Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Cindi and can be found here
This week's prompt is:
A picture is worth 1000 words. Write at least 100 words about the following image.
Here is my story: (slightly more than 100 words)
While Daniel slept,
Michael quietly repacked the suitcases and put them in the boot of the car, used
alcohol wipes to clean all surfaces touched by both of them, then set his watch
alarm for 3am and quickly fell asleep. When the alarm woke him, he gently shook
Danny awake, telling him it was time to leave and he could continue sleeping in
the car. He used cotton gloves to close the motel room door and to push the keys
into the night-time slot by the office door, then quietly drove off into the
night. He knew Daniel would have twice as many questions once he woke up and
spent his driving time working out how much to tell him.
He decided to tell
everything, Daniel was almost nine years old and smart enough to understand.
Michael chose back roads as much as possible, skirting around small towns and
passing quickly through larger ones without stopping. Just as the sky was beginning
to lighten with the dawn, he reached his destination. Driving all the way
around the old stone cottage, he parked the car in a small shed completely
hidden from view by a grove of trees. Fishing in the small well, he found the
large iron key and placed the suitcases inside the cottage, then went back to
the car to wake Daniel.
Looking around
sleepily, Daniel asked, “Where are we Dad?” “Come inside and I will tell you
while we get a fire going and get warm. There are breakfast foods already
inside I think,” said Michael. Starting a fire in the old stove was easier than
he remembered and as they crunched dry cereals and drank juice, Michael told
Daniel the whole story. “You’ve watched a lot of crime shows on TV, Dan, so you
know what lawyers do, they collect evidence, then go to court for the trial and
put the bad guys in jail, right?”
“Yes,” said Daniel, “and
Mum is a lawyer who does that, but why can’t she come with us and where is here
exactly?” “Here,” said Michael, “is a very old cottage that once belonged to a
relative of mine, a great grandmother’s cousin, I think, and as the older
generations have died the cottage was passed on down and now it belongs to me. So we
are going to live here for the whole of the school holidays and hopefully Mum
can join us. But in the meantime, the people she is trying to put in jail, have
got relatives who don’t want that to happen. These guys are really, really bad,
so until the trial and after, Mum is being kept hidden away by the police, so
the bad guys can’t hurt her to stop the trial.”
“They might kill her and
come after us??” said Daniel with wide eyes. “That’s why we had to run away
without Mum?” “That’s right,” said Michael. “But your Mum is safe and
absolutely no one but her and me know about this place and she doesn’t even
know how to get here, so no one can follow her.”
“Then how will she find us when the trial is over?’ asked Daniel. Michael said, “The Police
chief and I have worked out a system of coded messages to be put in certain
newspapers and when we get the right message, I will go to a certain town in
the middle of the night and Mum will be brought there too and I will bring her
here.”
“Will I have to wait
here all by myself?” asked Dan. “Yes,” said Michael, “and when Mum gets here we
all have to have different names, just like in Witness Protection. So starting
now, you decide what your new name will be, because when school starts you have
to be used to it. Try to think of something with the same initial so we don’t
have to re-label all your school things. Our last name will still be Smith,
because it is so common.”
“There’s not much that
starts with D,” said Daniel, “and I don’t like Donald” “You’ll think of
something,” said Michael. “I am going to be Martin and your Mum will probably
be Elizabeth, she’s always liked that name.” “I will be David,” said Daniel.
This is a clever twist in your continuing tale. I didn't expect it and really like it.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
DeleteThis is much more interesting than the direction of parental kidnapping I original thought this was going. Hope it all works out for them.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; thank you. I didn't want it to be a kidnapping.
DeleteIf he's telling the child the truth and the whole story, then i hope it all goes just as they planned. It can't be easy to have to run off and start over like that.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; he is telling the truth and I think things do go as planned.
DeleteI hope sometime you will tell us there new names.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on and stay safe
Dora; the new names are in the story here. Michael becomes Martin, Eleanor, (the mum) becomes Elizabeth and Daniel becomes David.
DeleteSchool holiday time here R. Mum is a lawyer and all are in witness protection with new names a coming - interesting story.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; I'm glad you liked it. Tough time ahead with the criminal trial, but it all works out.
DeleteOw. At age 9 that is a lot to understand and comprehend ( and no one wants to have the name Donald by now, LOL).
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I don´t even know if we have this concept in Germany at all - start a new life like that?
Iris Flavia; I don't know if we have Witness Protection type things here either, but I hope so. Age 9 is young, but he knows a lot because his mum is a lawyer and he likes to watch crime shows on tv, like my kids did.
DeleteI do, too, Blue Bloods and such (who can resist Tom Selleck?!)
DeleteYes, my Nieces are like adults already. Scary. The babies are gone for good... The big Niece even speaks of "Corinna"...
A very intriguing story. Good writing.
ReplyDeleteGod bless
Victor SE Moubarak; thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteThat was a nice twist. I like it, as I trusted Michael from the first words of your story. :D I hope everything goes off well, and that we will have more chapters coming up.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you. I don't know that there is more chapters. I write where the words or pictures take me.
DeleteInteresting challenge ... interesting story. I'll be back for more.
ReplyDeleteTom; welcome to drifting and thank you. I don't continue the same story every week, it depends on where the prompts take me.
DeleteDidn't see this twist coming. I'm glad the mom is not the bad guy!
ReplyDeleteVal; I'm glad too about the mum.
DeleteI guess I have a more cynical mind because I sort of maybe think Michael is lying to his son, who says what he is saying is all true? Of all the terrible things in the world, perhaps it's best to be on the optimistic side so let's believe Michael and hope the kid gets a happy ending.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day.