Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Wisewebwoman and can be found here
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: Light Blue
This week's words/prompts are:
1. arithmetic 2. daffodils 3. bicycle 4. graveyard 5. sympathy
and/or:
1. gravy 2. tugboat 3. flag 4. hospital 5. freedom
Here is my story:
The evening knock at
the door was barely audible but the code was well known. Bill walked back into
the dining room and said just three words, “Time to go.” Everyone knew what
that meant and set about readying themselves. The fireplace greedily ate all
photos and IDs, letters and utility bills too.
Within thirty minutes a
mist grey van pulled up in the back alley and everyone piled in with only a
small suitcase each. As the driver took off, a small man in tattered clothing
swept away all traces of the tyres.
“The Boss” and his men
entered the house early next morning and they spread though the rooms in search
of the occupants. No trace could be found. The dinner table had been completely
cleaned, even the tugboat shaped gravy boat had been wiped clean of
fingerprints. A picture on a wall showed a girl on a bicycle in a field of
daffodils against a light blue sky, but it was cut from a magazine, and wasn’t
a real photo.
The Boss’s men cleared
room by room and found only an arithmetic problems book from a nearby school,
dusty and well worn, forgotten at the back of a wardrobe but easily twenty
years old. It couldn’t possibly have belonged to any member of the family The
Boss was after. He ground his teeth in frustration.
“Flag this place,” he
said to his men, “mark it as useless, but we’ll come back for one more check
next week.” They wiped away their own fingerprints and left as quietly as they
had come. An unseen curtain several doors down twitched a Sylvia took notice of
them and their mode of transportation. She noted they drove past the hospital
turn off and headed towards the graveyard.
“Wrong direction you scumbags,”
she muttered, without a trace of sympathy for those drug smuggling crooks, and
silently thanked whoever had warned the family who now still had their freedom.
A few hours later, Sylvia phoned the police and let them know “The Gang” had
been seen and The Boss was with them this time. Then she took that phone apart
and baked it in the oven at 400 degrees.
Very well done River, I found my own inner tension building up as I read, not knowing where it was all going. Those kinds of days could be upon us shortly.
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Wisewebwoman; thank you. I based this on stories I've read of families in Witness Protection.
DeleteThis could have occurred at any time in the past 80 years, apart from the 'phone, of course. Nice one, River.
ReplyDeletejabblog; thank you. I thought baking the phone so calls cannot be traced was a good idea.
DeleteThis is intriguing. I am so glad that the family has friends and supporters and hope they stay safe.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; thank you. They will stay safe thanks to people like Sylvia and the door knocker code.
DeleteThis was riveting.
ReplyDeleteKathy G; thank you.
DeleteVery interesting, River.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteAfter my arithmetic tutorial, I counted daffodils as I rode my bicycle to the graveyard where my grandmother is buried. On the day we laid her to rest, other mourners expressed their sympathy to me. I remember so many things about her such as the beef gravy she served in a ceramic tugboat jug that had a Greek flag on the bow. And I recall my many visits to the hospital where ultimately she died - thereby achieving the freedom from life's troubles that she so often craved. And of course I picture her light blue eyes which will forever sparkle in my memories of her - Edna Ramsbottom (1921 - 2018) R.I.P..
ReplyDeleteYorkshire Pudding; very nice memories there, thank you.
DeleteI love the last line! And the details of the picture on the wall.
ReplyDeleteVal; thank you. Details are important as long as they aren't overdone.
DeleteWow. Really, great story!!! How do you do that? I think I am the most boring person in the world, I could never come up with such a story! Your mind is brilliant.
ReplyDeleteIris; thank you. If I knew how I do it, I could teach others, but I really have no idea. Some ideas come from books I read, but then I change this or that and add to it, so it isn't like copying. Or maybe I'll remember one sentence or even just a name from a book long ago and the story will form itself around that.
DeleteWell told! It has to be hard, disappearing and having to start over this way.
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