Wednesday's Words on a Friday
The original Words for Wednesday was begun by Delores and eventually taken over by a moveable feast of participants when Delores had computer troubles. Sadly, Delores has now closed her blog forever due to other problems.
The aim of the words is to encourage us to write. A story, a poem, whatever comes to mind.
If you are posting an entry on your own blog, please let us know so we can come along to read it and add a few encouraging words.
This month the words/prompts are supplied by ME and can be found right here
This week's words/prompts are:
1. off the beaten track
2. cheeky old fella's goin' fishin'
3. bouquet
4. marketing
5. cape
6. crease
Also including Charlotte's colour of the month: Olive Green.
Here is my story:
A slight frown made a
crease in Chuck’s forehead as he pulled the van to a stop. He looked at the
barely visible trail in the undergrowth ahead, then at Dave. “We seem to have
gotten off the beaten track mate,” he said, “you sure you know how to read a map?”
“I’ve been reading your maps for years,” declared Dave, “how about I hand it over to Jerry, would you prefer that?” “No good mate, he’s sleepin’ “ said
Chuck. “Hand it over and show me where you think we are.”
Dave handed him the map
and pointed to a spot near the blue line of a river, then got out to stretch
his legs. His olive green tracksuit blended so well with the surrounding
foliage, Chuck almost couldn’t see him once he’d stepped far enough away. “Put
ya hat on!” he shouted and Dave immediately put his bright red hat over his mud
brown hair. Gerry snorted in his sleep and let go a rolling fart as he got more
comfortable under his cape. Chuck was out of the van so quick, he almost fell
over his own feet. Gerry’s farts were
legendary and no one needed to breathe that particular “bouquet.”
He pulled his bandanna
over his nose and quickly wound down all the windows and left the doors open
too. Looking around, he called to Dave, “here’s probably as good a place as anywhere
to stop for a rest. I’ll find the compass and that book of trails, maybe we can
work out where we are.” Dave came back
saying, “there’s a dry river bed through those trees and downhill a bit, probably
the one on the map. How long is it since anyone came this way? All this second growth
under the trees might be newish and this little trail might be the right one.”
“You’ve never steered
me wrong all these years,” said Chuck. “Stay away from the van until the air
clears in there and show me the river bed.” He carried the compass as they
walked and soon he was matching North and various landmarks on the old map. “You’re
right again Davey boy,” he said, “this is it and that river is as dry as a
bone. We won’t get any fishin’ done there.” They walked back towards the van
and looked at the newly scratched sides, where the words “Cheeky Old Men Goin’
Fishin’” were still visible through the dust.
“I think we might need
to buy a newer map,” said Dave. His sharp eyes spotted something several miles
off to the west. “ I see a few buildings over that way, but no way to get to
them, we’ll just have to keep followin’ the trail until it widens or we find a
place to turn around and get back onto the main road.” “That might be our best
option,” said Chuck. “Find a town, get a bit of marketing done for our dinners
and see if we can get a newer map. But let’s not buy any more of those cans of chili.”
I can picture this - a disappointing fishing trip.
ReplyDeleteI tried again this week but came up with nothing . . .
jabblog; I'm glad you could picture it, thank you.
DeleteWhat a field trip :D
ReplyDeleteI love your writing, it makes such funny images inside my head.
PS: I have used the Words for Wednesday now - only a day late :)
DeleteCharlotte; thank you, I enjoy getting funny images in my head too from reading other's stories.
DeleteSometimes you don't find the good fishing spot. I do hope they find one soon, and yes, no more chili.
ReplyDeletemessymimi; that's true, especially when the place you are seeking hasn't been travelled to before. Definitely no more chilli.
DeleteDo like your story R and good use of the prompts.
ReplyDeleteMargaret D; thank you.
DeleteI don't if my son could read a map.
ReplyDeleteDora; map reading is a very handy skill, especially if the GPS fails.
DeleteI remember having a paper-map only, traveling your beautiful country - luckily we had no farting Gerry!!!
ReplyDeleteYou really make "bouquet" icky, LOL!
No more chili - you come up with the greatest stories and I am back (minus farts etc) to 1999!
Thank you, River :-)
Iris; I still have paper maps, one of Australia, one of South Ausralia and city maps of Adelaide, Melbourne and Sydney. I need to buy one of Western Australia and the Northern Territory so I can follow my brother and wife's road trip with a pencil.
DeleteLuckily most bouquets aren't icky. I don't even like chilli, but my sons do.
In our bedroom is still a large paper-map of Australia :-) Unused, just for memories.
DeleteIf unsure we rather go there than online. HA! We´re old and we´re glad about that. Wonder if the Nieces could read the map!
Heh, heh! I unfortunately felt like I was right there with them! Well done.
ReplyDeleteVal; unfortunate or not, I'm happy when people say "I felt like I was right there". Thank you.
DeleteIn this link I wrote the story I mention this blog and the prompt, I also made an image with AI and originally wrote the story by hand and photographed it. Αντιγραφή και επικόλληση https://peripetiazois.blogspot.com/
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