Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Charlotte and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. gratitude 2. thistle 3. a pod of dolphins 4. dance 5. pharmacy 6. crumbs
and/or:
1. fog 2. nutcracker 3. belt 4. mushrooms 5. room 6. remember
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: golden yellow
Here is my story: (I skipped a few words)
“You have my eternal gratitude,” she said hoarsely as I helped her out of the thistle bed she had become entangled in. “You’re lucky I came this way,” I replied. “my name is Khoral Kai and you are..?” “I am Jennifer Amitri. I don’t suppose you have a little water with you? I’ve been stuck here for what seems like hours and my throat is as dry as a desert.” I handed her the spare bottle of sparkling water from my backpack and watched as she guzzled down half of it in one go.
Finally stopping for breath, Jennifer thanked me again and asked, “I don’t suppose you saw a tourist bus anywhere along the way? I wandered away from the group, I saw a pod of dolphins a little way out and walked along watching as they did their dance amongst the waves. Then I fell on some loose gravel and landed in the thistles.” “Then you must be the Jenny they are all frantically calling for,” I said. “You wandered quite a long way, I passed the bus at least fifteen minutes ago. I was out here to see the dolphins also. Come along back down the trail now and we’ll have to hurry a bit, there’s a fog rolling in, see the low cloud over to the South? By the Lighthouse. That’s the fog and moving quite quickly too.
“So it is,” she said. “I remember just how fast it comes in though I haven’t been here in many years now.” “We are almost at the bus now,” I said, perhaps one of the others has a brush you can borrow to get the bits of thistle out of your golden yellow hair.” Jenny gasped as her hands flew to her head. “Oh I hope I don’t look too unkempt! I suppose I should be glad I didn’t scratch my face, the thistles were quite thick.” “You do have one small scratch beside your ear,” I said. “I shall ask the bus driver to stop at the pharmacy for some antiseptic wipes and hope he isn’t too inconvenienced by it,” she said. “I have already made them terribly late by getting lost.”
“I shall speak to him,” I said. “I think perhaps he will just be glad you are safe and sound.” “Thank you again. Coral is an unusual name for a man, do you spell it with a ‘C’ like the coral that grows and forms reefs?” “No, it is spelled with a ‘KH’, I said. “KHORAL”, I live in that Lighthouse which is now shrouded by the fog and look! here is the bus and all your friends.” “You are a long way from home, how did you get here? Do you need a ride home? The driver might not mind one extra passenger, the bus has plenty of room.”
“We shall ask then,” said Khoral, “if my bicycle can
be hooked onto the back of the bus. I would like to ride with you and your
friends. It can be an adventure that I weave into a story to tell the village
children at our next story-telling afternoon.”
I am impressed! You're a good writer, River. 🙂
ReplyDeleteApacheDug; thank you :)
DeleteIt is always nice to read more about Khoral Kai. Great use of the prompts.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; I plan to have him invite the ladies to the next Farmer's Market.
DeleteLove all of the choices that you made, River. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteMr.Shife; thank you :)
DeleteKhoral Kai always seems to turn up at just the right moment.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; he does!
DeleteYippeeee, Khoral Kai is back! And helpful, intelligent and warm-hearted as ever - thank you for the morning-smile!
ReplyDeleteIris; he is always helpful and warm-hearted, that's the way people were on his planet.
DeleteAnd many here, too :-)
DeleteWe could all do with a Khoral Kai in our lives (I may have made that comment, before)
ReplyDeletejabblog; yes we could.
DeleteGratitude is sometimes like a thistle that you must grasp to pull from the earth. Once I swam with a pod of dolphins in a kind of marine dance. That night I ended up in a pharmacy seeking medication and crumbs of comfort. A fog descended upon the bay like dry ice clouds in a production of "The Nutcracker". I tightened my belt - the one that is decorated with golden yellow mushrooms and left the bar room of Elsie's beachfront tavern. It was a time I remember so well
ReplyDeleteYorkshire Pudding; I wonder now what it was you drank that brought on such a dream. I like the idea of the beachfront tavern. Nicely done.
DeleteI played this time also. Sound like a wonderful friendship.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on, and stay safe.
Dora; thank you. I shall come and read your story.
DeleteAs always you wove the words into a great tale. I think I have seen busses with bicycles on the back. Hope he was able to ride with his friends.
ReplyDeleteGranny Annie; I have seen buses with bikes on the back too. This one probably had a rack for them so Khoral was able to get a ride and chat with the ladies.
DeleteI wonder where the bus was headed, and what adventure awaits Khoral Kai.
ReplyDeleteVal; the bus was most likely headed back to whichever town it came from with the visiting ladies so Khoral has plenty of time for talking and telling them about his little lighthouse village and inviting them to visit.
DeleteGreat story. The bus, where was it headed? What was the destination?
ReplyDeleteSusan Kane; they call it a tourist bus because it picks up people from the assisted living home and takes them on tours around the country side once a week, then after tea or coffee at a cafe they get taken back to the home.
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