
the centuries passed, it was noticed, via satellite cameras, that certain
communities were producing children with potential.
Now, your first
question. We know about you, because we backtracked through your files until we
found the one with your parents and birth name on it. You are Joshua Howard
Williamson, your birthday is August 10th.Your parents, Howard and
Denise, understood the need to keep you safe and willingly gave you into the
care of Green Sector. You were born on the surface, in an old nineteenth
century bomb shelter. No force was used to convince them, they’d seen the
devastation and diseases of the outside world for themselves and wanted you
raised in a clean environment, away from the threats of noxious gases that
still broke through the earth’s crust occasionally.”
I interrupted him,
asking how did people here survive the apocalypse and not be exposed to all the
resulting problems? He smiled hugely and said “This is why we chose you. You think,
you have questions, you don’t just blindly go from day to day.”
“There were underground
facilities, quite huge places, almost whole towns built underground, and many scientists
and medical people moved underground before the apocalypse happened. No one
really knows exactly what caused it, or even when it would happen, there are
many possibilities.
People weren’t wiped out as was first thought, but much of
the natural growth such as trees, grasses etc died all over the earth. Very few
species survived. Fish and seaweeds in the oceans appeared to be okay and over
the centuries these were farmed until numbers increased, these are what you ate
in calorie pills and protein pouches all those years.
The fruit we ate just now
has been artificially produced in laboratories down in the basement levels.
Someone, somewhere, found a dying cherry tree and collected the fruit and kept
the seeds. I’ll take you down there tomorrow, that is where we would like you
to work and study. Joshua, we want you to be part of the team that helps to
regenerate the earth’s surface.”
I was a bit stunned by
all this news, I had no idea that I’d been living underground all my life. I’d
seen the earth’s surface in old movies and thought we just had buildings on the
surface but with no windows so we couldn’t see the destruction that had
happened.
I asked about the garden
and sunshine we walked in daily and the plane that flew over with the camera.
“All artificial,” said Graham. “That big blue sky is a giant screen, the plane
is a remote controlled toy, large enough to seem real, with a camera installed.
Way back in the twentieth century these were called drones and people thought
they were used by spies, invading their privacy.”
Graham was quiet as I
took this in, then said, “I’ll leave you alone now to get settled, give you
time to put away your new clothes,” he indicated a large suitcase sitting
beside the door. “This room is yours, your own private haven, no one will come
in unannounced, everyone knocks and waits to be invited in.”
WOW!!
ReplyDeleteEchoing fishducky. And so very glad that you chose the more positive use of regeneration. My mind was wandering down avenues which led to Soylent Green type scenarios.
ReplyDeleteWell done, River! There could very well be a movie in there! :)
ReplyDeleteOh my, colour me impressed!
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ReplyDeletefishducky, thank you so much. Now I wish I knew more about science and cloning etc, because this needs to move forward.
Elephant's Child; thank you too. I really, really, don't like those Soylent Green options.
Lee; thank you also. A movie? I think it needs a lot more chapters first, but I'm not sure I know enough about science, cloning, plant biology and so on. Joshua gets involved in all of that, somehow and.......
Jac; thank you, I impressed myself too. I hope I can keep this going.
You really are good at this why don't you write a book, I would buy it.
ReplyDeleteMerle...........
Yes, this is as if I've stepped into my own She-Den a woman's version of Man Cave but much more worth living in! You aced this wild list! Here's mine
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Very good! I shall incorporate one set this weekend into a nlog post.
ReplyDeleteNow that's a good story. You write well...The words chosen are good and many tales come into my mind....might be a cryptic ones again :)
ReplyDeleteJoshua is so blessed to have a silent room all to himself, to be in charge of his own life.
ReplyDeleteOh, to not be interrupted in one's own bedroom at any age! Lucky fella . I joined the fun today over at my blog.
ReplyDeleteMove over Ray Bradbury - he may have an equal! This is a captivating story River - so well written and with so much imagination! I am loving it! Isn't it fun what different stories we are both weaving with the words!
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