Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by Sean Jeating and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. daily 2. friendly 3. human 4.nodding 5. wife
and/or:
1. bags 2. gentlemen 3. infinity 4. steps 5. veil
Also included is Charlotte's colour of the month: Dahlia Yellow
Here is my story:
After several years in
Lighthouse Village, Khoral had become quite accustomed to human life, his daily
walks and meetings with friendly people helped a lot with that. The isolated
area was a quiet life with mostly old-fashioned values, gentlemen helping their
wives with bags when they were shopping, holding doors open for people to walk
though, polite to each other. And the story times with the children were a
truly amazing part of each day. Today Khoral had spoken to Terry as he painted a
cheerful dahlia yellow onto the window frames of the houseboat, nodding
absently as his wife Molly dictated yet another list of things they would need
to stock up for the coming winter.
Khoral recalled the
last town meeting, where people had mentioned the theft of several old quilts
from washing lines. Everyone was keeping an eye out, but the thief had yet to
be caught. With winter fast coming it was unacceptable that anyone should be
homeless and stealing to keep warm. What was the person eating? Did he or she
have shoes? The local Police Officer, Sergeant Bennett, had arranged for
several me to have powerful police flashlights and do a walk-around every night
and three women had volunteered to have older, slightly shabby, quilts and
blankets left on their washing lines overnight.
Khoral turned now to
walk along the path leading to his lighthouse home. As always, with Christmas
approaching, his thoughts turned to his home planet Zordax, now nothing but a
cloud of cosmic dust. He had come to earth every year for the Christmas period
because he loved seeing how the different countries celebrated. Then one year, while staying near the village
he had seen the asteroid smash his home planet with family and friends lost
forever. He was left stranded with nothing but his clothes and violin.
On this anniversary of
that day, as always, Khoral would climb the steps to the highest deck in the lighthouse
and look towards his far away galaxy, always at midnight when the stars were
brightest and staring into the Universe could make a person appreciate the real
meaning of infinity. His inner veil would come down and the tears would fall
and he would not stop them. Tomorrow would be another day and he would smile again.
Poor Khoral, condemned for ever to live with only the memories of his home planet.
ReplyDeletejabblog; it is sad but he has many friends here on Earth now, although nothing will ever make him forget.
DeleteOK, I think I can join a bit:
ReplyDelete"On a daily basis I try to be friendly and act as a human.
I try not to be a nodding person - I ask myself what is right and what is wrong and I try to be a good wife (often even manage).
We all carry our bags. Into infinity, of course and luckily Ingo is at times one of the gentlemen that make your life easier, if by helping us up a few steps.
I can always be honest, never need to wear a veil."
Now I´ll read what Khoral´s new adventure is!
Iris; this is nice and I am glad Ingo is a gentleman who helps.
DeleteA very good use of the words.
DeleteOh boy. At the caravan park in Perth/Madeley... I was so dumb to wash and hang underwear - amongst T-shirts, trousers etc. Was stolen. Meep. Stupid underwear!!! Who does that?! Wasn´t even pretty!!!
ReplyDeleteSo sad we don´t have quilts here in Germany. Poor Khoral. What a Christmas he had back then.
Never stop tears. And always smile again.
Easily said... hope we always manage this...
Iris; people steal anything from anywhere if it is what they want, even here I try to keep an eye on the washing line when I have things out there because people steal.
DeleteI thought you had quilts in Germany? Maybe you call them by another name. Feather beds? Doonas? A casing filled with something to keep warm, feathers or down or artificial filling?
It's good to cry when you need to then the smile comes easier later.
Poor, poor Khoral. Forever missing his homeland and those he loved. And what an exceptional being he is. Yet another great use of the prompts.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; forever missing and being not human he will live a much longer forever. He has friends who understand and help and maybe one day he will have someone to stand with him as he cries. Someone to hug.
DeleteOn a daily basis, I try to be friendly to every other human I meet, even nodding at the wife of Knuckles Malinauskas the local drug baron as she carries little plastic bags of cocaine to gentlemen of the criminal fraternity. They say it is from Colombia and if you ingest enough of it it will take you to infinity and beyond just like Buzz Lightyear. Yesterday, I saw her on the steps of St Mary's Church wearing a dahlia yellow wedding veil which was confusing as I assumed she was already married to Knuckles.
ReplyDeleteYorkshire Pudding; very nicely done. Did you borrow the Malinauskas name from our current SA Premier?
DeleteNo. That is pure co-incidence Elsie. I thought your premier was Buzz Lightyear.
DeleteHe has made the best life he can under the circumstances, and my heart goes out to him.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; he has always been adaptable, but being unable to ever go home again and share his adventures gives him a day of grief every year.
DeleteA day of grief for his lost home. I feel with Khoral, and ... well haven't all we old ones lodst out heom in some way?
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; yes we have, but not as badly as Khoral who saw his planet explode into dust from an asteroid. It's good that he is able to cry for a day, I think it helps.
DeleteKhoral needs his day of grief. But he has adapted remarkably well to living among humans, and is making the best of it. I wonder if all his people were so compassionate, or if he's a special individual.
ReplyDeleteVal; all his people were that way and crying was unknown to them, it was a totally new experience for Khoral when he cried at seeing his planet destroyed. It has helped him feel more human.
DeleteUff! I took my intention for my deed. But now: I admire your phantasy. A fine read it was once again.
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