Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by River (that's me) and can be found here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. entice
2. excuse
3. blackbird
4. swaying
5. better
6. mechanical
7. disorder
and/or:
1. peeling
2. clouds
3. scrambled
4. solid
5. curio
6. float
7. fountain
Here is my story: (another chapter in the long running saga)
Molly heard Terry say "we'll be there as soon as we can" and after he hung up the phone and entered the lounge room, she stopped him with a single raised finger. "Make any excuse you want, nothing will entice me out of this chair and away from the fire. My back is still aching after the hours we spent clearing out the disorder left in the houseboat." "Fair enough," said Terry. "That was Sergeant Bennett on the phone, he's made Aiden and Cynthia look through some 'wanted' photos to see if they recognise anyone. Aiden is being tight-lipped, but Cynthia pointed out Ben Falls; Ray wants us, or one of us, to go and see if it's the same Ben Falls we had on the houseboat." "You'd better get going then," said Molly, "you'll want to get home soonish, those clouds look like they're going to send down a solid wall of rain before dark. If you bring me some vegetables and a couple of bowls I can be peeling vegetables for dinner, unless you'd prefer scrambled eggs? we have those fresh eggs from the market." "Scrambled eggs would be wonderful, easy too, I can cook them and bring them to you here by the fire," said Terry as he pulled on his heavy coat.
Molly settled the blanket closer around her legs and gazed into the fire. It was electric, but made to look like real flames on logs and quite soothing to watch. She heard the car leave and hoped Terry wouldn't be gone too long. Her eyes began to close and Molly dozed off as the warmth eased into her bones. "I hope I feel better by tomorrow," she thought, "there is still so much to do," then sleep claimed her. She dreamed briefly of being permanently stiff, a mechanical version of herself, then sank deeper into the velvet blackness. As Terry exited the car at the Police Station, he could hear Aiden and Cynthia screaming insults at each other. He opened the front door to see the receptionist speedily writing down in shorthand everything they said. "Doesn't that drive you batty?" asked Terry. "It does," said George, who was on desk duty while the regular receptionist was collecting packages at the Post Office. "Ray says the more they fight, the more likely they are to say things they don't want us to know and I've heard some good stuff this morning. For instance, Aiden and Ben are pals from way back and Cynthia is just a petty thief who got roped in with the promise of a big payday. A bigger problem of course is the whereabouts of Ben Falls, even Aiden doesn't seem to know." "I'll just pop into Ray's office then and have a look at the photos," said Terry, hanging up his coat.
Trickier and trickier. I love how you worked all the words into your storyline. I hope for a well deserved punishment for that trio.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; thank you. I didn't use all the words, my brain hit a road block. but I'm working on it.
DeleteThat just shows how good a storyteller you are, I did not notice the missing words ;)
DeleteCharlotte :)
DeleteOooh. And the tension mounts. Looking forward to more - and very impressed at how you used these tricky prompts.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child; tension is definitely mounting between Aiden and Cynthia, with each having past history not known to the other.
DeleteI am really enjoying this twisty story. Feel sorry for those that have to listen to the two bicker but maybe they will spill all the beans accidentally.
ReplyDeleteArkansas Patti; they're spilling enough beans to make the Sergeant delve further into their history.
DeleteNow you caught my curiosity! Will Ben turn up?
ReplyDeleteCold gray clouds scrambled across a dark sky as Joseph carefully opened the door to an ancient house. It had been left alone, almost swaying in the coming storm, but once had been a solid home where families had lived in better times.
A curio cabinet had been left behind, almost full of someone’s collectibles. Peeling wallpaper dripped from time past and plates were set. All rooms were part of frozen time, and framed photos seemed to float over the walls.
I gotta get outta here, Joseph muttered. No excuses, he just needed to close the door behind him. Outdoors enticed him, so off he ran. But one photo would haunt him for the rest of his life.
Susan Kane; Ben does eventually get found, but not soon.
DeleteI like your story, you used the words well. The house does seem quite spooky.
Well done, Susan Kane!
DeleteA good chapter. Those two would make a saint want to go on vacation to get away.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; those two get what's coming to them.
DeleteI get it, not wanting to move from a chair.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on and stay safe
Dora; me too, especially after a hard day cleaning up a big mess.
DeleteWell, you managed to use all the words in your story.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
Victor SE Moubarak; no I did not. I missed five of them.
DeleteDo you write first and then add the prompts where they fit? You always do such a great job.
ReplyDeleteP.S. my story is posted on my blog.
DeleteGranny Annie; Thank you.
DeleteI wait for the prompts first, then write the story to fit them in. Even when it is my turn t select the prompts, I choose words and schedule them in advance, so I forget them and get surprised later by what I chose. I find it doesn't work to write something and then try to fit in the words.
And now I have written - and re-written my (first part of) Words for Wednesday. Thank you for the words!
ReplyDeleteCharlotte; I think I read it yesterday, but I'll read it again later.
DeleteVery well written again!
ReplyDeleteAnd sounds familiar. Ingo bought me a mini fireplace, just electrical, but it makes me feel cozy :-)
Hmmm, now I really want to know what the three were up to and how they gonna pay for it.
No honor among thieves! They'll rat on each other eventually.
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