Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 

The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by Elephant's Child and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are: 

1. glass 2. equally 3. paying 4. join 5. forage 

and/or: 

1. palace 2. silent 3. bullet 4. stars 5. extraordinary

Also included is Charlotte's colour of the month: clay brown 

Here is my story:

I was the new girl at school and after a week Hannah invited me to join her "Girls Club". "We're very exclusive," she said, "you should be happy we asked you," as her followers nodded and smiled. 'We meet at my house after school and discuss the happenings of the day. The joining fee is three dollars a week to cover the cost of the tea and cakes." I knew what I was about to say probably signed my death warrant as far as schoolyard popularity went, but I'd been there before and knew how to handle being the odd one out. "Three dollars a week to titter and gossip about the rest of the class? I'm not paying that and prefer my mum's home made cakes anyway." I turned and walked away to the shocked gasps and stares of her followers.

Jean met me halfway across the playground. "Did she ask you to join her fancy club?" "She did, and I turned her down," I said. "I gathered as much by the looks on the faces," she said. "I was foolish enough to want to be part of it but after the first week I told her 'no more', I didn't like the way they spoke about everyone else. I got the silent treatment!" "For how long?" I asked. "Oh it's still going on," said Jean, "and I couldn't care less. I did like her house though, it's like a palace with huge glass windows and carpet you could drown in, though my mum says she wouldn't want to have to keep that vacuumed everyday! And we ate the fancy little cakes off crystal plates, can you believe that?"

"I believe you," I said. "I've heard the most extraordinary stories from my mum's new friends about the things going on at Hannah's. They're an Army family just like us, but her dad is a General according to mum and the windows in his car are bullet proof." "I've heard that too," said Jean, "I've also heard that your dad is almost as high in rank, yet you don't put on fancy airs and carry on like movie stars." "It's true, my dad is just one rank below Mr Nelson, or should I say General Nelson, but he prefers that we eat out of clay brown bowls and forage in the veggie patch for our dinners. He says rank doesn't matter all that much, without the fancy uniforms and money, we are all equally human and more Officers and their wives should remember that." 

"My dad is just a Sergeant with a desk job, and when Hannah found that out she said she was glad I didn't come to her meetings anymore. But there's something else I have to tell you Marissa," she glanced around quickly to be sure no one could hear. "They're in debt to the eyeballs!  Hannah's mother spends so much on keeping up appearances, and Hannah's new clothes every year." Just then the bell rang and lunch break was over. We all trooped back inside and I wondered how on earth Hannah would handle being just one of us if worse became worst.

Comments

  1. Nellie Oleson all over again :) This describes those hoity-toity things perfectly. Well don indeed.

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    1. Charlotte; thank you. I don't know who Nellie Oleson is, I shall ask google.

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    2. Now I remember, thank you Google.

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  2. I've met some older Hanna's and their husbands with an empty fancy house because the house costs so much they couldn't afford furniture for it.

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    1. Mike; I didn't meet one personally, but we knew one who hung her husband's uniform to air on the front porch so everyone could see he was a higher rank than the rest of us lowlifes. And I later met a bunch of Army wives who were surprised to hear my husband was a sergeant because, in their words, "You're not at all snooty!" and neither were my kids. We all lived in housing supplied by the Army.

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  3. Brilliant! If only everyone had Marissa's commonsense.

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    1. jabblog; thank you. Commonsense is passed on by the parents.

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  4. Marissa's upbringing is MUCH better than Hannah's. And will serve her well in later life.

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    1. Elephant's Child; yes it will, I based this loosely on some of my own previous life.

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  5. I sat in the pub
    staring into my glass.
    Then another soul entered,
    and sat down near me,
    looking equally in need of ale.

    I invited him to have a cup,
    in the spirit of friendship,
    telling him “I'm paying,
    so join me.”

    Later we adjourned
    to the restaurant,
    to forage the salad bar.

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  6. Forage is a good wood. And you used it quite nicely, River.

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    1. Mr. Shife; it is one of my favourite words.

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  7. Well, she's made a friend, and they can start their own club of ordinary sensible people. Anyone is welcome as long as they don't put on airs and make fun of others.

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    1. Val; I suspect their group of friends is far larger than Hannah's.

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  8. I had to have such a "friend", too in kindy. Her father was the only eye specialist in town. Her mother learned I dunno what but insisted on being called "Dr.". My Mum did. In an ironic way she never got, it was too "funny.
    But, you know what. Her daughter now lives in Sydney. Irony, huh. Money makes the world go round.
    And you know something else, too? Braunschweig is great ;-)
    Nice story! Reminds me of her, and Nelly Olsen. The set of DVDs of "Little House on the prairie" sits by the door, ready to go to my friends´ kids so they learn proper English in a fun way!

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    1. Money certainly does make the world go round and I wouldn't mind having a bit more of it myself, but I don't like what it does to some people who think they are better than everyone else just because they have more in the bank and bigger houses and fancier cars. I remember Little House on The Prairie but don't think I want to watch it again.

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    2. Living near Wolfsburg, which is Volkswagen-City, there are a LOT of "rich", lazy people. And some, like neighbour next door is really "better".
      I like the series, also because it is based on a true story.

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  9. I recall when I was young I was going to join these fancy clubs.

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    1. Dora; this is just about schoolkids and their "cliques".

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  10. Does blogger have the hiccups again? This is last week´s story... I know it is a free tool but... argh.

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  11. Those two sound like they're smart and if they keep on as they've begun, they'll do well in life.

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