Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Wisewebwoman and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. jail 2. bar 3. asphyxiate 4. herring 5. dump truck
and/or:
1. kiwi 2. bowling 3. rifle range 4. permit 5. daiquiri
also including Charlotte's colour of the month: light blue
Here is my story:
“Lucky” Jack stared at
the light blue sky through the bars of his jail cell window. A single tear made
its way down his wrinkled old cheek. He’d promised himself this wouldn’t happen
this time. He was going in for just one drink and then heading home, sober.
As always, his promises
flew out the window with that first daiquiri. With the second, those promises
hopped on a rocket ship to the moon. Jack blamed his ancestors. Generations of past
Pirates ensured that rum ran in his veins instead of blood, though Jack himself
had never sailed the seas.
Usually after a bender,
Jack slept in a corner of the alley behind the Bowling club, being sure to stay
in a sitting position so he wouldn’t asphyxiate should he vomit in his sleep.
But this latest bender had ended differently. He couldn’t understand how it had happened.
According to the policemen
who had arrested him, he’d stolen a dumptruck and driven it all over the local
rifle range, so as well as theft of a truck, he was charged with being on a
rifle range without a permit. And of course driving that truck without a permit
too, since his licence had expired ten years ago.
He turned as he heard
the jailer coming with his breakfast, they knew each other well by now, and “Lucky”
Jack wasn’t surprised to see a plate of pickled herring on the tray. Conrad had
learned that pickled herring helped a lot with the sobering up process for Jack,
and today he had a surprise, a couple of kiwi fruit, “for the vitamin content”
he told Jack.
“I’ll be back to escort
you to the showers,” he told Jack, who was wearing ill-fitting pants and a shirt
dragged out of the spare clothes locker. “Your own clothes should be back from
the cleaners in an hour, then you’ll shower and be sweet for the judge.”
“Lucky” Jack, who wasn’t
feeling terribly lucky just then, hoped the judge would be someone who knew him
and might go easy on the sentencing.
It's time Lucky Jack had some proper good luck.
ReplyDeletejabblog; true. If only he could ignore the call of the rum.
DeleteGreat take, very similar to mine River. Poor old Jack. I do hope he finds his way to getting sober.
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Wisewebwoman; thank you. Jack does need some help to get sober, the call of the rum is strong.
DeleteTHE TALE OF BOB BOWLING
ReplyDeleteWhen I worked at Yatala, I would leave the jail with other wardens to visit a bar close to the seafront called "Asphyxiate". There we would enjoy several beers with herring sandwiches before travelling home in a dump truck driven by a kiwi called Bob Bowling. Last year he was arrested at a rifle range near Myponga. He didn't have a valid permit so now he's an inmate at Yatala. I visited him last week and he said that the thing he most craved was a daiquiri cocktail in tall glass with a light blue stem. Weird or what?
Yorkshire Pudding; you done some homework here, learning the names of a jail and a small town. Asphyxiate is an odd name for a bar, but your story is great. Thank you.
DeletePoor Jack. Well told.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; poor Jack indeed. Perhaps this time he will accept that he needs help to get away from the demon rum that has such a hold on him.
DeleteWow. Another great use of the prompts!!
ReplyDeletePoor Lucky Jack (be nimble, Jack, be quick... thank you for the earworm).
I can only use three of the words.
1999, Darwin, early morno. Fanny Bay Goal, we were the first visitors and Ingo wanted me to go first in this museum-jail. The door to the high security section was so narrow even I had to enter sideways. There was a wall, Ingo could easlily look over, not me, though. Bars were open, clothes thrown on the bench, I stepped backwards on Ingo´s feet... Thank you for the memory (I might´ve told this before? But it was so "well done" I really backed up in fear!)
My Dad (like me) didn´t like fish, but he ate Rollmops, I think this is similar to Herring? Ingo made me taste Rollmops and... no. I had to get that out of my mouth in an instant. Thanks to serviettes (it was in a restaurant in Husum, Germany´s North coast).
Iris; I remember your tales of the Jail, and I remember I found it quite interesting when I visited a jail there, I don't think it was Fanny Bay though. Rollmops are pickled herrings. I don't like them either.
DeleteWe´ve been in three museum-jails in Australia and look here Fanny Bay Gaol :-)
DeleteP.S.... I had to look up "asphyxiate" - what a word. I´m out of breath ;-)
ReplyDeleteIt's a fancy word for choking.
DeleteI like to learn (likely I won´t keep it in mind actively, though!)
DeleteP.S. #2 - I got the calendar at the post office.
ReplyDeleteIris; I shall check my local Post Office next Monday.
DeleteAlso those 2-buck shops.
DeleteSeems like "Lucky" Jack has ran out of luck. Let's hope he learns form this ordeal.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; I think he still has a little luck left. Well, I hope he does.
DeleteHe had good intentions, but it fell apart.
ReplyDeleteNice story R.
Margaret D; he always has good intentions, and they always fall apart, but he doesn't usually steal dumptrucks.
DeleteLucky Jack needs a companion to look out for him, and stop him before he has too much. Or at least before he steals a dump truck!
ReplyDeleteVal; Lucky Jack is a loner and has no family, being an only child and the last of his line. A companion might work, but it's hard to convince someone they've had enough. I think Jack will slow down on his own as he gets older. In my imagination I have him over sixty but not yet seventy.
DeleteSuch a sad story. I know a couple of such "lucky" people who are no longer with us. They just couldn't stay away from their drug of choice.
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