Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. memories 2. thanks 3. running 4. grave 5. collected
and/or:
1. clover 2. regrets 3. marvellous 4. enchanted 5. clock
Here is my story:
I sat beside his grave,
leaning my back and head against the cool black granite. A shaft of sunlight
broke through the clouds, highlighting the emerald four-leaf clover I’d had embedded
above his name. I wished again for an enchanted clock that could turn back
time, but knew it was impossible. As marvellous as such a
thing might be, it did no good to go backwards. Forwards really was the only
option.
We had collected so many memories, happy ones,
with no regrets and I sat back now to remember the day we’d met. He’d been
running then, my Liam, running away from home, running away to join the Navy,
thinking life on a ship that travelled the world would be far enough away from
a dirt poor home with a drunken father in it.
We had both been at the
bus station, him just arriving and headed towards the nearest Naval Recruiting
Office, me waiting for my Aunty Maisie who was coming to live with us now that
Uncle Dan had died. They'd had no children, while my home seemed to be
overflowing with them. I was the eldest, so meeting Aunty had been assigned to
me.
As soon as our eyes
met, we knew. Liam and I were destined to be together. He sat with me while I
waited for Aunty and we exchanged addresses. After we parted the letters to and
from flew around the world with the regularity of sunrise, and when he landed
in my home town four years later we married and began filling our own little house
with children. He stayed in the Navy, going off now and again, though less
often as he got older.
His final trip had been
twenty years ago now, and once again I was alone, the children long gone to homes of
their own, though they visited often and had arrived en-masse for his funeral.
There had been an accident at sea, his ship had hit a reef somehow and sunk
quickly. Bodies were recovered from life rafts, some barely alive, many dead.
Liam among them. His commanding officer had brought Liam home to me and the
Navy had arranged the funeral.
We’d had a good long
life together, for which I now gave thanks. I settled the new flowers into the
old urn and whispered again my hope that we might soon meet again in the hereafter.
Bittersweet tale, and so very well told.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you. I wasn't planning a sad story, but that's what came out.
DeleteVery creative!
ReplyDeleteJenn Jilks; thank you.
DeleteBeautiful. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thnak you for the words, the story wrote itself.
DeleteThat is lovely, River. Heartfelt.
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you.
DeleteA bit of a sad tale but well-written, my friend.
ReplyDeleteCatalyst; thank you. I didn't choose the sad, the story wrote itself.
DeleteHeartbreaking but an excellent story, River.
ReplyDeleteMr. Shife; not too heartbreaking I hope.
DeleteDreams and memories are things I give thanks for. In one dream, I was running to reach the side of a grave where villagers had collected. We all wore clover in our lapels and spoke of our regrets. The deceased had been a marvellous human being whose life seemed to be enchanted like the midnight clock in the tale of "Cinderella".
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nice use of the prompts.
DeleteYorkshire Pudding; I like this, many friends all gathered to speak of the departed one.
DeleteMany a military family has a similar story. It's heartbreaking. You told it very, very well.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; I hope it wasn't too heartbreaking. My ex's military family seems to have missed this with all members safely growing old at home with their families. Thank you.
DeleteA sad tale, but his spirit lives on in the memories and the children. It's better than never having met, and missing out on those experiences.
ReplyDeleteVal; thank you. His spirit does live on in the children and the many grandchildren.
DeleteYou made me cry. I think I would break, or will. I´m not that strong...
ReplyDeleteIris; they were together many many years and she probably did cry at first, but she is old and ready to join him in their heaven soon.
DeleteAnd that is the problem. Ingo is nearly 8 years older than me...
DeleteWell done on the prompts River, a beautiful story and well written, poignant.
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Wisewebwoman; thank you :)
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