Wednesday's Words on a Friday

 The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.

The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.

If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.

This month the words/prompts are supplied by River and can be found here

This week's words/prompts are:

1.property  2.barrels  3.dingo  4.down  5.silent  6.doubt

Charlotte's colour of the month is Ocean Twilight

Here is my story:

“Get off my property!” the old man yelled in his thin, quavering voice.

Brandishing a rusty old shotgun, he threatened to “let both barrels loose on ya!”

The younger man opened the door of his jeep and waved a white handkerchief. “Grampy! It’s me! Sammy!” He stepped down slowly and took off his hat.

“Can’t be,” said the old man. “Sammy is just a little boy.”

“I’ve grown up Grampy, I went away to school and now I have come home.”

“Everyone went away,” said the old man, lowering the shotgun. “Everyone left me. Even Julia and Sammy.”

“I’m Sammy,” said the younger man. “Julia was my mother and she died from the Covid. But I came back Grampy, I’m here now.”

The old man stood silent, his faded eyes, once a deep ocean blue, showed doubt as Sammy walked towards him. Sammy reached for the shotgun and gently took it from old Dave’s hands, gladly noticing it wasn't loaded.

“Remember the dingo puppy you let me raise when it’s mother was found dead on the road?”

“You named it Jack,” said Dave, looking up at last. “Sammy? You really here? I’m not dreamin’?”

“I’ve come to help, Grampy, we can get the home patch growing again, we can start with vegetables and a few chickens. I have a friend with me, her name is Margaret. Can she come inside out of the sun?”



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  1. Romance and happiness are in the air.

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    1. jabblog; maybe a little, but safety and care for Grampy too.

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  2. Oh, such a bitter-sweet story! Thank you!

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    1. Iris; thank you, I don't know where my mind foud this one. It just wrote itself.

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    2. That´s the only way my uncreative mind works... the words mean something from real life or I´m out. Sad...

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  3. Very nice and like Iris said, bittersweet for sure. Hope he let her inside and I hope they got their patch going again.

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    1. The Happy Whisk; thank you. Of course Dave lets Margaret inside, he loves and trusts Sammy and is happy that someone has remembered him after all these years.

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  4. Oh my, R, what a sweet story. The poor man must have been so pleased to have family back +1.

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    1. Margaret D; thank you. Dave is happy to finally have someone to talk to and help him, he has been lonely and alone for many years and getting old too, unable to care for a veggie patch on his own.

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  5. Wow - a few little tricks in that one. Well done.
    I sort of played - https://jeanieinparadise.blogspot.com/2026/03/five-photos-on-friday.html

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    1. jeanie; thank you, I'll pop over and read in a minute

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  6. Sometimes stories just pop up after reading the words. This is a good one.

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    1. Charlotte; I like it when the words write themselves. Thank you

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  7. Dave must be lonely so it's nice of Sammy to come up. Good use of the prompts.

    Have a lovely day.

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    1. lissa; Dave has been lonely a long time, he lives a distance away from any towns.

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  8. Jack is a good name for a dog! I'll take that as a nod to my little heeler/dachshund.

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