Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are: five old phrases (adages?) that aren't heard much these days:
1. too many cooks spoil the broth
2. the apple of my eye
3. pie in the sky
4. not for all the tea in China
5. spill the beans
Here is my story:
As the general hubbub
increased in volume and intensity, Mrs Gladstone took matters into her own
hands and pounded on the piano keys, shocking everyone else into immediate
silence.
Holding the microphone,
she said “I believe what we have here is a case of too many cooks spoiling the
broth! Everyone wants to be heard and everyone wants to have their choice. But
if we don’t come to some sort of agreement, the talent show simply cannot go
on.”
Jennie Sanders said, “I
think we should all sit down and write our suggestions and ideas and” “And what dear?” asked Mrs Gladstone. “Oh I
don’t know,” said Jennie. “I just know that my Bonnie would love to be able to
show off her tap dancing, she has been learning for three years now and is
getting quite good. Perhaps we could combine a singing and dancing routine?”
“Great idea,” said Mrs
Gladstone, “any suggestions for something with an easy rhythm?” “What about
that old ‘pie in the sky’ song? Called a voice from the back.
“Do you mean the “High
Hopes one with the ant and the rubber tree plant?” said Mrs Gladstone. “Yes,”
said the unknown voice, “it is short and could lend itself to some easy
tapping. How old is Bonnie?” “She is six,” said Jennie. “Who are you? Could you
come forward please?” “Not for all the tea in China,” he muttered and ducked
out through the side door.
“Does anyone know who
that was?” asked Mrs Gladstone. ‘I’d rather not spill the beans,” said Angela
Hammond, “but I did see his face and I know he doesn’t want to be seen, he has
burn injuries, but I know he is a good person. His own grand daughter was the
apple of his eye and she was of similar age to your Bonnie when she died in
that fire, he tried so hard to save her.”
Oh my...good use of the prompts...sad ending. Well done River.
ReplyDeleteGranny Annie; thank you, a little sad, but the grandfather is getting out and about again.
DeleteOh dear - I use all those adages - must be my age! Nice story.
ReplyDeletejabblog; I never use those adages, but I remember hearing them from folk much older than me in years past. They don't seem to have made it to these modern days.
DeleteAnother totally delightful vignette. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteWhat a great set of prompts. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteJenn Jilks; it was a challenging set this week.
DeleteThose old wise saying, is very helpful.
ReplyDeleteDora; most old sayings are helpful, but we don't hear them much these days.
DeleteFrank must have agonized over this "song".
ReplyDeleteCatalyst; maybe, maybe not, we'll never know for sure. Wasn't it part of a movie soundtrack?
DeleteYes, I think so. It reminds me of a story in which Frank was telling some of his buddies that he could make a hit out of anything. They challenged his claim and suggested "Old MacDonald's Farm". He took up the challenge, recorded it with a swinging, cocky Sinatra beat and . . . it was a hit! He wasn't a very nice man but he could sing!
DeleteCatalyst; I did not know that, but I never look into histories of singers.
DeleteGreat minds think alike and fools seldom differ.
ReplyDeletenorthsider; that's true
DeleteGreat job on incorporating those old phrases. Happy New Year, River!!
ReplyDeleteMr.Shife; thank you, Happy New Year to you and your family.
DeleteHopefully, that guy will come back to watch the performance. I don't know the movie, but I remember the Doris Day version of that song.
ReplyDeleteVal; I think he will come back to watch. I didn't know Doris Day had a version of that song.
DeleteA haunting story. Well done!
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you :)
DeleteWhat a very, very well written story. So sad. So scary. Mrs Gladstone is great.
ReplyDeleteTuesday I have a seminar on fire protection on trains. Wonderful. I hate to know too much and will have to go by train all the way to Frankfurt to visit you...
Iris; the only sad part is at the end, about the grandfather and grand daughter, the rest is just a hectic meeting about a talent show. The seminar is in Frankfurt? You should take photos, I have never seen Frankfurt. Or any other part of Germany except what I see on blogs.
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